by Joe Dever
(104) Replaced each occurrence of ‘the die’ with ‘the dice’.
(105) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.
(106) Replaced ‘add +1 to’ with ‘add 1 to’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(107) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Replaced ‘Kai pathsmanship’ with ‘Magnakai Pathsmanship’.
(109) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(110) Replaced ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’. Replaced ‘A large force of Bhanarian cavalry have’ with ‘A large force of Bhanarian cavalry has’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(111) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(112) Replaced ‘position, then’ with ‘position, and then’.
(115) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Net’. Replaced ‘add +1 to’ with ‘add 1 to’. Replaced ‘A gout of sticky fibres gush from your hand and engulf’ with ‘A gout of sticky fibres gushes from your hand and engulfs’.
(116) Replaced ‘says: ‘please’ with ‘says: ‘Please’. Added a period after ‘turn to 108’.
(117) Replaced ‘tiger's head emblem’ with ‘tiger's-head emblem’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(118) Replaced ‘Some descend’ with ‘Some of the fissures descend’. Replaced ‘western rim’ with ‘eastern rim’ as Sections 2 and 130 indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning.
(119) Replaced ‘distant corridor’ with ‘distant corridors’.
(120) Replaced ‘Shavane, ‘he'll’ with ‘Shavane. ‘He'll’. Replaced ‘Klorva’ with ‘Potion of Klorva’. Replaced ‘your backpack’ with ‘your Backpack’.
(121) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.
(122) Replaced ‘sable stallion’ with ‘stable stallion’. Replaced ‘horse, then’ with ‘horse, and then’. Replaced ‘20 Imperial Cavalry’ with ‘twenty Imperial Cavalry’. Replaced ‘Kirusami’ with ‘kirusami’.
(123) Replaced ‘imperial family’ with ‘Imperial Family’.
(124) Replaced ‘(= 20 Ren)’ with ‘(= 5 Ren each)’.
(126) Replaced ‘the die’ with ‘the dice’. Replaced ‘pass then’ with ‘pass them’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(127) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(128) Replaced ‘Special Items list’ with ‘list of Special Items’.
(129) Replaced ‘signal, then’ with ‘signal, and then’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(132) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(133) Replaced ‘Go Captain’ with ‘Go, Captain’.
(135) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Replaced ‘gutteral’ with ‘guttural’.
(137) Replaced ‘Mitzu, ‘please’ with ‘Mitzu. ‘Please’. Replaced ‘with your Bow’ with ‘with a Bow’ since you may not necessarily be carrying a Bow.
(139) Replaced ‘Special Items list’ with ‘list of Special Items’.
(140) Replaced ‘steam cannon’ with ‘steam-cannon’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘the imperial family of Chai are hiding here’ with ‘the Imperial Family of Chai is hiding here’.
(141) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(142) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.
(143) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’.
(144) Replaced ‘improved weapon skill’ with ‘Weaponmastery’ to avoid confusion with the Kai Weaponskill Discipline.
(145) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘15 minutes’ with ‘fifteen minutes’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’. Replaced ‘the Sergeant’ with ‘the sergeant’.
(146) Replaced ‘agarashi’ with ‘Agarashi’.
(147) Replaced ‘Superior’ with ‘Superior or higher’. Replaced ‘skills, or’ with ‘skills, if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, or’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(148) Replaced ‘its cawing and the flapping of its wings startles’ with ‘its cawing and the flapping of its wings startle’. Replaced ‘Javain Bandit’ with ‘Javaian Bandit’. Replaced ‘Javain bandit’ with ‘Javaian bandit’ in the illustration's caption.
(149) Replaced ‘hard pressed’ with ‘hard-pressed’. Replaced ‘manouvering’ with ‘manoeuvring’.
(150) Replaced each occurrence of ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’.
(151) Replaced ‘western rim’ with ‘eastern rim’ as Sections 2 and 130 indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning.
(152) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(155) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘High above you’ with ‘High above, you’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.
(156) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(157) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(159) Replaced ‘advanced Mastery’ with ‘advanced mastery’. Replaced ‘an hypnoptic’ with ‘a hypnotic’.
(160) Replaced each occurrence of ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(161) Replaced ‘sunbreak’ with ‘daybreak’.
(162) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow of Atonement’.
