by Brent Weeks
Gavin turned into an alley to help them bypass the crowded streets surrounding the water market. "Very few men are superchromats, Kip. Even I'm not a superchromat, though Dazen was, so apparently it runs in the family. If you want to draft something that will endure, you have to draft the exact middle of the spectrum you're working with. You want to make a blue sword that will last years after you draft it? It has to be perfect, and of course, you have to keep it out of light, but that's a different topic. Because men, aside from the few exceptions, can't do that-can't draft in the exact middle of a color, not can't keep it out of the light, obviously. Ahem, that is, if men want to make anything permanent, they have to add will. Makes it sound like it's meat you add to a stew, doesn't it? Hmm. I don't teach much, obviously. Let me try this." Gavin appeared perfectly heedless of the dark corners they were passing and the acquisitive eyes that followed them. But then, once any acquisitive eyes alit on Ironfist, they found other things to study in a hurry.
"Every time you draft, you use your will. You have to decide that something totally outlandish, weird, unnatural-seeming is going to happen, and you're going to make it happen. In other words, you decide to do magic. Now, the more outlandish it is, the harder it is to believe you can really do it. Or to put it another way, the more will it takes. You with me?"
"Makes sense so far," Kip said.
"Good. Now, blue sword." Gavin lifted a hand from beneath his cloak. His hand was solid blue, and as Kip watched, blue luxin blossomed from it. Gelled, solidified, hardened into the form of a blue sword. Gavin handed it to Kip.
Kip took it, feeling self-conscious as they passed through an intersection with another alley and he was bearing the blade like he was following it to his destiny. "Uh," he said, but then he felt the hilt go slippery. A moment later, the blade drooped, broke off the hilt of its own weight, and splatted on the dirty cobblestones of the alley. There was a light shimmer of blue, and then nothing but blue dust. The same happened moments later to the hilt in Kip's hand, leaving only that gritty blue dust.
"What's the dust?" Kip asked.
"A later lesson," Gavin said. "I'm having trouble teaching the basics as it is. The point for you is to imagine I'd drafted you a plow instead of a sword. Great, it works while the drafter is at your farm, but ten minutes after he leaves, all you've got is dust, literally. Not helpful. This is why superchromats are heavily recruited by all satrapies."
"So they can make plows?"
"Not all magic is for fun and dismemberment, Kip. In fact, most drafters spend their whole lives doing practical things like making plows. For every artist, there's ten men who repair roofs with green luxin. Anyway, men-and the women who aren't lucky enough to be superchromats-can cover their failings with will."
"You mean just by trying harder."
"Pretty much."
"That doesn't sound so bad. So they try harder. Liv was making men among drafters sound like slaves compared to the freeborn."
"More like dogs, I'd say," Gavin said.
"Huh?"
"Well, they are second-class because using will constantly wears you. It's exhausting. And will isn't just effort, it's belief and effort together. So if you need belief to do magic, what happens to the man who loses all his belief in himself?"
"He can't do magic?" Kip guessed.
"Exactly. That's half of what all the hierarchy among drafters is about. Satraps and satrapahs treat drafters like they're Orholam's gift to the world not just because they are Orholam's gift, but because if the drafter doesn't believe he's special and you call on him to do magic, he won't be able to do it. Drafter who can't draft? Useless."
"I never thought of that." So the rigid hierarchy wasn't simply because they could? Kip guessed that this wasn't the way Liv's tutors had explained things to her.
"Of course, it's a circle that spirals on itself. You're a satrap, you've paid a fortune for a bichrome drafter, well, now you've invested so much in him that you can't afford for him to fail you, so you have to reinforce his feelings of superiority and pamper him, give him slaves and so forth. It makes the more powerful drafters more and more difficult to manage."
There was a cough from behind them. Ironfist.
"Commander," Gavin asked, "you have something to add to this discussion?"
"Little dust in my throat. Apologies," Ironfist said, sounding not at all apologetic.
