by Joe Dever
(Levels of Grand Mastership) Replaced ‘rank and titles’ with ‘ranks and titles’. Italicised ‘Lone Wolf Grand Master’ when referring to the series.
(Improved Grand Master Disciplines) Removed the quotation marks from ‘Improved Grand Master Disciplines’. Replaced ‘Grand Mastery you will’ with ‘Grand Mastery, you will’.
(Grand Master's Wisdom) Replaced ‘gods’ with ‘Gods’.
(1) Replaced ‘Fryelund forest’ with ‘Fryelund Forest’. Replaced ‘Mogaruith, then’ with ‘Mogaruith, and then’. Replaced ‘uncork it, then’ with ‘uncork it, and then’.
(2) Replaced ‘Extermius’ with ‘Exterminus’.
(3) Replaced ‘clang’ with ‘clang’.
(7) Replaced ‘crease’ with ‘cease’. Replaced ‘fowards’ with ‘forwards’. Replaced ‘longer, then’ with ‘longer, and then’.
(8) Moved the Animal Mastery choice into the first position.
(10) Replaced ‘Cener's evil plan’ with ‘Ceners' evil plan’.
(11) Replaced ‘semi-circular’ with ‘semicircular’. Replaced ‘Ruel war-dogs’ with ‘Ruel War-dogs’. Replaced ‘wag dogs’ with ‘war-dogs’. Replaced ‘charge’ with ‘charges’ in the illustrations caption.
(13) Replaced ‘arching’ with ‘arcing’.
(16) Replaced ‘sub-conscious’ with ‘subconscious’. Replaced ‘curing’ with ‘Curing’. Replaced ‘Baylon's Fungi’ with ‘Baylon's Bough Fungi’ as this is how you are told to record it in (cf. The Prisoners of Time Section 146.
(17) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’.
(18) Replaced ‘perpetuated’ with ‘perpetrated’. Replaced ‘mid-air, then’ with ‘mid-air, and then’. Replaced ‘Backpack item’ with ‘Backpack Item’.
(19) Replaced ‘another, then’ with ‘another, and then’.
(22) Replaced ‘dusty ground, then his’ with ‘dusty ground; then his’. Replaced ‘scrabbling his throat’ with ‘scrabbling at his throat’.
(24) Replaced ‘it red’ with ‘its red’. Replaced ‘pit agarashi’ with ‘Pit Agarashi’. Replaced ‘it red eyes’ with ‘its red eyes’. Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’. Replaced ‘immobile, then its’ with ‘immobile; then its’.
(25) Replaced ‘side-step’ with ‘sidestep’. Replaced ‘you, then’ with ‘you, and then’.
(27) Replaced ‘Drakkar warrior’ with ‘Drakkarim warrior’ to reflect standard usage.
(31) Replaced both occurrences of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘pit agarashi’ with ‘Pit Agarashi’.
(34) Replaced ‘Ghorkas’ with ‘ghorkas’.
(35) Replaced ‘as it they were’ with ‘as if they were’. Replaced ‘Cener druid’ with ‘Cener Druid’. Italicised ‘jazak’. Replaced ‘cavern floor, then the’ with ‘cavern floor; then the’. Replaced ‘patrol of six Vazhag file’ with ‘patrol of six Vazhag files’.
(37) Replaced ‘blood-lust’ with ‘bloodlust’. Replaced ‘them muttering, then’ with ‘them muttering; the’.
(39) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(40) Replaced ‘god’ with ‘God’.
(41) Replaced ‘suface’ with ‘surface’. Replaced ‘Cener druid’ with ‘Cener Druid’. Replaced ‘aproaches’ with ‘approaches’.
(43) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’.
(47) Replaced ‘eg’ with ‘i.e.’.
(48) Replaced ‘riddle, then’ with ‘riddle, and then’. Replaced ‘senses tells’ with ‘senses tell’. Replaced ‘turn to the page number’ with ‘turn to the entry number’ for clarity and consistency.
(50) Replaced ‘seeth’ with ‘seethe’. Replaced ‘gasses’ with ‘gases’. Replaced ‘clang’ with ‘clang’. Replaced ‘virus, and its vaccine, are’ with ‘virus and its vaccine are’.
