by Joe Dever
(120) Replaced ‘attained, above’ with ‘attained above’. Replaced ‘aura of evil’ with ‘aura of Evil’.
(122) Replaced ‘(The maximum you are permitted to add is 7.)’ with ‘(The maximum you are permitted to add is 5.)’. Replaced ‘Kai mastership’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(123) Replaced ‘Crypt Spawn horde’ with ‘Crypt Spawn Horde’.
(124) Replaced ‘silver and’ with ‘silver, and’.
(125) Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’.
(128) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’. Replaced ‘Mastery, but’ with ‘Mastery but’.
(129) Replaced ‘size and shape of the disc suddenly triggers’ with ‘size and shape of the disc suddenly trigger’. Replaced ‘slot (if’ with ‘slot. (If’. Replaced ‘Item).’ with ‘Item.)’. Replaced ‘side, then’ with ‘side; then’. Replaced ‘click!, and’ with ‘click! and’.
(130) Replaced ‘key-in’ with ‘key in’. Replaced ‘rainswept’ with ‘rain-swept’.
(131) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(133) Replaced ‘enemy — Wolf's Bane — ’ with ‘enemy, Wolf's Bane,’.
(134) Replaced ‘clack’ with ‘clack’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘this weapon’ with ‘this Weapon’.
(135) Replaced ‘intently, then’ with ‘intently; then’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’.
(136) Replaced each occurrence of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’.
(137) Replaced ‘kakarmi’ with ‘Kakarmi’. Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.
(138) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom battle spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Battle-spell’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘creatures who are gathered’ with ‘creatures gathered’. Replaced ‘wumph!, the’ with ‘wumph! the’.
(140) Replaced ‘icy-cold’ with ‘icy cold’.
(142) Replaced ‘it, then’ with ‘it; then’.
(144) Switched the sections the Magi-magic and Kai-alchemy choices lead to. Replaced ‘weapon, or’ with ‘Weapon or’. Replaced ‘above, or’ with ‘above or’.
(145) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Sun Thane, or higher’ with ‘Sun Thane or higher’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(146) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(147) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’. Replaced ‘Crypt Spawn horde’ with ‘Crypt Spawn Horde’.
(148) Replaced ‘thump’ with ‘thump’. Replaced ‘now lie buried’ with ‘now lies buried’.
(149) Replaced ‘Naptha’ with ‘Naphtha’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.
(150) Replaced ‘psi-screen’ with ‘Psi-screen’.
(152) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(153) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and have reached the rank of Sun Lord, (and’ with ‘Huntmastery and have attained the rank of Sun Thane (and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’. Replaced ‘Lord, (and’ with ‘Lord (and’. Replaced ‘rank, (or’ with ‘rank (or’.
(154) Replaced ‘gemstones (if’ with ‘gemstones. (If’. Replaced ‘Item).’ with ‘Item.)’. Replaced ‘reproachfully’ with ‘ruefully’.
(156) Replaced ‘hard pressed’ with ‘hard-pressed’.
(159) Replaced ‘iron disc’ with ‘Iron Disc’.
(160) Replaced ‘imposter’ with ‘impostor’. Replaced ‘aura of evil’ with ‘aura of Evil’.
(162) Replaced ‘2’ with ‘two’ in the illustration caption.
(164) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(165) Replaced ‘If you possess Magi-magic’ with ‘If you possess Magi-magic and have attained the rank of Grand Thane or higher’. Replaced ‘If you do not possess this Grand Master Discipline’ with ‘If you do not possess this Grand Master Discipline or have yet to attain this level of Kai Mastery’.
(168) Replaced ‘shout, ‘Don't’ with ‘shout. ‘Don't’.
(170) Replaced ‘ultimate evil’ with ‘ultimate Evil’. Replaced ‘centrifugal’ with ‘centripetal’.
(171) Replaced ‘Discipline’ with ‘Discipline or have yet to attain this level of Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(172) Replaced ‘imbedded’ with ‘embedded’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(173) Replaced ‘1–4’ with ‘0–4’.
(174) Replaced ‘icy-cold’ with ‘icy cold’.
(175) Replaced ‘If you possess Magi-magic’ with ‘If you possess Magi-magic and have attained the rank of Grand Thane or higher’. Replaced ‘If you do not possess this Grand Master Discipline’ with ‘If you do not possess this Grand Master Discipline or have yet to attain this level of Kai Mastery’.
(176) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(177) Replaced ‘keying-in’ with ‘keying in’. Replaced ‘turn to the page number’ with ‘turn to the entry’ for clarity and consistency with other sections.
(178) Replaced ‘flys’ with ‘flies’. Replaced ‘Animal Control’ with ‘Animal Mastery’.
(179) Replaced ‘If you possess Kai-alchemy’ with ‘If you wish to use your Discipline of Kai-alchemy again’. Replaced ‘If you do not possess this Grand Master Discipline’ with ‘If you do not’ since you must possess Kai-alchemy to cast the Teleport spell to arrive at this section.