"Problem with will is, we think that the more will a man or woman expends in their life, the faster they die. Or it could merely be that men or women with great will tend to draft a lot more. Either way, their careers are spectacular. And short. It's probably why male drafters don't tend to live as long as women do, expending will all the time in order to have their drafting be useful. Side effect is that among the most powerful drafters, we have a lot of people with titanic will. Or, to put it bluntly, a lot of arrogant assholes. Especially the men. And madmen. Delusional people tend to believe in what they're doing. Makes them powerful."
"So I'm going to be spending my time with crazy, arrogant bastards."
"Well, many of them are of the finest blood."
Oh, that's right, I'm the only bastard around here. "I thought being a drafter was going to be fun," Kip said.
"Grunts never get to scull," Gavin said.
"Grunts?"
"Grunts, mundies, norms, grubbers, clods, shovelslingers, blinders, dulls, scrubs, mouth breathers, slumps, the benighted-there's lots of names. Most of them not as nice as those. They all mean the same thing: non-drafters."
"So what about you?" Kip asked, as they finally left the alleys. They crossed a wide, peaked stone bridge over the Umber River.
Gavin looked at him. "You mean what nasty names do they call me?"
"No!" Oh, Gavin was teasing. Kip scowled. "Your eyes don't"-he looked for the right word-"halo. So does that mean you can draft as much as you want?"
"I tire like anyone, but yes. For a time I can draft every day as much as I can handle and it won't burn me out. Someday, most likely five years from now, I will start to lose colors. It will take about a year, and then I'll die."
"Why five years from now?" Kip asked. It was still odd to him how matter-of-fact drafters were about their impending deaths. I guess they have time to get used to the idea.
"It always happens on multiples of seven from when a Prism begins his reign. I've made it sixteen years, so I have until twenty-one. Long time for a Prism."
"Oh. Why multiples of seven?"
"Because there's seven colors, seven virtues, seven satrapies? Because Orholam likes the number seven? Truth is, no one knows."
They walked on through streets swelling with people starting their morning errands, and those eager to get as much work done as possible before the heat of the day. They approached a long line of workers bottlenecked at the Lover's Gate, heading out to work outside the city. Though Kip didn't even see him draft, Gavin turned and handed him a green rock. Not a rock. Green luxin, perfectly the size to fit in Kip's palm. Kip took it, confused.
"You bring your specs?" Gavin asked. He handed Kip a square board, not a foot on each side, perfectly white.
Kip produced them. Smiled weakly. I have a bad feeling about what he's going to tell me next.
"Your turn. You can have lunch-or dinner or possibly breakfast-when you make a green luxin ball of your own. You've got the spectacles, a white reflector, plenty of sun, and an example. I couldn't make it easier if I tried."
"But I need Skill, Will, Source, and Still. I don't have skill. Any skill. At all."
Gavin looked at him sardonically. "And how do you think you get skilled? Skill is the most overrated of the requisites. Will covers a multitude of flaws."
I keep hearing that. Kip hadn't even had breakfast, and he wasn't going to get to eat until he made a magic ball? Fantastic.
They came upon the back of the line. Gavin glanced at Commander Ironfist. Without further prompting, Ironfist said, "Looks like a wagon broke down. It's blocking half the gate."
> Gavin swept a hand forward, as in, You go first. Commander Ironfist went first, and the impatient farmers and craftsman parted easily for him. Or at least those who looked furious at being pushed aside quickly hid it once they saw the size of the man towering over them. "We're going to help," Gavin said.
"Sure, you Parian scum," someone said, spitting. Gavin stopped and scanned the crowd for who'd spoken. As men met his eyes and saw those prismatic orbs, they quieted, confused, stunned.
"You can have my help, or you can have my enmity," Gavin said loudly. He unbuttoned the nondescript cloak and threw it back over his shoulders, exposing the almost blindingly white coat and shirt he wore underneath, worked with gold thread and jewels.
