Raves for Marshall Ryan Maresca’s
The Thorn of Dentonhill:
“Veranix is Batman, if Batman were a teenager and magically talented. His uncompromising devotion to crushing the local crime boss encourages him to take foolish risks, but his resourcefulness keeps our hero one step ahead of those who seek to bring him down. Action, adventure, and magic in a school setting will appeal to those who love Harry Potter and Patrick Rothfuss’s The Name of the Wind.”
—Library Journal (starred review)
“Maresca brings the whole package, complete and well-constructed. If you’re looking for something fun and adventurous for your next fantasy read, look no further . . . an incredible start to a new series, from an author who is clearly on his way to great things.”
—Bibliosanctum
“Books like this are just fun to read.”
—The Tenacious Reader
“This is hang-on-to-your-toothpicks adventure with a mystery bent as Veranix tries to learn how to control the new magic he has and discover why some powerful people want to kill him for it. It’s action-oriented—swashbuckling Indiana Jones meets the burglar Bilbo Baggins of The Hobbit—but the characters have a warmth and conflicting goals and attitudes that make them worth following.”
—Kings River Life Magazine
“I loved every minute . . . this was a great debut novel and I can’t wait to see more of Maresca’s work”
—Short and Sweet Reviews
“Maresca’s debut is smart, fast, and engaging fantasy crime in the mold of Brent Weeks and Harry Harrison. Just perfect.”
—Kat Richardson, national bestselling author of Revenant
DAW Books presents the novels of Marshall Ryan Maresca:
THE THORN OF DENTONHILL
THE ALCHEMY OF CHAOS
*
A MURDER OF MAGES
AN IMPORT OF INTRIGUE*
*Coming soon from DAW
Copyright © 2016 by Marshall Ryan Maresca.
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Cover art by Paul Young.
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DAW Book Collectors No. 1718.
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Contents
Raves for Marshall Ryan Maresca’s The Thorn of Dentonhill
Also by Marshall Ryan Maresca
Title Page
Copyright
Acknowledgments
Maps
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Appendix
Acknowledgments
Writing a novel is a solitary process, and yet it takes a village. I can’t imagine anyone could truly do it alone.
Of course, I couldn’t have written The Alchemy of Chaos—or any other book—without the support of my wife, Deidre Kateri Aragon. She is the reason I can sit down at the computer, day after day, and putter away until a manuscript is done. She, as well as my son Nicholas, have been a source of constant support and strength. No less important to thank are my parents, Louis and Nancy Maresca, and my mother-in-law, Kateri Aragon, all of whom have contributed in innumerable ways to making it possible for me to write this book.
I also have to thank two of the best beta-readers a writer like me could ask for: Kevin Jewell and Miriam Robinson Gould. Their input helped craft this novel into what it is, even if they sometimes have radically different reactions to certain characters. I also should thank Rebecca Schwarz and Melissa Tyler for their help keeping my plate clear while I was in crunch time for this manuscript.
A huge portion of thanks has to go to Stina Leicht. Stina has been a friend, a mentor, a sympathetic ear, and a good source for the occasional much-needed whap upside the head, which is exactly what every writer needs. Plus, she’s the person you want driving the car when you’re fleeing from hurricanes and tornados.
I can’t emphasize enough how much is owed to my agent, Mike Kabongo. He’s handled with grace and humor the arduous task of dealing with my constant harassment while shopping my work. Back when he first responded to an unsellable draft of The Thorn of Dentonhill, he said, “Clearly you are a writer I want to watch. Even if you decide I’m not the agent for you, do let me know when you hit the shelves, I want to buy something with your name on it.” So far he’s continued to show the same enthusiasm for each manuscript I’ve sent him, and I hope to not let him down.
Further thanks are owed to my editor, Sheila Gilbert, as well as Betsy Wollheim, Joshua Starr, Katie Hoffman and everyone else at DAW. I am deeply grateful for all the hard work they’ve done to make this the best book it can possibly be.
Finally, there is my dear friend Daniel J. Fawcett, who has been my sounding board and bent ear on everything creative I’ve done since the seventh grade. Nothing in this book or any other would be what it is without his influence. I wouldn’t be who I am today without his friendship.
Chapter 1
THE DOGS’ TEETH PUB was an ugly atrocity of lumber and plaster wedged in the empty space between the row houses at the intersection of Cole and Hester. Bell was amazed that the University allowed such an eyesore to exist so close to their campus, but they never did anything about it. Maybe it suited their purposes, having something so obviously dangerous and disreputable in clear sight. It kept all but the most foolhardy of students from crossing Waterpath.
As far as Bell was concerned, that was just fine. Mister Fenmere felt the same way. Not that Mister Fenmere couldn’t handle some heat from University, but if trouble came from there, it was best to keep it to a minimum.
