The Father_A Dark Cannibalistic Thriller
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Eric’s head fell to his chest inside. He wasn’t happy with a response but there was nothing more he could do but accepted. He was looking forward to this and couldn’t help but feel like it was a waste of his time.
You need me to take you home? She asked.
He shook his head. No I’ll walk. He said walking away.
You live on other side of town Eric. She said. But he didn’t respond. Be safe she said but he just kept walking.
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[DAB1]Describe him getting out the car and walking up to the house.
[DAB2]She could be a reporter in a new series revolving around her and she could also be apart of the next series. Note to self.
[DAB3]delete
[DAB4]What the fuck is this?
[DAB5]Weird. I don’t remember putting italic. You can cut this.
[DAB6]Meat Appetizers
[DAB7]What thigh muscles are fatty?
[DAB8]Change to what ever the appetizer is above.
[DAB9]Different meat appetizers
[DAB10]Not sure what mattered but this line could be cut?
[DAB11]This doesn’t happen until a couple paragraphs down.
[DAB12]
[DAB13]The sauce of a meal he mad.
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[DAB15]Meal?
[DAB16]What animal calf is this?
[DAB17]Add this description of the stairs in the chapter of the dinner party.
[DAB18]This needs added above. I orginally said in this chapter that she was not there.