by Joe Dever
(16) Replaced ‘T'is’ with ‘ 'Tis’. Replaced ‘not less’ with ‘not 'less’.
(17) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(19) Replaced ‘psi-screen’ with ‘Psi-screen’. Replaced ‘sudden massive’ with ‘sudden, massive’.
(21) Replaced ‘doorway and’ with ‘doorway, and’. Replaced ‘moments, then’ with ‘moments; then’. Replaced ‘taproom, ‘now’ with ‘taproom. ‘Now’.
(23) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(25) Replaced ‘over and, as’ with ‘over, and as’. Replaced ‘them you’ with ‘them, you’. Replaced ‘can and so you’ with ‘can. You’. Replaced ‘chase but’ with ‘chase, but’. Replaced ‘and they give’ with ‘and give’.
(26) Replaced ‘vampirish’ with ‘vampiric’.
(27) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(29) Replaced ‘strike an’ with ‘strike, an’. Replaced ‘this time,’ with ‘this time!’. Replaced ‘alive.’ with ‘alive!’. Replaced ‘Bow and arrow’ with ‘Bow and Arrow’.
(30) Replaced ‘Sun Lord or higher,’ with ‘Sun Lord,’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge’.
(31) Replaced ‘life force’ with ‘life-force’. Replaced ‘prey on which’ with ‘prey with which’.
(33) Replaced ‘huntmastery’ with ‘Huntmastery’. Replaced ‘swarthy-face’ with ‘swarthy-faced’. Replaced ‘click’ with ‘click’.
(34) Replaced ‘Kraagenskul’ with ‘Kraagenskûl’.
(36) Replaced ‘Vortex’ with ‘Vortexi’. Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’. Replaced ‘add 5 to your ENDURANCE points score’ with ‘restore 5 points to your ENDURANCE points score’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(38) Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’.
(39) Replaced ‘curing’ with ‘Curing’. Replaced ‘Vakovarian brigands’ with ‘Vakovarian Brigands’. Replaced ‘rounds, by’ with ‘rounds by’.
(40) Removed the quotation marks around ‘Lightning Hand’.
(44) Replaced ‘dim blue’ with ‘dim, blue’. Replaced ‘streches’ with ‘stretches’. Replaced ‘light and in its dim glow you’ with ‘light, and in its dim glow, you’.
(45) Removed the superfluous semicolon in ‘region; has’ — the original print has a suspicious looking smudge that makes no sense in this context. Replaced ‘says, as’ with ‘says as’.
(46) Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’.
(48) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘Black corvayl’ with ‘Black Corvayl’.
(50) Replaced ‘them they’ with ‘them, they’.
(51) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.
(52) Replaced ‘psychic ability’ with ‘psychic abilities’. Replaced ‘rounds, by’ with ‘rounds by’. Replaced ‘lair, then’ with ‘lair; then’.
(54) Replaced ‘invisibility yet’ with ‘invisibility, yet’. Added ‘Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(55) Replaced ‘runic disc’ with ‘Runic Disc’.
(56) Replaced ‘eagle eyes’ with ‘eagle-eyes’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(57) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the quotation marks around ‘Net’. Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘A fluid gush of sticky strands shoot’ with ‘A fluid gush of sticky strands shoots’.
(59) Replaced ‘bandits and’ with ‘bandits, and’.
(60) Replaced ‘hard pressed’ with ‘hard-pressed’. Replaced ‘ascend but’ with ‘ascend, but’. Replaced ‘Grand Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Grand Huntmastery and’.
(61) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘peak but’ with ‘peak, but’. Replaced ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’. Replaced ‘kilometre’ with ‘mile’.
(62) Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’.
(63) Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘two-metre’ with ‘six-foot’.
(64) Replaced ‘huntmastery’ with ‘Huntmastery’. Replaced ‘desolate but’ with ‘desolate, but’. Replaced ‘streets and’ with ‘streets, and’.
(66) Replaced ‘shore, then’ with ‘shore; then’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(67) Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘mineshaft’ with ‘mine shaft’.
(68) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(71) Replaced ‘spell’ with ‘Spell’. Removed the quotation marks around ‘Counterspell’.
(72) Replaced ‘downpour you’ with ‘downpour, you’. Replaced ‘summonation’ with ‘summoning’. Replaced ‘icy-cold’ with ‘icy cold’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’. Added a comma after the first ‘Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘plane of Darkness’ with ‘Plane of Darkness’.
(73) Replaced both occurrences of ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced ‘flood you’ with ‘flood, you’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.
(74) Replaced ‘strong and’ with ‘strong, and’.
(75) Replaced ‘arm lock’ with ‘armlock’. Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’. Replaced ‘partic'lar … no’ with ‘partic'lar … No’. Replaced ‘hisses, ‘my’ with ‘hisses. ‘My’. Replaced ‘wern't’ with ‘weren't’.
