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(23) Replaced ‘Ixian undead’ with ‘Ixian Undead’.
(24) Replaced ‘your psi-screen’ with ‘your Psi-screen’. Replaced ‘head in which’ with ‘head from which’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘them, or’ with ‘them or’.
(25) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(26) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(28) Replaced ‘Item, or’ with ‘Item or’.
(29) Replaced ‘spell — Slow Fall — and’ with ‘spell Slow Fall and’.
(32) Replaced all occurrences of ‘free-standing’ with ‘freestanding’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(33) Replaced ‘Gate and, before’ with ‘Gate, and before’.
(34) Replaced ‘two directions’ with ‘two directions.’.
(35) Replaced ‘Mindblast and Kai-surge’ with ‘Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge’. Added ‘If you win the fight and you used the Sommerswerd, turn to 173’. Replaced ‘If you win the fight,’ with ‘If you win the fight without using the Sommerswerd,’.
(36) Replaced ‘zigzaging’ with ‘zigzagging’. Replaced ‘crystal spire’ with ‘Crystal Spire’. Replaced ‘shockwave’ with ‘shock wave’.
(38) Replaced ‘demonlord’ with ‘Demonlord’.
(39) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘splutters, ‘it's’ with ‘splutters. ‘It's’.
(40) Replaced ‘Upon the instant’ with ‘At the instant’. Replaced ‘demonlord's’ with ‘Demonlord's’.
(42) Replaced ‘Ixian undead’ with ‘Ixian Undead’. Replaced ‘feet first’ with ‘feet-first’.
(44) Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’. Replaced ‘intensity and, for’ with ‘intensity, and for’.
(45) Added ‘This being is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Replaced ‘If, at’ with ‘If at’. Replaced ‘fight, you’ with ‘fight you’.
(46) Replaced ‘power word Battlespell’ with ‘battle-spell Power Word’. Replaced ‘power word — Gloar! — at’ with ‘power-word Gloar! at’. Replaced ‘keyhole, then’ with ‘keyhole; then’.
(48) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’.
(50) Replaced ‘Ixian undead’ with ‘Ixian Undead’.
(52) Replaced ‘bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(53) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Strength — upon’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Strength upon’. Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘demonlord’ with ‘Demonlord’. Added ‘This being is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.’, copied from Section 341, earlier in the adventure.
(54) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(55) Replaced ‘crystal spire’ with ‘Crystal Spire’.
(56) Replaced ‘Crack!’ with ‘crack!’.
(57) Replaced ‘minions you’ with ‘minions, you’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(59) Moved the choice to use Telegnosis to the first position in the list. Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord or higher’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Animal Mastery, and’ with ‘Animal Mastery and’.
(61) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Sense Evil — you’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Sense Evil you’. Replaced ‘he splutters, ‘it's’ with ‘he splutters. ‘It's’.
(62) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘crystal spire’ with ‘Crystal Spire’. Replaced ‘shockwave’ with ‘shock wave’.
(63) Replaced ‘Backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’.
(64) Replaced ‘the shimmering curtain of light by which you arrived here’ with ‘the shimmering curtain of light you saw before you arrived here’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Replaced ‘Sommerswerd, and’ with ‘Sommerswerd and’. Replaced ‘Item, or’ with ‘Item or’.
(66) Replaced ‘Hard a-port!’ with ‘Hard a'port!’. Replaced ‘swig, then’ with ‘swig, and then’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(67) Replaced ‘chaos-creatures’ with ‘Chaos-creatures’. Replaced ‘Chaos horde’ with ‘Chaos-horde’. Added ‘Unless you have Grand Weaponmastery and are a Sun Knight or higher, you may not use a two-handed weapon (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, or Spear) for this combat.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(68) Replaced ‘all of your Backpack items’ with ‘all of your Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘wildly, then’ with ‘wildly; then’.
(69) Changed the illustration from being numbered (Illustration V) to an unnumbered minor illustration similar to how puzzles are handled in other books. Replaced ‘following grid’ with ‘grid’.
