by Field, Mark
Beginning with this speech, Buffy’s response to the challenge posed by the First became increasingly controversial. To be honest, I didn’t notice anything about this episode. I saw the show through such a Buffy-centric lens that I almost reflexively defended whatever she said or did. I thought Buffy was generally encouraging in the teaser and I had no problem with the “Cruciamentum”. However, lots of viewers began criticizing her actions and the debate got increasingly heated as S7 went along. Since this is early and the discussion pretty restrained still, I’ll give you a flavor of it:
Cjl: “Field Marshall von Buffy keeps trying to put everything in absolutes (good/evil, demon/human, etc., etc.), but she's reacting to the extremity of the battle with the First Evil, and losing sight of the ambiguities she learned over the first six seasons. I think this is exactly what the First Evil wants.”
Peggin: “I don't think this is about Buffy losing sight of those things. IMO, she's teaching the Potential's exactly what they need to know in order to stay alive. She doesn't want to put the Potentials' lives in danger by having them start out with the idea that, "Gee, this vampire might turn out to be a good guy -- maybe I shouldn't stake him." Buffy knows of exactly one vampire in the history of the world who has ever switched sides voluntarily. Making this an issue for the Potentials, making a point of the fact that it's even a remote possibility that any given vampire could turn out to be a good guy, is only going to get them killed, and fast.
Look at it this way -- if you were in charge of Army boot camp, and you had personal experience of seeing exactly one enemy soldier wave a white flag and ask to join your side, would you bring that up to the new recruits you were just training? When they go into battle, do you want them hesitating before they pull the trigger, just in case the other guy might not really be the enemy and wants to join your team?...
I've seen quite a few comments to the effect that Buffy is on some kind of power trip, and it's obviously just going completely over my head. I don't see her going all power trippy. I see her letting a whole bunch of strangers live in her house. I see her teaching others to use their own power in order to keep themselves alive and in order to fight evil. How does any of this point towards Buffy treating power as an end in itself?”
Cjl: “She's obsessed with "winning" the game she's playing with the First Evil when she might be better off not playing. … As the season has progressed, she's gradually pushed aside the real reasons why she's fighting … and adopted an increasingly ruthless, win-at-all-costs policy.”
FinnMacCool: “It may be true that she can't beat the First Evil (I repeat: may be true, that still isn't a certainity), and it may be true that the best she can do is simply contain the First, but she shouldn't TRY just for containment. She should try with all of her might to destroy the First Evil forever, even if it is impossible to achieve anything more than balance, as you say. Because balance isn't caused by trying to control the unbalanced force. Balance is caused by two equal forces opposing each other. So, while Buffy might end up keeping the balance only, it will be a result of her attempts to destroy the First.”
Cjl: “We've all grown rather disturbed over the past few weeks [he means starting with BotN] at the increasing disconnect between the Buffy we've all known and loved for six years, and the hardened, take-no-prisoners slayer who's trying to whip her troops into shape like a veteran military commander.
I think we're more concerned with the possibility that Buffy has lost sight of why she's fighting, about her increasing isolation from her friends and her sister, about her losing track of the ambiguities she's learned over the course of the series. She isn't approaching the problem of the First Evil from a "how do I protect the ones I love" perspective; she's approaching it from a "how do I kick this thing back to Hell" perspective. She seems more interested in beating the First Evil with the application of Raw Power; and with that attitude comes the danger of becoming the demon you're fighting.”
Finn MacCool: “As for Buffy being less personal and more like a military leader recently, I have a couple points for you to consider: first, she's usually been in commander mode only when around the proto-Slayers, and to them she really is more of a commander and not nearly close enough to be a friend; and second, her actions towards Clem and Spike reveal that she isn't really hardened emotionally or being unambigous, rather she's acting that way because being the tough but still emotionally vulnerable Buffy we all know would disenhearten the scared and confused proto-Slayers and not inspire much confidence in her as a leader. Buffy only became commander girl after the potentials came under her care and one of them was killed because she didn't believe Buffy could protect them. At the moment, Buffy can't afford to show the more human side of herself because that would only lead to further loss of morale among the proto-Slayers, and possibly more deaths as a result.”