(163) Replaced ‘duststorm’ with ‘dust storm’. Replaced ‘out of Rakholi’ with ‘out from Rakholi’.
(164) Replaced ‘the chest’ with ‘their chests’. Replaced ‘icy-fiend’ with ‘ice-fiend’.
(165) Replaced ‘spell words’ with ‘spell-words’. Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(166) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’. Replaced ‘dice, and have’ with ‘dice and have’.
(167) Replaced ‘steam cannon’ with ‘steam-cannon’. Replaced ‘turn to 263’ with ‘turn to 116’ to bring Section 116 back into the adventure. Replaced ‘imperial family’ with ‘Imperial Family’.
(168) Replaced ‘none of these skills or rank, or the Backpack Item’ with ‘neither of these skills, nor the Backpack Item, or have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
(170) Swapped the destination of the links, so that now a score of 6 or lower now leads to Section 55 which has the larger ENDURANCE penalty, whereas a score of 7 or more now leads to Section 285.
(171) Replaced ‘imperial family’ with ‘Imperial Family’.
(172) Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Added ‘You must fight this combat without your Kai Weapon.’ (cf. Section 139).
(173) Replaced ‘Mitzu, ‘please’ with ‘Mitzu. ‘Please’. Replaced ‘with your Bow’ with ‘with a Bow’ since you may not necessarily be carrying a Bow.
(174) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘add +1 to’ with ‘add 1 to’. Replaced ‘rib-cage�
�� with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘combat skill’ with ‘COMBAT SKILL’.
(175) Replaced ‘power word’ with ‘power-word’.
(178) Replaced ‘Deliverance, and’ with ‘Deliverance and’.
(179) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’.
(181) Replaced ‘icy-fiends’ with ‘ice-fiends’.
(182) Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(183) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(184) Replaced ‘steam cannon’ with ‘steam-cannon’.
(185) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘half ie,’ with ‘half, i.e.’.
(186) Replaced ‘pain, then’ with ‘pain; then’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.
(187) Replaced ‘horse, then’ with ‘horse, and then’. Replaced ‘Ang'sei’ with ‘ang'sei’. Replaced ‘20 Imperial Cavalry’ with ‘twenty Imperial Cavalry’. Replaced ‘Kirusami’ with ‘kirusami’. Replaced ‘Papers of State’ with ‘papers of state’.
(189) Replaced ‘therain-bow’ with ‘the rainbow’. Replaced ‘milleniums’ with ‘millennia’. Replaced ‘vampire Lord Sejanoz’ with ‘vampire, Lord Sejanoz’.
(190) Replaced ‘special item’ with ‘Special Item’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘the die’ with ‘the dice’.
(192) Replaced ‘apporpriate’ with ‘appropriate’. Replaced ‘Gold crowns’ with ‘Gold Crowns’.
(193) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(195) Replaced ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’. Added a period after ‘turn to 284’.
(196) Replaced ‘Klorva’ with ‘a Potion of Klorva’.
(197) Replaced ‘crescendo, then’ with ‘crescendo, and then’. Replaced ‘steam cannon’ with ‘steam-cannon’.
(198) Replaced ‘scouting party have’ with ‘scouting party has’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(200) Added ‘If you possess the Kai Weapon “Valiance”, you will benefit from its unique properties.’ as Brumalghasts are magical creatures (cf. Section 235).
(201) Replaced ‘agonising’ with ‘agonizing’. Replaced ‘you Kai’ with ‘your Kai’.
(203) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(204) Replaced ‘reach Javai Forest’ with ‘reach the Javai Forest’, as elsewhere in this section and this book. Replaced ‘freshly brewed’ with ‘freshly-brewed’. Replaced ‘His gang have’ with ‘His gang has’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘his Captain's’ with ‘his captain's’.
(205) Replaced ‘closely packed’ with ‘closely-packed’.
(206) Replaced ‘projectile, then’ with ‘projectile, and then’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(207) Replaced ‘discover 20’ with ‘discover twenty’. Replaced ‘southern Magnamund’ with ‘Southern Magnamund’.
(208) Replaced ‘Hermastery, and’ with ‘Herbmastery and’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’. Replaced ‘Deliverance, and’ with ‘Deliverance and’.
(209) Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’.
(210) Replaced ‘Hold, Sergeant’ with ‘Hold, sergeant’.