(71) Replaced ‘Grand Nexus, and’ with ‘Grand Nexus and’.
(72) Replaced ‘demonlord’ with ‘Demonlord’. Replaced ‘senses and, in’ with ‘senses, and in’.
(73) Replaced ‘main mast’ with ‘mainmast’. Replaced ‘fifteen thousand’ with ‘eleven thousand’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(74) Replaced ‘Bulkhead door’ with ‘Bulkhead Door’. Replaced ‘zero’ with ‘zero or below’.
(75) Replaced all occurrences of ‘demonlord’ with ‘Demonlord’. Replaced ‘delete this weapon’ with ‘delete this Weapon’. Replaced ‘pre-emptive’ with ‘preemptive’.
(76) Replaced ‘plan you’ with ‘plan, you’. Replaced ‘barrels and’ with ‘barrels, and’.
(77) Reduced the illustration number from VI to V (see erratum for Section 69). Added ‘The Power Spike is a magical Dagger.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(79) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘despatch’ with ‘dispatch’.
(80) Replaced ‘creamy-coloured’ with ‘cream-coloured’.
(81) Replaced ‘Bulkhead door’ with ‘Bulkhead Door’. Replaced ‘zero’ with ‘zero or below’. Replaced ‘power word’ with ‘power-word’.
(83) Replaced ‘north-western’ with ‘northwestern’. Replaced ‘Ardan and’ with ‘Ardan, and’.
(84) Replaced ‘crystal spire’ with ‘Crystal Spire’.
(86) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘8’ with ‘9’. Replaced ‘above it, then’ with ‘above it; then’.
(89) Replaced ‘at its centre’ with ‘from its centre’. Replaced ‘round, by’ with ‘round by’. Reduced the illustration number from VII to VI (see erratum for Section 69).
(90) Replaced ‘raising a Deathstaff’ with ‘raising the Deathstaff’.
(92) Replaced ‘its feet, then’ with ‘its feet; then’.
(96) Added ‘If you used the Sommerswerd, turn to 238.’. Added ‘Kajarda are undead.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(97) Replaced ‘swig, then’ with ‘swig, and then’.
(101) Replaced ‘korlinium scabbard’ with ‘Korlinium Scabbard’.
(103) Replaced ‘bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(104) Replaced ‘still to be’ with ‘to still be’.
(105) Replaced all occurrences of ‘demonlord’ with ‘Demonlord’.
(106) Replaced ‘galley’ with ‘gallery’. Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord or higher’. Replaced ‘Grand Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Grand Huntmastery and’.
(108) Replaced ‘unnervering’ with ‘unnerving’.
(109) Replaced ‘lightning swift’ with ‘lightning-swift’.
(110) Replaced ‘at its centre’ with ‘from its centre’. Replaced ‘bonuses to your COMBAT SKILL’ with ‘bonuses’. Replaced ‘third round, by’ with ‘third round by’.
(111) Replaced ‘simultaneously to fight’ with ‘to simultaneously fight’. Replaced ‘chaos-creatures’ with ‘Chaos-creatures’.
(112) Replaced ‘Brother
hood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(113) Replaced ‘attained, above’ with ‘attained above’.
(114) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(116) Replaced ‘Kai sixth sense’ with ‘Kai Sixth Sense’.
(117) Replaced ‘court martial’ with ‘court-martial’. Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’.
(118) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(120) Replaced ‘bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(121) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Lightning Hand — and’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Lightning Hand and’. Reduced the illustration number from VIII to VII (see erratum for Section 69).
(123) Replaced ‘demonlord’ with ‘Demonlord’. Added ‘(count 0 as a 1)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(124) Replaced ‘hurling towards’ with ‘hurtling towards’. Replaced ‘both’ with ‘both’.
(125) Added ‘Kajarda are undead.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(127) Replaced ‘galley’ with ‘gallery’.
(128) Replaced ‘place it into your belt’ with ‘stow it in your belt’. Replaced ‘in Magnamund’ with ‘on Magnamund’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(129) Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(130) Replaced ‘Mindblast and Kai-surge’ with ‘Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge’.
