by Dan Brown
During winter break of my senior year, my reading specialist mom had enlisted me to help direct twenty second-graders in a child-friendly production of Romeo and Juliet. I spent two days with the kids, riling pint-sized Tybalt and Mercutio for their emotional sword-crossing, coaching Romeo (who gave up a good nine inches to his romantic costar) to act lovesick, and explaining ruefulness to sweatpants-clad Friar Lawrence.
Mrs. Haenick, the drama-novice classroom teacher, thanked me over and over for saving the show. “You've got this way of talking to them!” she told me backstage, beaming with surprised approbation, as if I had just sawed someone in half.
Something clicked in me during those two days: I can work with kids… and love it.
By 4:30 a.m., my writing had devolved into exhausted drivel and the diner staff was visibly perturbed at my lingering. Bleary-eyed, I stumbled to the street to seek a bunch of Red Bulls. The ghost-town city creeped me out, and I hailed a cab to Grand Central Terminal. I napped against a pillar near the 4-5-6-S exit until a police officer's boot nudged me awake. A subway platform bench became my home for the next three hours while I sang entire Beatles albums to myself to stay conscious.
When the fair opened, I wandered the jam-packed corridor for fifteen minutes, wading through several major traffic fluxes initiated by shouts like, “Eighty-six needs six common branches! They're over there! C.I.S. 170 is taking special ed now!” My mystification at this strange, serious game of “placement fair” manifested in a fear that I was behind in the race; these people were portfolio-carrying professionals and I was some kind of kid impostor, a summer-camp white boy from Cherry Hill, New Jersey.
Then a beacon of clarity appeared. I found a sign that read “District 10 Placements” with a nearly empty sign-in list. Soon I was summoned into an office by kind-faced Susan Atero, who scanned my résumé for fifteen silent seconds.
“The Mummy Returns… you worked on that? In Santa Monica, it says?”
“Not that film, the director, Stephen Sommers's, next film. It's called Van Helsing.”
“The Mummy Returns is my favorite movie of all time,” Susan enthused. “I watch it with my sons almost every week. What is the director like?”
“Stephen's very energetic. He lives and breathes movies,” I related, as if he and I were old bowling buddies. The truth was that I had driven out to L.A. for the summer with my cousin, only to find my previously secured internship on the Paramount Pictures studio lot handed over to someone with “a connection.” I spent several demoralizing weeks bouncing between the Culver City public library Internet station and Kinko's, hunting for unpaid positions and faxing my résumé all over town. Eventually, an assistant to the coproducer of Van Helsing invited me to hang out several days a week in the production office screening room, photocopying scripts when necessary. Once, for my most auspicious assignment, I arranged a folder of creature concepts for a presentation and, as advised, did not commingle pictures of Dracula with the Winged Beast from Hell. It all came to a dubious end when I had to leave town prematurely after a traffic ticket busted my budget. I met Stephen Sommers once, and I spent most of our three shared minutes confusing him with details about how a robot snapped my picture going through a red light.
I nodded emphatically at Susan. “Van Helsing is going to be spectacular.”
“Hmm.” Promptly, her smiling mien sobered, and my hope that I could ride Hollywood name-dropping to a quick commitment form disappeared. I was suddenly certain that she knew all about the lame pseudo-employment prominently featured on my résumé.
“Daniel. What strengths will you bring to an inner-city school?”
I regretted not preparing seriously for this. I took a deep breath, aware that my pause had bloated into a hesitation. “I care about kids and I think one of my greatest strengths is my ability to communicate. [Maybe not right this minute, but… ] I'm confident that I can find a common language of mutual respect with my students. I also think that being a younger man is an asset because of the lack of male teachers and male role models in the community. I'm a collaborator and a fast learner, and I can internalize criticism and feedback from anyone: student, colleague, or administrator.” I stopped and another idea sprang to mind. “I'm very excited to become a teacher. I am dedicated to improving myself and doing anything possible to help my students. I'll go the distance.” I winced inside at the final melodramatic declaration.
Ms. Atero gave a generic nod. “What are your weaknesses?”