OnM: “Pay less attention to what Buffy overtly says, and more to what Buffy covertly does, and you will see that her behavior towards the protos really is not as formally militaristic and role-playing rigid as it might first appear. Yes, she initially gets their attention by throwing a battle axe at a target, and then gives a very Patton-esque speech to the 'troops'. But, she also makes a significant effort to appeal to the latent passion stirring within the souls of her students, trying to get across to them the nature of what it means to be a Slayer, to have a destiny or a calling. She states, seemingly coldly, that "some of us will die" in the battle to come, but immediately follows that remark with "decide right now it isn't going to be you". Tough love, yes, but it is love. There really isn't the luxury of time for anything else right now, and once again the weight is on Buffy's shoulders. If the protos manage to survive the coming apocalyptic battle, there will be time enough to start teaching them the discriminating nuances and subtleties of existence in a grey world when demons can be forces for good and humans can become the most horrific of enemies.”
This debate would become a central feature for much of the rest of S7. Keep it in mind as we go through the next 7 episodes.
Moving on to other, and equally important, issues, the title of this episode seemingly refers to Dawn as a Potential. That was, in a way, a shout out to fans who’d speculated on her having some special power since the end of S5, based at least partly on the “same blood” thing (which Anya, in another nod to the audience, “doesn’t get”).
Dawn turned out not to be a Potential, of course. We could see that even before she realized it and told Amanda. The superimposed fight scenes with Buffy in the crypt and Dawn in the classroom are nicely paralleled with dialogue and flash cuts to let everyone see that Dawn does pretty much everything wrong until the Bringers inadvertently rescue her. Here, for example, is what Buffy says:
“Know how to stay calm, centered. Every move is important, every blow's got to be part of your plan 'cause you make that one mistake, and it's over. You're not the slayer.”
As she’s speaking these words, here’s what we see of Dawn:
“Dawn runs to the front of the classroom where she grabs the flagpole with the California state flag on it. She struggles to break the flagpole in half on the edge of a lab desk, but finally does splinter it. She leaves the part that the flag is on and starts swinging the jagged wooden pole at the vampire a few times, then loses her balance and falls to the floor. The vampire pounces on her.”
The scene then cuts back to Buffy, and we hear her say, “You're not a potential. You're dead.” Dawn would be dead if the Bringers hadn’t chosen that moment to enter the room.
But while Dawn isn’t a Potential, she does represent, metaphorically, Buffy’s potential, as we’ve seen since S5. The title has a double meaning and it’s important for the season.
Don’t get me wrong: Dawn does something noteworthy in the episode even if she’s not a Potential. It wasn’t noteworthy because she has hidden powers, but because when faced with the fact that Amanda was the real target, Dawn relinquished her claim of her own free will. She stepped aside when she need
ed to for the sake of the cause. More than that, she went back to doing her job without any complaint. That was a very adult thing to do.
Xander’s praise of Dawn gets a lot of love in fandom, but I have some issues with it. For one thing, the whole context is odd. He’s contrasting himself and Dawn as “powerless” compared to Buffy, Willow, Anya, and Oz. He says, “Working with the slayer. Seeing my friends get more and more powerful. A witch. A demon. Hell, I could fit Oz in my shaving kit, but come a full moon, he had a wolfy mojo not to be messed with. Powerful. All of them.”
But in all these cases the power is far from an unmitigated good. Take Oz, for example. The werewolf is a metaphor for unrestrained id. It didn’t benefit Oz, it caused him to lose the woman he loved and to leave Sunnydale. Anya may have been powerful, but only when she was evil. And while Buffy and Willow both are able to accomplish good with their power, both face serious consequences as a result of it.