(51) Replaced ‘Elder spell-word’ with ‘Elder Magi spell-word’. Replaced ‘battle spell’ with ‘battle-spell’.
(53) Replaced ‘feet, then’ with ‘feet; then’.
(55) Replaced ‘clang’ with ‘clang’.
(58) Replaced ‘jar of Black Berries’ with ‘Jar of Black Berries’. Replaced ‘Backpack item’ with ‘Backpack Item’.
(61) Replaced ‘set roaring’ with ‘sent roaring’. Replaced ‘sneers, ‘I’ with ‘sneers. ‘I’.
(62) Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’.
(67) Replaced ‘sixth senses alert’ with ‘Sixth Sense alerts’.
(71) Replaced ‘impact, then’ with ‘impact, and then’.
(72) Replaced ‘Cener druid’ with ‘Cener Druid’. Replaced ‘above, or’ with ‘above or’.
(74) Replaced ‘Vazhag comes’ with ‘Vazhag come’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(77) Replaced ‘Remember to record your choice on your Action Chart. A Cener Robe takes up two spaces in your Backpack; a Cener Mask takes one space. If you already carry the maximum number of Backpack items allowed, you must discard one item in favour of the Mask and/or Robe’ with ‘Record the Cener Robe and Cener Mask in the margin of your Action Chart. As you are wearing these items rather than carrying them, you need not discard any Backpack Items in their favour.’. According to the wording of this section, you take and immediately don the Robe and Mask, so there seems no reason to discard Backpack Items in their favour as if you were stowing them in your Backpack.
(80) Replaced ‘energy, then’ with ‘energy, and then’.
(83) Added ‘(unless you possess the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery)’.
(84) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’. Replaced ‘divination’ with ‘Divination’. Replaced ‘control, to’ with ‘Control to’. Replaced ‘these creature’ with ‘these creatures’.
(85) Replaced ‘dwellings, and’ with ‘dwellings and’.
(86) Replaced ‘Acolytes of Vashna: (One with Medallion of Protection)’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna (One with Medallion of Protection)’.
(87) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’.
(91) Replaced ‘If you possess Grand Mastery of Kai-surge, add 3 to the number you have chosen. If your current ENDURANCE points score is 20 or higher, add a further 2 to your score.’ with ‘If your current ENDURANCE points score is 20 or higher, add 2 to your score. If you possess Grand Mastery of Kai-surge, add a further 3 to the number you have chosen.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(96) Replaced ‘Cener druid’ with ‘Cener Druid’. Replaced ‘bridge timbers, then’ with ‘bridge timbers; then’.
(98) Replaced ‘Cener druids’ with ‘Cener Druids’.
(99) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(100) Replaced ‘If the combat takes 6 rounds or more’ with ‘If you win and the combat takes 6 rounds or more’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(102) Replaced ‘ ‘clunk’ ’ with ‘clunk’.
(103) Replaced ‘Grand Mastery of Nexus, and’ with ‘Mastery of Grand Nexus and’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’.
(104) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.
(106) Replaced ‘youself’ with ‘yourself’. Replaced ‘dead end, then’ with ‘dead end; then’.
(108) Replaced ‘imposter’ with ‘impostor’.
(109) Replaced ‘Cener druids’ with ‘Cener Druids’.
(110) Replaced ‘death blow’ with ‘death-blow’. Replaced ‘pit agarashi’ with ‘Pit Agarashi’.
(112) Replaced ‘Hanging by your fingertips on to the underside of the descending drawbridge’ with ‘Hanging on to the underside of the descending drawbridge by your fingertips’.
(113) Replaced ‘freeland’ with ‘Freeland’.
(115) Replaced ‘boxes and’ with ‘boxes, and’. Replaced ‘baubles and’ with ‘baubles, and�
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(116) Replaced ‘discoloration’ with ‘discolouration’.
(117) Replaced ‘divination’ with ‘Divination’. Replaced ‘Cener druid’ with ‘Cener Druid’.
(119) Replaced ‘If you already possess Cener Robes’ with ‘If you are already wearing a Cener Robe’ as all other references to the Cener Robe in this book are in the singular. Replaced ‘one, or neither’ with ‘one or neither’.