A month ago, of course, Mister Fenmere had been talking about getting a toehold on campus, getting some students to deal for them. Good money to be had there. But Mister Fenmere hadn’t been talking about it at all lately.
Mister Fenmere had been pretty blazing quiet for a while, until a few days back. “Nevin’s boys have to be brought back in.”
This wasn’t what Be
ll was supposed to do, not anymore. But he knew he was being punished for the last month as well. If menial roundup jobs got him back in good graces, he wasn’t about to complain.
Dogs’ Teeth was the last loose end, the last two of Nevin’s dealers. The rest had come back into the fold without any trouble. Blazes, they were eager. They needed the coin, they had people begging for any vial of effitte they could get. That was good, drove prices up. People were now paying a full crown for a vial, sometimes even a crown and five. Once things had settled in this part of the neighborhood, they could keep prices right there, and people would blazing well pay. More money for Bell, and more for Mister Fenmere.
That should blazing well make the old man happy again.
Bell went in, the reek of stale beer and filthy people assaulting his nose. He immediately decided this was the first and last time he would come in here. He’d make sure Nevin’s boys found somewhere else to meet with him. The place was also extremely dim. Bell wasn’t sure if that was an intentional choice, or if they simply couldn’t afford the lamp oil to light the place properly.
He went up to the barman, a rotund beast of a man with a bald head and more scars on his hands than Bell had ever seen. “Lendle and Jemt?”
“You mean Lemt and Jendle?” the barman asked. “Who’s asking?”
“A man who shouldn’t have to come in here to ask.” Bell tapped on the bar, making sure his ring was visible enough to the barman. Even a gutter filth barman in a place like this, deep in the mires of Dentonhill, would know that ring, and know that only one of Fenmere’s close men would dare to wear it.
“There ain’t gonna be trouble here, is there?”
Bell glanced around the place, filled with broken steves and facks, the kind who barely make it through a day’s work without a dose of effitte and many cups of the Dogs’ Teeth’s swill down their throats. “You’re probably no stranger to trouble.”
“There’s usual trouble and real trouble,” the barman said. “Usual I can handle. I don’t need any more real on my place.”
“Shouldn’t get any from me,” Bell said. “As long as I’m not given any.”
The barman signaled to one corner, where several tables had been pulled together, and two blokes played cards there, surrounded by what could charitably be called the best-looking women in the place. That meant they were the only women who didn’t look like they were a dose away from a life in ’fitte-trance.
“Gentlemen,” Bell said, coming over to the table. “If we could have a moment to discuss matters.”
“Who the blazes are you?” one of them asked.
“You Lemt or Jendle?” Bell asked. The two of them were almost the same guy—dark hair, scraggly beards, pocks and scars on their faces. Burly enough to be scrappers, but not the kind of guys you would hire to be muscle.
“Lemt,” he answered.
Bell held up his hand to show his ring, and then popped Lemt in the face. “Go roll yourself, that’s who I blazing am.”
“Hey, brother, there’s no need for that,” Jendle said. “Everything’s cozy here.”
“Cozy,” Bell scoffed. “The two of you are a couple of fools, you know that?”
“Why is that?” Lemt said, holding his nose. “We were doing fine, and Nevin gets himself killed. We didn’t even hear proper. Then we hear nothing at all.”
“We figured, you know,” Jendle said. “We figured with Nevin gone, you folks were done with us. All clean, you know?”
“I really don’t know,” Bell said. “Nevin’s boys had to sweat for a few weeks. But business needs to get back up, and you two are back in business.” He took his small leather journal and a charcoal stylus out of his vest pocket.
“Back?” Lemt stammered.
Jendle leaned forward. “See, we figured . . .”
“Well, stop with figuring,” Bell said. “Figuring is for captains, not for toughs and scrappers.”
“Yeah, but,” Jendle said. “What with what happened and all, we figured we were lucky to be breathing. Thought we should keep our heads low and keep it that way.”
“What happened?” Bell asked.
An old man sitting a couple of tables away started cackling. “They mean they’re a couple of squealers!”
“Shut it, coot!” Lemt snapped.
“You two,” Bell said. Now this made sense. “You’re the ones who pointed the . . . who gave up Nevin.” He almost said the name. He hadn’t said it in almost a month. Nor had Fenmere.
“You didn’t know?” Jendle asked. He smacked his partner. “I told you they didn’t know.”
“No,” Bell said. “We knew some of Nevin’s boys had, but he protected who it was. So it was you two.”
“They sure did!” the old man cackled.
Jendle sneered at the old man, then turned back to Bell. “So, now? You gonna drop us in the creek?”