Given the context, this, for example, is just wrong: “How much harder it is for the rest of us…. They'll never know how tough it is, Dawnie, to be the one who isn't chosen. To live so near to the spotlight and never step in it.” Nor does Xander understand that being “chosen” isn’t necessarily something good; he’s forgotten how often Buffy has resisted the idea that she was chosen. And if I were quibbling, I’d add that none of Oz, Willow, or Anya was “chosen”, so they do know what it’s like not to be “chosen”.
Quibble aside, it’s the words “harder” and “how tough it is” that really grate. Sorry, but Xander’s life isn’t tougher than Buffy’s – and that’s who he’s really talking about – any more than mine is tougher than Martin Luther King’s. It’s a shame, really, because Xander doesn’t have to overstate the case in order to make his point.
Since my evaluation of his speech might seem harsh and even graceless, I’ll add some dialogue from people who disagreed with me at AtPO. Note that some of their points are ones I agree with and made above:
Solitude1056: “I don't think Xander was patting himself on the back so much as letting Dawn know that he's in the same boat of seeming ordinaryness, but that he's figured out that being ordinary, and trying anyway, may be the most extraordinary act of all. I never thought, for even a second, that he was reassuring himself or trying to convince himself. I don't think he needs to convince himself that he contributes - TtG/Grave showed him once and for all that it's possible to save the world despite being 'powerless'. What I do think he was doing, though, was applauding Dawn. He was doing what any parent would do for a child they're proud of, especially in a case where the child has given up something or acted otherwise nobly. It's the old speech about "I know that deep down you wish you'd done ____ rather than ____. I know it was hard to make that sacrifice, and I'm proud of you."
Shambleau: “Xander spent the summer telling the Summers girls his story of saving Willow and the world "with my WORDS" ad nauseum, so I see that as support for Sophist's belief that there's a component of tooting his own horn in that speech. It may be slightly unseemly, yes. It's also human and understandable. He's flawed even when he does something wonderful, but that doesn't diminish him in my eyes. I want to strangle the big lug sometimes and then he'll do something so full of heart I feel like bowing down before him. Here you can read a little of both aspects of his nature into the speech he gave Dawn, if you're so inclined. It doesn't affect my reaction, though. The speech still has me dosing myself with allergy medicine, for those watery eyes, you know.”
Random: “I admit that I cringed just slightly at the undercurrent of backpatting initially, but I realized that we were listening to Xander here....
What he was offering Dawn was the Wisdom of the Zeppo(tm). He was telling her, plain and simple, that the courage (which he never claimed for himself, mind you) to cast off your disappointment at being ordinary, not-Chosen, and nevertheless give everything to the support of the cause was an extraordinary one. He was saying, and legitimately to some extent (as I said, I shared your doubts), that following the path of the Chosen ones without being Chosen yourself was harder than when you know you're special, Chosen. He "saw" Dawn -- he saw, a person capable of stepping aside for the sake of the war, a person who does what they can, when they can, and even when she tasted greatness, she understood that the greatness was in service of humanity, not her own ego...so she stepped aside. Xander doesn't envy Buffy or the potentials for their lives, or their lives to come. He merely notes that choosing to play on the field when everyone around you is larger, tougher, better at the game, requires a fortitude and courage that the naturally brilliant athletes (to carry the metaphor) will never quite understand. To know you're the least capable player on the team and still go out and give it your all...there's a peculiar honor in that form of courage.
Eh, I'm soft on the doof, I know. Buffy has the toughest life of them all (and she's my favorite anyway) but Xander and Dawn have it harder than her in that one regard: they must deal with the fact that they will always be second-string...and still forge on.”
Just to clarify my position after I got some criticism in comments, I think that Dawn did a very good thing and that Xander was also doing a good thing in praising her for that. I just wish Xander could have praised Dawn without implicitly patting himself on the back and dissing Buffy while doing so. I’d say more, but I have to go kick a puppy now.