(121) Replaced ‘pit agarashi's’ with ‘Pit Agarashi's’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(122) Replaced ‘seek council’ with ‘seek counsel’.
(123) Replaced ‘Magi-Magic’ with ‘Magi-magic’. Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’.
(124) Replaced ‘0–4’ with ‘3–4’.
(125) Replaced ‘rounds, by’ with ‘rounds by’.
(127) Replaced ‘You wait’ with ‘Waiting’. Replaced ‘gong echoes n some’ with ‘gong echoes in some’. Replaced ‘begining’ with ‘beginning’. Replaced ‘barrels and’ with ‘barrels, and’.
(128) Replaced ‘beating time’ with ‘beating in time’.
(131) Replaced ‘ante-room’ with ‘anteroom’. Replaced ‘foward’ with ‘forward’. Replaced ‘icy-cold’ with ‘icy cold’. Replaced ‘plague agarashi’ with ‘Plague Agarashi’. Replaced ‘Plague agarashi’ with ‘Plague Agarashi’. Added ‘If you wield the Sommerswerd, remember to double the Undead Plague Agarashi's ENDURANCE point loss in each round of combat.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(132) Replaced ‘Bow and wish to use it’ with ‘Bow and an Arrow and wish to use them’. Replaced ‘Bow, or’ with ‘Bow or’.
(133) Replaced ‘hand holds’ with ‘handholds’. Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’.
(134) Replaced ‘Ghardoz bridge’ with ‘Ghardoz Bridge’.
(137) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘of levitation’ with ‘Levitation’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(142) Replaced ‘Cener druid’ with ‘Cener Druid’. Replaced ‘draw nearer, then’ with ‘draw nearer; then’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(143) Replaced ‘gods’ with ‘Gods’. Replaced ‘your feet, then’ with ‘your feet; then’.
(144) Removed the dashes around ‘Gloar!’. Replaced ‘the power word battle-spell you’ with ‘the battle-spell Power Word you’. Replaced ‘(prone)’ with ‘(prone)’. Replaced ‘power word’ with ‘power-word’.
(145) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘least’ with ‘lest’.
(147) Replaced ‘lancer’ with ‘Lancer’.
(151) Replaced ‘Kai Alchemy and Kai Surge’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and Kai-surge’.
(152) Replaced ‘of air, then’ with ‘of air; then’.
(153) Replaced ‘Cener druid’ with ‘Cener Druid’. Italicised ‘jazak’. Replaced ‘floor, then’ with ‘floor; then’. Replaced ‘patrol of six Vazhag file’ with ‘patrol of six Vazhag files’.
(155) Replaced ‘divination’ with ‘Divination’.
(157) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘foward’ with ‘forward’.
(158) Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’. Replaced ‘turn to the page’ with ‘turn to the entry’ for clarity and consistency.
(160) Replaced ‘wagon-loads’ with ‘wagonloads’. Replaced ‘Cener mask’ with ‘Cener Mask’. Replaced ‘north-eastwards’ with ‘northeastwards’.
(161) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(162) Replaced ‘Cener druids’ with ‘Cener Druids’.
(163) Replaced ‘sun God’ with ‘Sun-god’.
(164) Replaced ‘Skardos range’ with ‘Skardos Range’.
(167) ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(168) Replaced ‘storeroom’ with ‘store room’. Replaced ‘breath, then’ with ‘breath, and then’.
(170) Replaced ‘hall, then’ with ‘hall, and then’.
(171) Replaced ‘longer, then’ with ‘longer, and then’.
(172) Replaced ‘Magi-Magic and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘above, or’ with ‘above or’.
(175) Replaced ‘Cener druids’ with ‘Cener Druids’.
(176) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(177) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’. Replaced ‘Grand Mastery’ with ‘Grand Master’.
(178) Replaced ‘Skardos range’ with ‘Skardos Range’.
(180) Replaced ‘tendrils, then’ with ‘tendrils, and then’.
(182) Replaced ‘fast flowing’ with ‘fast-flowing’. Replaced ‘battle banners’ with ‘battle-banners’.
(183) Replaced ‘Cener druid’ with ‘Cener Druid’.
(184) Replaced ‘If you possess a Bow and are able to use it’ with ‘If you possess a Bow and at least one Arrow’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Replaced ‘Bow, or’ with ‘Bow or’.