This question is a trap. The key is to twist some kind of strength into sounding like a weakness, like “I overprepare” or “I'm a perfectionist, so I need to work on how I occasionally bend deadlines because I want anything with my name on it to be as well done as possible.” At the time, my mind was clouded with fatigue and intimidation from Ms. Atero's transformation from congenial conversant to stone-faced interrogator. I swallowed my rank all-nighter saliva. “I don't know. I might be in over my head.”
We stared at each other for a moment. Susan's smile returned like a sunburst. “You're going to see some stuff, but it'll be worth it!” The ominous statement was defused by its joyful dispensation. She said, “I'm going to represent you in District 10 to set up visits to schools that could be a good match for you. You're all set!”
A thrill surged within me as I headed to the school stage to get fingerprinted for my city employee file. Then in my fifth year in New York, I had lived in five different apartments, played pickup basketball at the neighborhood blacktop, knew the subway lines inside out, rocked out at CBGB, bought from street vendors, lingered for hours in the Central Park gazebo beyond Strawberry Fields, and watched the World Trade Center towers fall before my eyes. As I pressed my fingers hard to the inkpad, I felt a swell of pride in going to work for the city I loved.
On June 16, 2003, the incoming Fellows congregated in Avery Fisher Hall at Lincoln Center for opening ceremonies, where the keynote speaker declared the event the largest assemblage of talent at one time ever to fill this room. A middle school student spoke about how her teacher, a third-year Fellow, had changed her life. When the Fellow and her star student reunited onstage, a school band played “Amazing Grace,” and many new teachers cried.
Three days later, I was randomly assigned to Mr. Aaron Rose's first-grade class at P.S. 85 for a “structured observation.” The 2002–2003 school year was in its penultimate week, so Fellows were warned that we might see classes conducted more informally than usual. I was glad to be headed into a functioning inner-city classroom and away from the barrage of motivational lectures that had dominated the week up to that point. (A room-shaking applause line: “The young teachers have the fresh ideas! Does that veteran teacher really have thirty years of experience or just one year of experience thirty times!”)
I took the D train to 182nd–183rd Street and exited onto the Grand Concourse, a broad throughway with three medians and aggressively honk-happy traffic. I passed the ancient brick Gospel Love Assembly where a morose queue of about twenty waited for a free meal. On a side street, some teens and a naked toddler pranced near a fire hydrant geyser. Small establishments selling carpet, divorce documents, and groceries lined the dogshit-smeared pavement. I was the only white face crossing the Concourse to 184th Street, where air-brushed murals paid homage to deceased neighbors.
I walked through the monolithic school's main entrance, under the stone threshold marked “Public School 85: The Great Expectations School.”
I waited in the second-floor Teacher Center resource room with a dozen other new Fellows until Principal Kendra Boyd, a tall woman in her late fifties, enthusiastically greeted us. She spoke to the rookies about P.S. 85’s mission for three specific aims: clear expectations, academic rigor, and accountable talk. I figured Mrs. Boyd had to be a brilliant and methodical woman (maybe even an unorthodox genius with that side-ponytail) to run a massive school like this.
Barbara Chatton, the in-house mentor for first-year teachers, also held the floor for a few minutes. B
arbara informed us about P.S. 85’s strong commitment to supporting new teachers, because they are the future of education and everyone knows how hard it is to be new. I desperately wanted Barbara to be my mentor and Mrs. Boyd to be my principal.
When the meeting broke, I was directed to the aluminum annex in the parking lot. Inside the “minischool,” which houses kindergarten and first-grade classes, the environment was colorful and air-conditioned. Lively bulletin board displays lined the walls. Behind the windows of their classroom doors, teachers gestured exuberantly to rapt audiences of children. I couldn't restrain an excited grin.
I knocked on Mr. Rose's door in the middle of a lesson. “Hi, I'm Dan Brown from the Teaching Fellows.”
Mr. Rose was a tall black man with a deep voice. With a genuine smile, he shook my hand firmly and said, “Terrific. Mr. Brown, welcome.”
Mr. Brown. Get used to it, I thought.
During “independent work,” a complete-the-sentence work-sheet on pronouns, I sat with two scowling boys, Theo and Jihard, who refused to write their names. “Jihard, if I were telling you about how much I like Theo's pen, I'd say I like blank pen. I like…” I waved at Theo and the pen.