Dawn’s return praise of Xander is also dubious on the merits. As both D’Hoffryn (“And the young man, he sees with the eyeballs of love.”) and Anya (“Xander, you've always seen what you wanted to.”) mentioned in Selfless, “seeing” isn’t really one of Xander’s strengths. In fact, much of the time he’s clueless (e.g., in STSP when Buffy suggests using Spike to track Gnarl). Nevertheless, it’s a nice thing for Dawn to say.
One final point. Andrew’s use of the snake skin may seem like just part of his weirdness, but you have to wonder if Willow didn’t see it as a reference to Warren. Andrew says later that he hates his free will, but if he’d compared himself to Willow rather than Spike he’d have had a better case.
Trivia notes: (1) Buffy called the Ubervamp “the Chaka Khan”, for which see the link. (2) Buffy mentioned snausages, which are a commercial dog treat. (3) Keeping up with Andrew’s geek references is really hard. For those in these 2 sentences, see the links: “I'm like Vegeta on Dragonball Z. I used to be a pure Saiyan, and now I fight for the side of Goku.” (4) Dawn mentioned the “glamazon” in her gym class. A “glamazon” is a tall, beautiful, athletic (h/t Bruce) woman, with the implication of belligerence. (5) Andrew wanted to know when they were going to replace the microwave. The microwave was destroyed in CWDP. Just one of those little touches that I love; the writers knew they could count on their fans to remember that. (6) When Clem shows the Potentials what he can do as a demon, that’s a reference to the movie Beetlejuice. (7) Amanda’s description of Buffy as a “high functioning schizophrenic” is probably another inside joke for the fans, this time a reference to the events of Normal Again.
The Killer in Me
The Killer In Me is, I think, a very good episode which could have been a great one and just misses. The basic concept is excellent and IMO Alyson Hannigan and Adam Busch both do great jobs. Part of my disappointment is that some of the Spike scenes are played almost as slapstick. Part of it is my annoyance at the lame joke about touching Giles, which bothered me a lot the first time around but which I ignore on re-watch. I, uh, won’t touch the Giles story and instead will focus on the important ones, Spike and Willow.
Some people had a problem with the fact that the Initiative lab still existed, contrary to what the government official instructed, somewhat contradictorily, be done at the end of Primeval: “The Initiative itself will be filled in with concrete. Burn it down, gentlemen. Burn it down, and salt the Earth.” My view is that the failure to follow through is all too typical of government and not a retcon. In any case, it makes for a nice metaphor of Buffy and Spike stumbling around in the dark to find a solution to Spike’s ch
ip/soul nature.
Buffy’s decision about the chip would seem to be easy after her “I believe in you” speech. It’s hard to show that belief by denying someone free will. Still, Buffy’s a protector too and the chip may be necessary if Spike gets triggered again. One thing is clear: Spike can’t make any real progress on his journey as long as the chip is there. The chip was Spike’s internal panopticon. His soul is his authentic self. Removing the chip is essential to him accepting moral authority for his own actions, something he hasn’t yet done as we see from the teaser:
BUFFY
OK. But you've been fine. In close contact with the girls.
SPIKE
(looks at Buffy) With you by my side, yeah. You won't let me hurt one of them.
He fears the killer inside him, just as Willow does, and, for that matter, Andrew does.
If Buffy does decide to remove it, that puts Spike to a real test. For the past 3 years Buffy has to some extent protected him even when she probably shouldn’t have, because he was defenseless against everyone but her, and defenseless against her for much of the time. That won’t be true if the chip comes out, so the uncertainty about the continued presence of his “trigger” creates a risk for Spike as well as for those around Buffy and even Buffy herself – not of being attacked by Spike, but of having to stake someone she obviously cares for. The existence of the risk posed by the trigger means that Spike has one more step to take before he completes the journey which began in The Initiative.
In comments, local-max pointed out that we don’t see Riley, but this episode closes out his arc in a much better way than As You Were. The military leaves it up to Buffy to decide because Riley respects her choices.