(185) Replaced ‘dried leaves, then’ with ‘dried leaves; then’. Replaced ‘head first’ with ‘head-first’. Replaced ‘’ with ‘spell Lightning Hand as’.
(186) Replaced ‘suface’ with ‘surface’.
(187) Replaced both occurrences of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(188) Replaced ‘Grand Mastery’ with ‘Grand Nexus’ (cf. Section 203). Replaced ‘The brilliance and the roar of the crackling fireball threatens’ with ‘The brilliance and the roar of the crackling fireball threaten’.
(189) Replaced ‘fissure, by’ with ‘fissure by’.
(190) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Magi-Magic and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘above, or’ with ‘above or’.
(193) Replaced ‘Ghorkas’ with ‘ghorkas’.
(195) Replaced each occurrence of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(196) Replaced ‘god’ with ‘God’.
(198) Replaced ‘Skardos range’ with ‘Skardos Range’.
(199) Replaced ‘the blast, then’ with ‘the blast; then’.
(200) Replaced ‘giaks’ with ‘Giaks’. Replaced ‘disease and’ with ‘disease, and’. Replaced ‘battle banners’ with ‘battle-banners’.
(201) Replaced ‘Cener druid’ with ‘Cener Druid’. Italicised ‘jazak’. Replaced ‘floor, then’ with ‘floor; then’. Replaced ‘patrol of six Vazhag file’ with ‘patrol of six Vazhag files’.
(204) Replaced ‘out-distanced’ with ‘outdistanced’.
(208) Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’.
(211) Replaced ‘of air, then’ with ‘of air; then’.
(215) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(216) Replaced ‘semi-circular’ with ‘semicircular’. Replaced ‘Ruel war-dogs’ with ‘Ruel War-dogs’.
(217) Replaced ‘bang’ with ‘bang’.
(218) Italicised ‘narbul’.
(219) Replaced ‘weapon, then’ with ‘weapon, and then’.
(220) Replaced ‘0–2 turn to 42’ with ‘0–2, turn to 42’. Replaced ‘porcelain or’ with ‘porcelain, or’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(221) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘Plague hound’ with ‘Plague Hound’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘If the combat lasts 5 rounds’ with ‘If you win the combat in 5 rounds’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(223) Replaced ‘Unforturnately’ with ‘Unfortunately’.
(224) Replaced ‘Cener druids’ with ‘Cener Druids’.
(225) Removed quote marks from around thok. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘the bridge and’ with ‘the bridge, and’.
(227) Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’.
/> (228) Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(232) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘name of’ with ‘names of’.
(234) Replaced ‘click’ with ‘click’. Added ‘ Restores 10 ENDURANCE points if swallowed before or after combat.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition (cf. Shadow on the Sand Section 2). Replaced ‘All of these jars are Backpack Items.’ with ‘Each jar contains all of a given herb or potion in a concentrated form created by the Cener Druids (e.g. all five doses of Laumspur are contained in a single jar). Each jar counts as one Backpack Item.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(235) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’. Replaced ‘spreadeagled’ with ‘spread-eagled’. Replaced ‘steps, then’ with ‘steps, and then’.
(239) Replaced ‘remember to adjust your Action Chart accordingly’ with ‘remember to record it on your Action Chart as a Backpack Item’ (cf. Section 18).
(240) Replaced ‘inlayed’ with ‘inlaid’. Replaced ‘antechamber, however’ with ‘antechamber; however’.
(241) Replaced ‘breath, then’ with ‘breath, and then’.
(242) Replaced ‘ridge, then’ with ‘ridge, and then’.
(244) Replaced ‘hunch of maggoty’ with ‘haunch of maggoty’.
(247) Replaced ‘Sloat’ with ‘sloat’. Replaced ‘ante-rooms’ with ‘anterooms’. Replaced ‘ante-room’ with ‘anteroom’. Replaced ‘exposed heart, then’ with ‘exposed heart; then’.
(249) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(250) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’. Replaced ‘steps, then’ with ‘steps, and then’.
(255) Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’.
(256) Replaced ‘creatures snarls’ with ‘creature snarls’. Replaced ‘Cener druids’ with ‘Cener Druids’.