Jihard frowned and mumbled, “His pen.”
“Yes! Excellent! In that sentence ‘his’ and ‘Theo's’ would mean the same thing. ‘His’ is a pronoun for ‘Theo.’ Because it's ‘his’ pen and it's ‘Theo's’ pen! And Theo, if I were telling you about how much I like… what's that girl in the black T-shirt's name?”
“Yollymar.”
Jihard interrupted, “That ain't Yollymar! Thas Daniella. She the line leader.”
“If I asked you where Daniella bought that black T-shirt, but I didn't know her name, what would I ask?” Theo looked at me blankly and stood up. “Theo, sit down. Fill in the blank for me: Where did… get that shirt?”
“How I'm supposed to know?” Theo grumbled.
“Where did she get that shirt,” Jihard stated.
“Yes! ‘She’ and ‘Daniella’ mean the same thing. ‘She’ is a pronoun for ‘Daniella!’ Jihard, you're a pronoun superstar. Theo, you get an assist.” I gave them both five, and they got to work on their sheets. Jihard handed back a perfect paper, and Theo got two correct out of twelve, an improvement over his previously blank page.
When the time came for me to leave Mr. Rose's class, Mafatu and Yollymar presented me with crayon pictures and roly-poly Cory Jones gave me a pencil drawing of the two of us holding hands.
I walked away from P.S. 85 full of excitement and relief. I had witnessed no violence, sexual harassment, or ultra-jaded zombie teachers as I had anticipated from my preconceived image of an inner-city school. If confused Theo and moody Jihard were the “problem kids,” the place didn't seem so bad. At least that's what I thought then.
* * *
Along with over seven hundred other Fellows, I was automatically enrolled in Mercy College, a graduate school contracted by the Department of Education to run the Fellows’ coursework. Sarah Gerson, a third-grade teacher in Harlem, was my adjunct professor and “Fellow Advisor” for five hours each afternoon.
In the beginning, I kept a low profile at Fellow Advisor sessions, avoiding the group-hug atmosphere cultivated by Sarah and half of the group. I was also the youngest of the twenty-eight new teachers in the room. (The average age of a Teaching Fellow in 2003 was thirty-one.) We drew up unit plans, lesson plans, behavior plans, lists of rules, lists of routines, lists of ideal classroom materials, and lists of “higher-order thinking” questions. We wrote letters to ourselves, statements of our goals, statements of our strengths, and statements of our weaknesses. I distilled my goals into a sentence fragment: “Teach and model accountable character and citizenship while maintaining high expectations for helping students to become stronger problem solvers and self-motivated learners.” (The high expectations bit was inspired by my P.S. 85 visit.) We walked on rhetorical eggshells for two hours once, talking about the n-word. There were many mentions of dedication, immersion, passion, and commitment.
We were packing up our satchels after another jargon-heavy discussion about poverty when Sarah offhandedly articulated my un-ease: “I hope these discussions give you something good to think about, but they're really nothing compared to being in the real situation. What we're doing right now is like reading a book about sailing. On September eighth, you'll be out there, probably in a defective vessel, alone in stormy waters.”
After my structured observation at P.S. 85, I left letters for Mrs. Boyd and Ms. Chatton requesting an interview but received no response. Meanwhile, I had been assigned to spend my mornings as a seventh-grade apprentice teacher of summer school at M.S. 399, rumored to be the lowest-scoring middle school in New York City. The apathetic students terrorized their milquetoasty math teacher Mr. Akimo (“Fuck this nigger!”) and shrugged at their imminent failure (“Seventh grade was out in the hall, man”). After a week, I submitted a grievance to the Fellows office, and over Independence Day weekend I received a miraculous e-mail informing me that I had been switched to familiar P.S. 85.
Heading up the P.S. 85 stairwell to the office to receive my classroom assignment on the morning of July 7, I came face-to-face with Mr. Rose. “Mr. Brown!” he called warmly, shaking my hand. He already had one Fellow in his room but said I should work with him too. In the office, he asked the secretary if I was needed anywhere specific. The baffled woman, apparently having no authority over Fellow room placements, shrugged.