He walked on, and Kip scooted close to him. The crowd parted around them, murmuring questions and imprecations. In a minute, they were at the front of the line. At least a dozen men were straining to move a wagon. Apparently, the horses had spooked and veered to the side as they passed through the gate. The wagon's wheel had smashed into the gate's support-here actually the Lover's hair. The wheel was completely shattered, as was the wagon's axle, and the whole thing was still stuck against the wall, making normal efforts at repair impossible. The men were straining to lift the wagon by sheer brute strength, with a few using long poles to try to crank the mass off the wall.
"We're going to have to bring up an empty wagon and unload this before we've got a chance," one of the guards was saying.
To Kip's admittedly inexperienced eye, the man was right. The combined muscle of all these laborers was barely budging the wagon. But the assembled crowd groaned, a few complaining aloud.
"Bring an empty wagon? From where? Through that whole mess behind us? It'll take hours!"
"You all are going to have to use the other gates today," the guard said.
That met similar protests. With how thickly crowded the street was, none of the men at the front of the line would be able to leave until everyone at the back dispersed. It would take hours.
"What?" the guard shouted. "I didn't do this. I'm just trying to fix it! You have a better idea?"
"I do," Gavin said.
"Oh, sure, you smart-Lord Prism!" the guard said.
That sent a ripple of murmurs through the crowd.
Gavin ignored it. He gestured to the men to step back. They did, some in awe, others more peeved, some hostile. He simply walked to where the wagon was smashed against the wall. "I see why you had trouble," he said. "But I have a few extra tools available to me."
Kip, still holding his green luxin ball and the white board, realized Commander Ironfist had disappeared.
He's gigantic. How does he disappear? Kip looked around, and finally found him. The commander was standing behind a man in the crowd whose hand had dropped to the big work knife at his belt. Commander Ironfist's huge hand enveloped both the man's hand and his knife. The commander himself, towering over the man, was quietly speaking in his ear.
As he spoke, the man's face blanched and his whole body slackened.
Commander Ironfist gave the man a friendly pounding on his shoulder-which nearly crushed him-and stepped back toward Gavin.
"Always running off when I need you," Gavin said.
Commander Ironfist grunted.
Kip couldn't help himself. "I think he might have just saved your-" He saw the look on Gavin's face belatedly. Gavin knew. "Oh. Um. Never mind." Clever Kip.
But Gavin was back to work already. "I need ropes." He held a hand up over his head and a bar of yellow luxin formed in his hand and snapped out in both directions, until it was three times the height of a man. He handed it to one of the stunned workers. "You and you, get this in position, I'll need you to lever the wagon off the wall."
The man bobbed his head. He and the other man started jamming the pole as deep between the wall and wagon as they could.
Gavin walked as far around the wagon as he could, sending out thin jets of luxin in a number of places under the axles. "Now," he told the men with the lever.
They strained and moved the wagon less than a hand's breadth. After a three count, they relaxed and set their shoulders to try again.
"Not necessary," Gavin said. "You gave me enough already. Well done." And indeed, there was luxin even behind the wagon, encasing the whole in a shimmering web of various colors, mostly greens and yellows.
Gavin rolled his shoulders, braced himself, pointed at the arching luxin-and-stone of the gate, and shot out a stream of blue and yellow. In moments, it congealed into a pulley. He took coils of rope from a nearby farmer and shot out another bolt, anchoring one end of the rope to the ceiling. Then he threaded the rest of the rope through the pulley. He pulled some slack into the rope between the fixed pulley and the attached end and drafted a free-rolling pulley onto that, which he then fixed to the web of luxin around the wagon. He beckoned the farmer, apparently the wagon's owner, and tossed him the rest of the rope. "It'll still take all of you helping," he said.
Kip swallowed. "Please tell me he isn't designing those off the top of his head," he said to Commander Ironfist, who was silently watching the crowd.
"He's not. You'd be surprised how often wagons break down when your army is pursuing another army across half the Seven Satrapies. I've seen him lift heavier loads by himself. Albeit with lots more pulleys."
Which meant the real question was why Gavin didn't just do this himself. He could draft luxin better than any hemp rope. He could draft another four pulleys and make the burden so light he could lift the wagon himself. But as soon as Kip asked himself, he knew. Gavin was building rapport with the townsfolk. If he marched in and did it all himself, they'd be awed, but they'd not be a part of it. This way, he was simply enabling them to help themselves. His power might still be awesome, but it was power in service of them.