(182) Replaced ‘potions of Laumspur’ with ‘Potions of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(183) Replaced ‘battle armour’ with ‘battle-armour’.
(185) Replaced ‘clang’ with ‘clang’.
(188) Replaced ‘aura of evil’ with ‘aura of Evil’.
(190) Replaced ‘ice-cold’ with ‘ice cold’.
(191) Replaced ‘jungle, then’ with ‘jungle; then’.
(192) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘pursue, then’ with ‘pursue; then’.
(195) Replaced ‘artifact’ with ‘artefact’.
(196) Replaced ‘part-hidden’ with ‘partly hidden’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(198) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘creatures who are gathered’ with ‘creatures gathered’. Replaced ‘and, with a deafening wumph!, it’ with ‘and with a deafening wumph! it’.
(199) Replaced ‘whir’ with ‘whirr’. Replaced ‘The first thing you see are’ with ‘The first thing you see is’.
(200) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
(201) Replaced ‘The seething horde of needle-fanged horrors attempt’ with ‘The seething horde of needle-fanged horrors attempts’.
(202) Replaced ‘side, then’ with ‘side; then’.
(204) Replaced ‘spluttering flame’ with ‘sputtering flame’.
(205) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(206) Replaced ‘potions of Laumspur’ with ‘Potions of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(208) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(209) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom battle spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Battle-spell’. Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(210) Replaced ‘Kirlundin islands’ with ‘Kirlundin Islands’. Deleted ‘ at the front of this book’.
(211) Replaced ‘entrance, ‘Follow’ with ‘entrance. ‘Follow’.
(212) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(215) Replaced ‘line of deserted mud huts look’ with ‘line of deserted mud huts looks’.
(218) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘rainswept’ with ‘rain-swept’. Replaced ‘shockwave’ with ‘shock wave’. Replaced ‘Deliverance, and’ with ‘Deliverance and’.
(219) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom battle spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Battle-spell’.
(220) Replaced ‘semi-circular’ with ‘semicircular’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery, or if you choose not to use either of them’. Replaced ‘Bow, and the Discipline of Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Bow and the Discipline of Magi-magic and’.
(223) Replaced ‘reproachfully’ with ‘ruefully’.
(225) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘twine and’ with ‘twine, and’. Replaced ‘Kai-screen, and’ with ‘Kai-screen and’.
(226) Replaced ‘curing’ with ‘Curing’. Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.
(227) Replaced ‘silence and lower air pressure within this entry chamber makes’ with ‘silence and lower air pressure within this entry chamber make’. Replaced ‘black glassy mineral’ with ‘black, glassy mineral’.
(229) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘towards it until the speck’ with ‘towards the speck until it’. Replaced ‘cold dark universe’ with ‘cold, dark universe’.
(233) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(234) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘Hold Enemy and’ with ‘Hold Enemy, and’.
(238) Replaced ‘Baron ‘so’ with ‘Baron. ‘So’. Replaced ‘Blazer and’ with ‘Blazer, and’. Replaced ‘Blazer and’ with ‘Blazer, and’ in the illustration caption.
(239) Replaced ‘sixth senses scream’ with ‘Sixth Sense screams’.
(240) Replaced ‘Wolf Bane's’ with ‘Wolf's Bane's’.
(242) Replaced ‘agonising’ with ‘agonizing’.
(243) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.
(244) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(246) Replaced ‘clay tile roof’ with ‘clay-tile roof’.
(249) Replaced ‘still-warm’ with ‘still warm’. Replaced ‘Clasp (if’ with ‘Clasp. (If’. Replaced ‘tunic).’ with ‘tunic.)’.
(251) Deleted ‘ at the front of this book’. Replaced ‘sixth senses reveal’ with ‘Sixth Sense reveals’. Replaced ‘reveals that by tapping upon each square a correct number of times you will’ with ‘reveals that tapping upon each square a correct number of times will’.
(252) Replaced ‘turn to the page’ with ‘turn to the entry’ for clarity and consistency.
(255) Replaced ‘cries, ‘flee’ with ‘cries. ‘Flee’.
(256) Replaced ‘1–4’ with ‘0–4’.
(257) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘semi-circular’ with ‘semicircular’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery, or if you choose not to use either of them’. Replaced ‘Bow, and the Discipline of Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Bow and the Discipline of Magi-magic and’.
(260) Replaced all occurrences of ‘Cloud Dancer’ with ‘Cloud-dancer’. Replaced ‘south’.’ with ‘south.’ ’.
(261) Replaced ‘clack’ with ‘clack’.
(262) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Grand Guardian, or higher’ with ‘Grand Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’.
(267) Replaced ‘hall; one ascends to the floor above, the other’ with ‘hall: one ascends to the floor above; the other’.
(268) Replaced ‘ceiling, then’ with ‘ceiling; then’.
(270) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(272) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Grand Guardian, or higher’ with ‘Grand Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘shudders, then’ with ‘shudders; then’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’.