Mr. Rose followed a tightly regimented program for the summer school half day. He did a half-hour read-aloud from Help! I'm Trapped in the First Day of Summer Camp by Todd Strasser, whose catalog includes Help! I'm Trapped in the First Day of School, Help! I'm Trapped in the President's Body, Help! I'm Trapped in a Professional Wrestler's Body, Help! I'm Trapped in Santa's Body, and Help! I'm Trapped in a Vampire's Body. Then the class moved on to Guided Reading, during which the teacher works intensively with one group while the other students do “focused activities,” or busywork. Mr. Rose made three small groups, and the days glided by on cruise control.
One day during Guided Reading, I noticed that Jimmarie looked particularly sad. Jimmarie Moreno-Bonilla was a pretty Puerto Rican girl who carried herself with a quiet grace. She rarely raised her hand, but she watched intently during my Help! I'm Trapped in… performances. (Mr. Rose had happily relinquished the read-aloud responsibilities to me after my hyperanimated first recital.)
I asked Jimmarie if she wanted to talk about what was bothering her. We moved to the back of the room and she started sniffling. She told me that her father was a bad man and she wasn't supposed to see him, but he came over last night and started yelling and broke the phone. Now she couldn't talk to her grandma in Puerto Rico the way she did every other Sunday night. Also her grandma's planned Christmas visit to New York had been canceled because the ticket was too expensive.
Jimmarie used to live with her grandma in a house in Puerto Rico. She had her own white room that she could decorate however she wanted. Then her mother moved her to the Bronx, to Florida, back to the Bronx, back to Miami, then back to the Bronx. P.S. 85 had been her sixth school in three years. All she wanted was to return to Puerto Rico.
“My grandma is my heart,” Jimmarie said quietly, mostly to herself, in her perpetually hoarse voice. “From the floor to the moon, that's how much I love her.”
“Jimmarie, that's the most beautiful thing I've ever heard someone say about a grandma. You're a writer!”
“No, I'm no good at writing,” Jimmarie said quickly, immediately associating writing with the overwhelming and mundane assignments from her struggles in school.
“Let's do it together. We'll make a book about your grandma. We can call it From the Floor to the Moon. Do you want to work with me to make a book for her?” Jimmarie's face warmed for the first time into a smile and I felt my insides turn over.
In the following weeks, Jimmarie and I made time each day to talk out ideas for pages and pict
ures. She had great difficulty writing down ideas that she could articulate orally. Usually, she would stop writing after the first few words. I brought in my mini-cassette recorder and recorded conversations with her, out of which we selected and transcribed the highlights. After we had compiled a list of notes for each page, I gave Jimmarie crayons to draw corresponding pictures. I also shot a roll of photos for the book. Jimmarie said she felt like a star.
I scanned her drawings into my computer and printed them out with her text on the page, leaving space on some pages for photographs. I bound three copies: one for Jimmarie, one for her grandmother, and one for me.
I think about my grandma so many times every day. I used to live with her in Puerto Rico, but now I live in New York City in the Bronx, so I miss her a lot. It's important for me to think about my grandma.
She always makes my favorite foods when we are together. She knows I love hot dogs and French fries and salad, but no salad dressing!
My grandma is a beautiful dancer. I love to watch her dance with my grandpa in her house.She will play a CD and they will dance, dance, dance.
She would dance with me too, but I really love it when she sings with me. She sings like a music star. We have the same voice.
My grandma always has the prettiest clothes and the prettiest shoes. My favorite is her red suit with black shoes. Her favorite color is red, so sometimes I think of red things when I think about her. And I think about her glasses and soft, black hair.
She also has the prettiest name. It is Migdalia Luz. I love my grandpa's name too. It is Juan Bonilla Rodriguez Nieve Cocseción Alberto Castro Martinez. I call him Poppy.
I have four imaginary cousins. Their names are Kimberly, Delma, Nachely, and Angelee. My grandma is their grandma too.
My grandma is my mom's mommy.My mom is the best mom in the world for me. You can tell my grandma was a good mommy to her.