“No,” Bell said. “What happens is you two go back to work. You two are going to sell, and you’re going to make sure you bring in a hundred crowns a week.”
“A hundred!” Lemt snapped. “Can’t be done.”
“Each,” Bell added. He tallied that amount under their names in his journal and put it back in his vest pocket. “You’ll do that, because Nevin vouched for you. Because we need to build up again, and you boys are the ones to do it.” He reached under his coat and took out the leather case of effitte vials. Not much, of course, just enough to get these two fools started again.
“You’re building up here again?” The old man was the one asking.
“None of your business, codger,” Bell said. This old man was getting on Bell’s nerves. He tapped his fingers on the table, making sure the old man could see his ring. “Best steer clear.”
“Oh, fine,” the old man said, turning back to his cider.
“You two are back to work, hear? And you answer to me.”
“We can’t work out of here, boss,” Jendle said. “You know he knows who we are.”
“We start selling again, he’ll come for us.”
“You’re talking about the—” Bell shook his head. “That ain’t your problem, you hear? You do what you’re told.”
Lemt’s hands were shaking. “You say that, but who’ll protect us when he comes crashing in here?”
“You know who they’re talking about, don’t you?” the old man asked.
“Shut it! That’s ain’t gonna happen.”
“I still ain’t right when I go to the water closet,” Lemt said.
“So what happens when he comes?” the old man asked. He got up from his seat, leaning on a cane, and came over. “What are you going to do to protect your boys here, Bell, when the Thorn comes for them?”
Bell felt his hand shake. “He’s not gonna . . . we’re gonna . . . nobody’s even seen . . .”
“You afraid of the Thorn, Bell?”
“I ain’t afraid of anything, I’m . . .” He realized he had never said his name in this place. “How do you know my name?”
The old man leaned in. “Because you’re my favorite, Bell.”
Bell stumbled back, shoving at the old man, who laughed and melted away, becoming someone else in front of his eyes. Wrinkles smoothed, white beard pulled into a sharp, bare chin. Raggedy clothes became a sharp burgundy cloak and vest. Walking stick changed into a fighting staff. The face was still hidden by a hood, casting an unnatural shadow that had to be magic, but Bell knew exactly who was in front of him.
The Thorn.
“Oh, blazes!” the bartender shouted.
Bell went for his sword, but the Thorn moved faster, and that infernal rope was suddenly wrapped around his hand. With a flick of his wrist, the Thorn then looped the rope behind Jendle’s neck and yanked. Bell’s fist collided with Jendle’s face.
“Son of a—” Jendle managed to get out before he was hit.
/> The Thorn drew up his staff and jammed it into Bell’s leg—right in the same blazing spot he had put an arrow a month ago. Bell crumpled to the floor before he could stop himself.
“Blazes!” Lemt shouted. “Someone get to a blasted whistlebox! Call the sticks!”
“Sure,” the Thorn said, swinging the staff around to crack it against Bell’s head. “I come in, and suddenly you all want the Constabulary.”
Bell tried to grab at the Thorn’s legs, but he was reeling from the last blow. The Thorn had jumped onto the table and pinned Lemt to the wall with his staff.
“The rest of you, try to enjoy your beer,” the Thorn said. “I’ve no quarrel with you right now.”
“You’ll get a quarrel!” the bartender shouted, pulling out a crossbow from behind the bar. He fired, almost wildly, and hit Lemt in the arm instead of the Thorn.
The rope shot out across the room and tore the crossbow out of the barman’s hands. “I really loathe puns, sir. You’re better than that.”
He jumped off the table, landing on Bell, knocking his breath out and forcing him back down to the floor. While Bell was reeling, the Thorn pawed at him for a moment, and then sprung back up. The bastard was already out of the way before Bell could do a blasted thing to stop him.
“As for this,” the Thorn said, holding up the effitte case, “it’s not going to hurt anyone.” It lit up in a burst of blue flame, and was gone.
“You’re gonna . . .” Bell wheezed out. “You’re gonna . . .” He struggled to get up onto his knees. Standing was out of the question.
The Thorn raised up his staff. “You’ll let Fenmere know that I haven’t forgotten him.”
The staff smashed into Bell’s face. The next few moments were cloudy and dazed, until he found himself being hauled to his feet by Jendle and the barman.
“I told you,” Jendle said, holding a rag over his bleeding nose.
“I didn’t want any trouble,” the barman said.
The Thorn was gone.
“Blazes,” Bell muttered. He pushed them both away and dusted himself off as much as he could. Some small attempt to maintain his dignity. Brushing his hands on his vest, panic rushed through him. He checked both pockets, looked back to the floor, and at the table. Nothing. His journal was gone.
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