(131) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(132) Replaced ‘head first’ with ‘head-first’. Replaced ‘Ixian undead’ with ‘Ixian Undead’.
(133) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Breathe Water’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Breathe Water’. Replaced ‘sea water’ with ‘seawater’.
(135)Replaced ‘tip; the’ with ‘tip — the’.
(136) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Levitation’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Levitation’.
(137) Replaced ‘chaos-creatures’ with ‘Chaos-creatures’. Replaced ‘Chaos horde’ with ‘Chaos-horde’. Added ‘ Unless you have Grand Weaponmastery and are a Sun Knight or higher, you may not use a two-handed weapon (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, or Spear) for this combat.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(138) Replaced ‘Backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’.
(139) Replaced ‘disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(140) Reduced the illustration number from IX to VIII (see erratum for Section 69).
(141) Replaced ‘millenniums’ with ‘millennia’. Replaced ‘they were crafted by Old Kingdom armourers’ with ‘they were crafted by armourers during the Age of Eternal Night’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(142) Added ‘This being is immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast.’, copied from Section 341, earlier in the adventure.
(143) Replaced all occurrences of ‘free-standing’ with ‘freestanding’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(145) Replaced ‘Chaos horde’ with ‘Chaos-horde’. Replaced ‘their misshapen form’ with ‘their misshapen forms’. Replaced ‘six rounds, by’ with ‘six rounds by’.
(146) Replaced ‘infra-red’ with ‘infrared’.
(146) Replaced ‘south-easterly’ with ‘southeasterly’. Replaced ‘south-westerly’ with ‘southwesterly’.
(148) Replaced ‘attained, above’ with ‘attained above’.
(149) Replaced ‘Ghosts, in’ with ‘Ghosts in’.
(150) Replaced ‘demonlord’ with ‘Demonlord’. Replaced ‘before, in’ with ‘before in’.
(152) Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord or higher’. Replaced ‘crystal spire’ with ‘Crystal Spire’. Replaced ‘where once, in the time of the Old Kingdoms, a proud and mighty race reigned supreme’ with ‘where once, at the beginning of the Age of Eternal Night, a proud and mighty race reigned supreme’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(153) Replaced ‘main mast’ with ‘mainmast’. Reduced the illustration number from X to IX (see erratum for Section 69). Replaced ‘boom, then’ with ‘boom, and then’.
(154) Replaced ‘chaos-creatures’ with ‘Chaos-creatures’.
(155) Replaced ‘shortlived’ with ‘short-lived’.
(156) Replaced ‘cavern; by’ with ‘cavern: by’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(161) Replaced ‘Sun Thane, or higher’ with ‘Sun Thane’ because Sun Thane is the highest possible rank to have attained in this book. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(162) Replaced ‘propelled by Old Kingdom magic’ with ‘propelled by Ixian witchcraft’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(163) Replaced ‘Above you’ with ‘Above, you’. Replaced ‘hilt of rusty sword’ with ‘hilt of a rusty sword’. Replaced ‘turn to 126’ with ‘turn to 26’ (cf. Sections 37, 58, and 247).
(164) Replaced ‘in Magnamund’ with ‘on Magnamund’.
(165) Replaced ‘Lord, or higher’ with ‘Lord or higher’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘crystal spire’ with ‘Crystal Spire’. Reduced the illustration number from XI to X (see erratum for Section 69). Replaced ‘race of the Old Kingdoms reigned supreme’ with ‘race reigned supreme’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(166) Replaced ‘me my’ with ‘me, my’.
(167) Replaced ‘bonuses to your COMBAT SKILL’ with ‘bonuses’. Replaced ‘Mindblast and Kai-surge’ with ‘Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge’.
(168) Replaced ‘eye-sockets’ with ‘eye sockets’. Replaced ‘staff and, in’ with ‘staff, and in’.
(170) Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(171) Replaced ‘face-down’ with ‘face down’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘or choose’ with ‘or if you choose’.