(273) Replaced ‘tables and’ with ‘tables, and’.
(275) Replaced ‘inky-black’ with ‘inky black’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(276) Replaced ‘by four’ with ‘by 4’. Replaced ‘Weaponmastery, and have’ with ‘Weaponmastery and have’.
(277) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(278) Replaced ‘rainswept’ with ‘rain-swept’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘shockwave’ with ‘shock wave’.
(279) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(280) Replaced ‘fire, ‘Naar’ with ‘fire. ‘Naar’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘platinum amulet’ with ‘Platinum Amulet’. Replaced ‘half-completed’ with ‘half completed’. Replaced ‘Having done’ with ‘When you have done’.
(281) Replaced ‘towards it until the speck’ with ‘towards the speck until it’. Replaced ‘cold dark universe’ with ‘cold, dark universe’.
(283) Replaced ‘score to 0’ with ‘score to zero or below’.
(285) Replaced ‘line of deserted mud huts look’ with ‘line of deserted mud huts looks’.
(286) Replaced ‘darkness, then’ with ‘darkness; then’.
(288) Replaced ‘pot, then’ with ‘pot; then’. Replaced ‘side, then’ with ‘side; then’.
(289) Replaced ‘clang’ with ‘clang’.
(290) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(292) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘creatures who are gathered’ with ‘creatures gathered’. Replaced ‘and, with a deafening wumph!, it’ with ‘and with a deafening wumph! it’.
(293) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(294) Replaced ‘dusty and’ with ‘dusty, and’. Replaced ‘smoky-coloured’ with ‘smoke-coloured’. Replaced ‘ornaments and’ with ‘ornaments, and’.
(296) Replaced ‘blow, then’ with ‘blow; then’.
(297) Replaced ‘line of deserted mud huts look’ with ‘line of deserted mud huts looks’.
(298) Replaced ‘circulate’ with ‘circular’. Replaced ‘aura of evil’ with ‘aura of Evil’.
(299) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(300) Replaced ‘scream, ‘I’ with ‘scream. ‘I’. Replaced ‘Naar, ‘you’ with ‘Naar. ‘You’. Replaced ‘ultimate evil’ with ‘ultimate Evil’. Replaced ‘aura of evil’ with ‘aura of Evil’.
(302) Replaced ‘artifact’ with ‘artefact’.
(304) Replaced ‘eg’ with ‘e.g.’. Replaced ‘rapier, then’ with ‘rapier, and then’. Replaced ‘combat ratio’ with ‘Combat Ratio’.
(305) Replaced ‘repair (erase three items of your choice from your current list of Backpack Items).’ with ‘repair. (Erase three items of your choice from your current list of Backpack Items.)’.
(308) Replaced ‘defence that augments’ with ‘defence that complements’.
(309) Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines, nor’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(312) Replaced ‘Bow, and the Discipline of Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Bow and the Discipline of Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Bow or’ with ‘Bow, or’. Replaced ‘floor, then’ with ‘floor; then’.
(314) Replaced ‘creatures who are gathered’ with ‘cr
eatures gathered’.
(317) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(318) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(319) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(320) Deleted ‘ at the front of this book’.
(322) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(323) Replaced ‘Grand mastery skills’ with ‘Grand Master skills’. Replaced ‘reign in your steed’ with ‘rein in your steed’. Replaced ‘northern quarter’ with ‘North Quarter’.
(324) Replaced ‘briney’ with ‘briny’. Replaced ‘find, and’ with ‘find and’ in the illustration caption.
(326) Replaced ‘If you possess Magi-magic’ with ‘If you possess Magi-magic and have attained the rank of Grand Thane or higher’. Replaced ‘If you do not possess this Grand Master Discipline’ with ‘If you do not possess this Grand Master Discipline or have yet to attain this level of Kai Mastery’.
(327) Replaced ‘power word’ with ‘power-word’.
(328) Replaced ‘useless (delete this weapon from your Weapons List).’ with ‘useless. (Delete this weapon from your Weapons List.)’. Replaced ‘If, before leaving this hall, you’ with ‘If before leaving this hall you’.
(329) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘newly acquired’ with ‘newly-acquired’.
(331) Replaced both occurrences of ‘artifact’ with ‘artefact’.
(333) Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’.
(334) Replaced ‘it), but’ with ‘it) but’.
(335) Replaced ‘rainswept’ with ‘rain-swept’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘shockwave’ with ‘shock wave’.
(337) Replaced ‘lop-sidedly’ with ‘lopsidedly’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘northern quarter’ with ‘North Quarter’.
(338) Replaced ‘sword’ with ‘Sword’ as it can be taken as a Weapon. Replaced ‘imbedded’ with ‘embedded’. Replaced ‘semi-circular’ with ‘semicircular’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery, or if you choose not to use either of them’. Replaced ‘Bow, and the Discipline of Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Bow and the Discipline of Magi-magic and’.