(211) Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(212) Replaced ‘power word’ with ‘power-word’.
(213) Replaced ‘Kirusami’ with ‘Kirusami’. Replaced ‘to −1’ with ‘by 1’. Replaced ‘point).’ with ‘point.)’.
(214) Replaced ‘platform, then’ with ‘platform; then’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’.
(215) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘reflex saves’ with ‘reflexes save’. Replaced ‘Invisible Shield’ with ‘Shield’ as Invisible Shield is a Brotherhood Spell, not an Old Kingdom Spell as here stated.
(217) Replaced ‘out of Rakholi’ with ‘out from Rakholi’.
(218) Replaced each occurrence of ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘7 or 9’ with ‘7, or 9’. Replaced ‘0, 2, 4, 6 or 8’ with ‘2, 4, 6, 8, or 0’. Replaced ‘survived your wounds’ with ‘survived your wounding’.
(219) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(220) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘you look at each of the people who are gathered here’ with ‘you look at each of the persons gathered here’.
(222) Replaced ‘Between these’ with ‘From between their’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(224) Replaced ‘add +1 to’ with ‘add 1 to’.
(225) Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Added ‘You must fight this combat without your Kai Weapon.’ (cf. Section 139).
(226) Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.
(228) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(229) Replaced ‘dwarves and’ with ‘dwarves, and’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’. Replaced ‘Astrology, and’ with ‘Astrology and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(233) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘Kirusami’ with ‘Kirusami’. Replaced ‘Spear), and’ with ‘Spear) and’.
(235) Replaced ‘icy breath that freezes everything it touches’ with ‘icy breath that freeze everything they touch’. Replaced ‘Kirusami’ with ‘kirusami’.
(236) Replaced each occurrence of ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’. Replaced ‘plans meets’ with ‘plan meets’.
(237) Replaced ‘add +1 to’ with ‘add 1 to’. Replaced ‘Ang'sei’ with ‘ang'sei’. Replaced ‘Ang'sei’ with ‘Ang'sei’. Replaced ‘Kirusami’ with ‘Kirusami’. Replaced ‘naginata’ with ‘naginata’ in the illustration's caption.
(238) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow of Atonement’.
(240) Replaced ‘candle-lit’ with ‘candlelit’. Replaced ‘cuthroats’ with ‘cut-throats’.
(241) Replaced ‘sure of though’ with ‘sure of, though’.
(243) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(245) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(246) Replaced ‘Kai pathsmanship’ with ‘Magnakai Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘imperial family’ with ‘Imperial Family’.
(247) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(248) Replaced ‘Kai Grand Defender’ with ‘Kai Grand Defender and possess the Xi-die’. Replaced ‘Mastery, turn’ with ‘Mastery, or if you do not possess this Special Item, turn’.
(249) Replaced ‘As soon you hear’ with ‘As soon as you hear’. Replaced ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’. Replaced ‘fierce sounds of the fighting attracts’ with ‘fierce sounds of the fighting attract’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(252) Replaced ‘Some descend’ with ‘Some of the fissures descend’. Replaced ‘western rim’ with ‘eastern rim’ as Sections 2 and 130 indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning.
(253) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(255) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘densely packed’ with ‘densely-packed’. Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.
(256) Replaced ‘tiger's head emblem’ with ‘tiger's-head emblem’.
(257) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(259) Replaced ‘t
he Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’.
(261) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘an Arrow’ with ‘the Arrow’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(262) Replaced ‘Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Healing’ with ‘Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Curing’.
(265) Replaced ‘as a Special Item which you store in your backpack’ with ‘as a Special Item’.
(266) Replaced each occurrence of ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’.
(267) Replaced ‘my Lord’ with ‘my lord’. Replaced ‘tyrant Lord of Bhanar’ with ‘tyrant lord of Bhanar’.
(270) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘well-founded’ with ‘well founded’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(271) Replaced ‘life and your mission ends’ with ‘life and your mission end’. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.
(272) Replaced ‘gutteral’ with ‘guttural’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(275) Replaced ‘ribcage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘Random Number Table and add 2 (0 = 10). If you possess Deliverance, you may deduct 2 from your total’ with ‘Random Number Table (0 = 10) and add 2 if you do not possess Deliverance’.
(276) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘flagtower’ with ‘flag-tower’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