The men heaved on the lines, and Gavin called some men to him. As the wagon lifted off the ground it swung away from the wall, and Gavin and a few others braced it so it didn't swing wildly and hurt anyone. Finally they stabilized the swinging, and Gavin shouted, "Okay, hold it there!" Then he slid under the wagon, scooting on his back under the broken back axle.
That was no light wagon, and the men were straining to hold the load-these men of a city Gavin's army had nearly obliterated sixteen years ago. And yet Commander Ironfist didn't seem perturbed.
"Aren't you worried they'll drop it on purpose?" Kip whispered.
"No."
Kip was. But Gavin appeared unafraid. He grabbed the ends of the broken axle and brought them together as close as he could. It was no use, they were twisted and bent, but Gavin brought them as close as he could and then bound them by degrees with yellow. The wagon wheel followed in short order. He repaired what he could, and replaced what he couldn't.
He scooted out and gestured. The men lowered the wagon and it settled on the road, easily taking the weight. A shout of triumph went up from those who'd been helping. Gavin clapped the farmer on the shoulder. "Those'll be good for about three days, then you'll need to get real repairs, but it'll hold you until then."
"Thank you, sir, thank you ever so much. I thought they were going to lynch me for sure. A day's lost wages for all these men. You've saved me, sir."
Gavin smiled and said, "You're welcome. Now get those horses hitched up."
Only as he saw the smiles did Kip understand fully what Gavin had done. With ten minutes of effort and a little subtlety, he had turned an annoyance into an opportunity to win over not just the men he'd helped, but all those to whom they would repeat the story. The incongruity of the Prism himself joining in the starkly physical labor of lifting and moving and stabilizing the wagon, heedless of soiling his expensive white clothing, joining them muscle to muscle, communicated something to these men. A ruler who would sweat with them was a ruler who might understand men who won their bread by the sweat of their brow. That man was easier to trust than some dandy in silks who might be all kinds of noble-smart but didn't know the real world.
"It's
why you hardly ever hear anyone call him Emperor Guile," Ironfist said quietly, reading Kip's mind. "At heart, he's not an emperor; he's a promachos. It's not always the best way to fight, but it's his only way. It's why men will die for him."
"Why didn't he stay promachos, then?" Kip asked, wondering if it was a dangerous question.
"I could list a dozen reasons. Truth is, I don't know."
With a gesture-completely for show, of course-Gavin released all the luxin and it dissolved, shimmering, until it was nothing but dust. He nodded to his fellow laborers and then gestured Kip to follow.
As Kip joined Gavin and walked through the gate, Gavin said, "You have that green luxin ball for me yet?"
"What?" Kip protested. "I can't believe-I didn't even have a chance-"
Oh. He got me again. Gavin was grinning.
"Look, Kip," Kip said, "gullible's written on the sky!" He gazed up as if clueless. "Huh? Where?"
Gavin laughed, and if Kip didn't misjudge, he thought even Ironfist was smiling. "A little slow at the starting line, but watch out when he picks up speed. Reminds me of someone." His smirk told Kip the someone was himself. He put his hand on Kip's shoulder.
Kip felt a thousand things he couldn't identify at that touch. That touch claimed him: That's my boy, it said. His mother had said those words a few times-always after Kip messed up. She'd never said them with pride.
Gavin Guile wasn't just a great man. He was a good man. Kip would do anything for him.
Chapter 63
"General, I need to speak with you." Liv Danavis had found her father on the roof of the Travertine Palace, checklists and reports spread all over a table. It wasn't yet dawn, and he was bundled against the chill of the morning. He was standing, ignoring his work for the moment, his butt against the edge of his table, looking toward the east.
" 'General' this morning, not 'father.' I must be in trouble," he said. The corners of his mouth twitched. "Come here."
She came to his side and he pulled her close so they could watch the sun rise together.