(173) Replaced ‘crystal spire’ with ‘Crystal Spire’. Replaced ‘Deathstaff and, in’ with ‘Deathstaff, and in’. Replaced ‘senses and, in’ with ‘senses, and in’.
(175) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘have picked’ with ‘have picked.’. Replaced ‘attained, above’ with ‘attained above’.
(176) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Levitation — and’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Levitation and’. Replaced ‘chaos-creatures’ with ‘Chaos-creatures’.
(178) Replaced ‘crystal spire’ with ‘Crystal Spire’.
(179) Deleted ‘While you wait out the storm in this makeshift shelter, you must eat a Meal or lose 3 ENDURANCE points.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(180) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Special Item, do not’ with ‘Special Item, or do not’. Replaced ‘Grand Nexus, and’ with ‘Grand Nexus and’.
(181) Reduced the illustration number from XII to XI (see erratum for Section 69).
(182) Replaced ‘starboard and’ with ‘starboard, and’.
(183) Replaced ‘eye-sockets’ with ‘eye sockets’. Replaced ‘staff and, in’ with ‘staff, and in’.
(185) Replaced ‘demonlord’ with ‘Demonlord’. Replaced ‘creamy-coloured’ with ‘cream-coloured’. Replaced ‘sky, beat’ with ‘sky beat’. Replaced ‘demonlord's’ with ‘Demonlord's’. Replaced ‘the new wave of Lavas reach’ with ‘the new wave of Lavas reaches’.
(186) Replaced ‘main mast’ with ‘mainmast’. Replaced ‘undead, who is clad’ with ‘undead, clad’.
(189) Replaced ‘collison’ with ‘collision’. Replaced ‘directions, then’ with ‘directions; then’.
(190) Replaced all occurrences of ‘chaos-creatures’ with ‘Chaos-creatures’. Replaced ‘grudgingly to retreat’ with ‘to retreat grudgingly’.
(191) Replaced ‘attack upon
the’ with ‘attack the’. Replaced ‘pre-empted’ with ‘preempted’.
(192) Replaced all occurrences of ‘free-standing’ with ‘freestanding’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(193) Replaced ‘crystal spire’ with ‘Crystal Spire’.
(194) Replaced ‘korlinium scabbard’ with ‘Korlinium Scabbard’.
(195) Replaced ‘cry, ‘Ishir’ with ‘cry. ‘Ishir’. Reduced the illustration number from XIII to XII (see erratum for Section 69). Replaced ‘hundred leagues’ with ‘hundred yards’. The ship surfaces only one mile away, yet now is somehow approaching from a much greater distance?
(196) Replaced ‘Fearing your survival’ with ‘Fearing for your survival’. Replaced ‘Lord, or higher’ with ‘Lord or higher’. Replaced ‘Sun Thane, or higher’ with ‘Sun Thane’ since Sun Thane is the highest possible rank a Grand Master can have in this adventure. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.
(200) Replaced all occurrences of ‘crystal spire’ with ‘Crystal Spire’.
(201) Replaced ‘main mast’ with ‘mainmast’.
(202) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(203) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘free-standing’ with ‘freestanding’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(204) Replaced ‘cutlery and’ with ‘cutlery, and’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(206) Replaced ‘Crack!’ with ‘crack!’.
(207) Reduced the illustration number from XIV to XIII (see erratum for Section 69). Replaced ‘troop of undead soldiers are’ with ‘troop of undead soldiers is’. Replaced ‘cavern; by’ with ‘cavern: by’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(209) Replaced ‘falter and’ with ‘falter, and’. Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’.
(211) Replaced ‘explosion white-hot’ with ‘explosion of white-hot’.
(212) Replaced ‘icy chill, then’ with ‘icy chill; then’.
(213) Replaced ‘chamber, is’ with ‘chamber is’. Replaced ‘which can be found within 150 miles of Xaagon’ with ‘which lie within 150 miles to the west of Xaagon’. The answer to the first part of the puzzle should be 2, but according to the map there are 4 islands within a radius of 150 miles around Xaagon. Limiting it to islands to the west of Xaagon is the simplest way of fixing this error.