(76) Replaced ‘acolyte Elders’ with ‘Acolyte Elders’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(77) Replaced ‘furrier's shop’ with ‘furriers' shop’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.
(80) Replaced ‘huntmastery’ with ‘Huntmastery’. Replaced ‘desolate but’ with ‘desolate, but’. Replaced ‘camp fires’ with ‘campfires’.
(82) Replaced ‘deck and’ with ‘deck, and’.
(83) Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘Guardian,’ with ‘Guardian or higher,’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’. Replaced ‘Kai-screen, and’ with ‘Kai-screen and’.
(84) Replaced ‘Black Talisman’ with ‘Black Amulet’. Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘rewrap’ with ‘re-wrap’. Replaced ‘yellow streaked beard’ with ‘yellow-streaked beard’ in both the text and the illustration's caption.
(86) Replaced ‘spell’ with ‘Spell’. Removed the quotation marks from ‘Sense Evil’.
(87) Replaced ‘scavengers’ with ‘Scavengers’. Replaced ‘Three hundred metres’ with ‘One thousand feet’.
(88) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(89) Replaced ‘mineshaft’ with ‘mine shaft’.
(90) Replaced ‘drop and’ with ‘drop, and’. Replaced ‘death throes’ with ‘death-throes’.
(91) Replaced ‘dawn the’ with ‘dawn, the’.
(92) Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’.
(94) Replaced ‘Crack!’ with ‘crack!’.
(96) Replaced ‘rips’ with ‘rip’. Replaced ‘flame and suddenly’ with ‘flame. Suddenly’. Replaced ‘silence, then’ with ‘silence; then’.
(97) Replaced ‘Kai Blast’ with ‘Kai-blast’.
(98) Replaced ‘One by one his’ with ‘One by one, his’.
(99) Replaced all occurrences of ‘jackals’ with ‘Jackals’. Replaced ‘rounds, by’ with ‘rounds by’. Replaced ‘Sun Knight, or higher’ with ‘Sun Knight or higher’.
(100) Replaced ‘t'is’ with ‘ 'tis’. Replaced ‘At first I, too, made’ with ‘At first, I too made’. Replaced ‘hills and’ with ‘hills, and’.
(102) Replaced ‘investigate and your’ wi
th ‘investigate. Your’. Replaced ‘acolyte of Vashna’ with ‘Acolyte of Vashna’.
(103) Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’. Replaced ‘add 5 to your ENDURANCE points score’ with ‘restore 5 points to your ENDURANCE score’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(104) Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(105) Replaced ‘Citystate’ with ‘City-state’. Replaced ‘destoyed’ with ‘destroyed’. Replaced ‘Casiorn, then’ with ‘Casiorn, and then’. Replaced ‘give rise for’ with ‘give cause for’.
(106) Replaced ‘life force’ with ‘life-force’. Replaced ‘weapon, or’ with ‘Weapon or’.
(107) Removed the quotation marks from ‘Invisible Fist’. Replaced ‘battle spell’ with ‘battle-spell’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.
(108) Replaced ‘hesitation he’ with ‘hesitation, he’.
(109) Replaced ‘bow and draw an arrow’ with ‘Bow and draw an Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow and the arrow’ with ‘Bow and the Arrow’. Replaced ‘says, sneeringly’ with ‘says, sneering’.
(110) Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’.
(111) Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord’ since Sun Lord is the highest available rank in this book. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(112) Replaced ‘shore and’ with ‘shore, and’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘jackals’ with ‘Jackals’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Added ‘If you are able to only eat 1 Meal, you lose only 3 ENDURANCE points.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(113) Replaced ‘off-balance’ with ‘off balance’. Replaced ‘them you’ with ‘them, you’. Replaced ‘can and’ with ‘can, and’. Replaced ‘heels, pausing’ with ‘heels pausing’. Replaced ‘chase but’ with ‘chase, but’.
(118) Replaced ‘add 5 to your ENDURANCE points score’ with ‘restore 5 points to your ENDURANCE score’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(120) Replaced ‘bow, draw an arrow’ with ‘Bow, draw an Arrow’.
(121) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.
(123) Removed the quotation marks around ‘Lightning Hand’. Replaced replaced ‘spell’ with ‘Spell’. Replaced ‘offguard’ with ‘off-guard’. Added ‘Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(124) Replaced ‘adgana’ with ‘Adgana’. Replaced ‘long discordant’ with ‘long, discordant’.
(125) Replaced ‘far sinister’ with ‘far more sinister’. Replaced ‘psi-screen’ with ‘Psi-screen’.
(127) Removed the quotation marks from around ‘Levitation’. Replaced replaced ‘spell’ with ‘Spell’. Removed the choices at the end since they are superfluous: Lone Wolf must have Kai-alchemy to reach this section. The choices read:
If you possess Kai-alchemy, turn to 57.
If you do not possess this Grand Master Discipline, turn to 282.
The single remaining choice now reads:
Turn to 57.
(128) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’. Replaced ‘mineshaft’ with ‘mine shaft’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(129) Removed the quotation marks around ‘Mind Charm’.
(130) Replaced ‘Vasha’ with ‘Vashna’.
(131) Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’.
(132) Replaced ‘Kai Blast’ with ‘Kai-blast’.
(133) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘Discipline, or’ with ‘Discipline or’.
(134) Replaced ‘acolyte Elder’ with ‘Elder’.
(135) Added ‘Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(136) Replaced ‘invisibility’ with ‘Invisibility’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Removed the quotation marks around ‘Mind Charm’.
(137) Replaced ‘unconscious and’ with ‘unconscious, and’. Replaced ‘inside, then you’ with ‘inside, you’. Replaced ‘If, before’ with ‘If before’.
(138) Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’.
(139) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.
(140) Replaced ‘battle frenzy’ with ‘battle-frenzy’.
(141) Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’.
(142) Replaced ‘add 5 to your ENDURANCE points score’ with ‘restore 5 points to your ENDURANCE score’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(143) Replaced ‘we celebrate’ with ‘We celebrate’. Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’. Added ‘ (these bonuses are cumulative)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(144) Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’. Replaced ‘swoop’ with ‘swoops’.
(146) Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(147) Replaced ‘streetfighters’ with ‘street-fighters’.
(149) Replaced ‘command and’ with ‘command, and’.
(150) Replaced ‘hilltrack’ with ‘hill track’. Added ‘ (these bonuses are cumulative)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(151) Replaced ‘mineshaft’ with ‘mine shaft’.
(152) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.
(153) Replaced ‘If you do not possess these skills, or if you have yet to attain the rank of Sun Lord,’ with ‘Otherwise,’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(154) Replaced ‘guttering’ with ‘gutter’.
(155) Added ‘These nutritious blossoms have no healing properties.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(157) Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’.
(158) Replaced ‘rounds, by’ with ‘rounds by’.
(159) Replaced ‘and it makes’ with ‘which makes’. Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’.
(161) Replaced ‘furrier's shop’ with ‘furriers' shop’.
(162) Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’.
(163) Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.
(164) Replaced both occurrences ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’.
(165) Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’.
(166) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Replaced ‘in our midst,’ with ‘in our midst!’. Replaced ‘Cadak, maniacally, ‘You’ with ‘Cadak maniacally. ‘You’.
(167) Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘invisibility’ with ‘Invisibility’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Removed the quotation marks around ‘Mind Charm’.
(168) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.
(169) Replaced ‘accordingly, then’ with ‘accordingly, and then’.
(171) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(173) Replaced ‘says, ‘after’ with ‘says. ‘After’. Replaced ‘demoness’ with ‘Demoness’.
(174) Replaced ‘furrier's shop’ with ‘furriers' shop’.
(175) Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’.
(180) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘scavengers’ with ‘Scavengers’. Replaced ‘paces for’ with ‘paces, for’. Replaced ‘attack; they’ with ‘attack: they’.
(183) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced both occurrences of �
�arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(184) Replaced ‘whom you almost collided with’ with ‘with whom you almost collided’.
(185) Replaced ‘screwjaws’ with ‘screwjaw’. Replaced ‘drunkard, when’ with ‘drunkard when’. Replaced ‘disappear, then’ with ‘disappear; then’.
(186) Replaced ‘tunic, and’ with ‘tunic and’.
(187) Replaced ‘kilometre’ with ‘mile’.
(188) Replaced ‘quivers and’ with ‘quivers, and’.
(189) Replaced ‘In addition to the loyal servants, there are two Dwellers of the Abyss.’ with ‘I possess two Dwellers of the Abyss. My loyal servants are equal in number to the months in a Magnamund year, less the number of my Dwellers of the Abyss.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Deleted ‘ ‘In addition to the loyal servants, there are two Dwellers of the Abyss.’ ’.
(190) Replaced ‘cloak and’ with ‘cloak, and’.
(193) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(194) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘mouth, then’ with ‘mouth; then’. Replaced ‘pass, then’ with ‘pass; then’.
(195) Replaced ‘eyes, ‘let’ with ‘eyes. ‘Let’.
(197) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(198) Replaced ‘bow and draw an arrow’ with ‘Bow and draw an Arrow’. Replaced ‘jaw’ with ‘jaws’.
(200) Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘acolyte Elders’ with ‘Acolyte Elders’. Replaced ‘face it you see, two’ with ‘face it, you see two’. Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘these, or’ with ‘these or’.
(202) Replaced ‘salute, then’ with ‘salute, and then’.
(203) Replaced ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’.
(204) Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’.
(205) Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord’ since Sun Lord is the highest available rank in this book. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(207) Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’.
