by Joe Dever
(174) Replaced ‘script yet’ with ‘script, yet’.
(175) Added a paragraph break between ‘fighter.‘ ’ and ‘It’. Replaced ‘vassa’ with ‘Vassa’. Added a paragraph break between ‘Malduz.‘ ’ and ‘ ‘We'll’. Replaced ‘neck, then’ with ‘neck, and then’. Replaced ‘chamber of the font’ with ‘Chamber of the Font’.
(176) Replaced ‘first mate’ with ‘First Mate’. Replaced ‘say, ‘it’ with ‘say. ‘It’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’. Replaced ‘the Sergeant's’ with ‘the sergeant's’. Replaced ‘the Sergeant’ with ‘the sergeant’.
(177) Replaced ‘belltower’ with ‘bell-tower’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, or’ with ‘Huntmastery or’.
(179) Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’. Replaced ‘engine sputters into life’ with ‘engine splutters into life’. Replaced ‘A tangle of metal pipes and brass cylinders hang’ with ‘A tangle of metal pipes and brass cylinders hangs’. Replaced ‘Grand Huntmastery and Telegnosis’ with ‘Grand Huntmastery and Telegnosis’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(180) Replaced ‘Bavari hills’ with ‘Bavari Hills’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘en route’ with ‘en route’. Replaced ‘arrives there they’ with ‘arrives there, they’. Replaced ‘Temejun's’ with ‘Temujun's’. Replaced ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’ in the illustration's caption.
(181) Replaced ‘notice-board’ with ‘notice board’. Replaced ‘clay tiled’ with ‘clay-tiled’. Replaced ‘paddocks and’ with ‘paddocks, and’.
(182) Replaced ‘every 1’ with ‘each’.
(183) Replaced ‘erase 3’ with ‘deduct 3’.
(186) Replaced ‘north-eastern’ with ‘northeastern’. Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’.
(187) Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(189) Replaced ‘pursuer's torches’ with ‘pursuers' torches’.
(190) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(191) Replaced ‘men, ‘there’ with ‘men. ‘There’. Replaced ‘rogue, ‘so’ with ‘rogue. ‘So’. Replaced ‘with this he’ with ‘with this, he’.
(192) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘ — Shield — ’ with ‘Shield’.
(194) Replaced ‘gold crown’ with ‘Gold Crown’. Replaced ‘bedsheet’ with ‘bed sheet’. Replaced ‘Zuath’ with ‘zuath’.
(195) Replaced ‘slaver; he’ with ‘slaver: he’.
(200) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(201) Replaced ‘Crown and’ with ‘Crown, and’. Replaced ‘details of your’ with ‘details on your’.
(204) Replaced ‘Your weapon barely clears its scabbard before’ with ‘You barely have time to raise your weapon before’ as the previous section (Section 177) states: ‘ … you raise your weapon in readiness to strike out … ’.
(205) Replaced ‘first mate’ with ‘First Mate’.
(207) Replaced ‘Dessi capital’ with ‘Dessian capital’.
(208) Replaced ‘gold crown’ with ‘Gold Crown’. Replaced ‘one weapon instead’ with ‘one Weapon instead’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘and, with a flick of your heel, you leave’ with ‘and — with a flick of your heel — leave’.
(211) Replaced ‘Dessi uplands’ with ‘Dessian uplands’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
(212) Replaced ‘Sligh and’ with ‘Sligh, and’. Replaced ‘Come Grand’ with ‘Come, Grand’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘steeds, and with’ with ‘steeds, and’.
(213) Replaced ‘itikar’ with ‘Itikar’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’.
(214) Replaced ‘market-square’ with ‘market square’. Replaced ‘nightimes’ with ‘nights’.
(215) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘ — Counterspell — ’ with ‘Counterspell’.
(216) Replaced ‘crowns’ with ‘Crowns’. Replaced ‘good-night’ with ‘goodnight’.
(217) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘under way’ with ‘underway’.
(218) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘mountainside yet’ with ‘mountainside, yet’.
(219) Replaced ‘crown piece’ with ‘Gold Crown’. Replaced ‘mhaktis’ with ‘mhaktis’.
(220) Replaced ‘itikars’ with ‘Itikars’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(221) Replaced each occurrence of ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(222) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(223) Replaced ‘growl, then’ with ‘growl; then’.
(224) Replaced ‘pink-leafed’ with ‘pink-leaved’.
(225) Replaced ‘Kai skills’ with ‘Magnakai skills’. Replaced ‘Nexus and curing’ with ‘Nexus and Curing’.
(226) Replaced ‘clifftop’ with ‘cliff-top’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(228) Replaced ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’.
(229) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(231) Replaced ‘moments, then’ with ‘moments, and then’.
(232) Replaced ‘tavernkeeper’ with ‘tavern-keeper’. Replaced ‘agree his’ with ‘agree to his’.
(233) Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced ‘belltower’ with ‘bell-tower’. Replaced ‘above, then’ with ‘above, and then’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(234) Replaced each occurrence of ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’.
(235) Replaced ‘Fryelund forest’ with ‘Fryelund Forest’. Replaced ‘first mate’ with ‘First Mate’. Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘Here await’ with ‘Here awaits’.
(236) Replaced ‘market-square’ with ‘market square’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(238) Replaced ‘sixth senses scream’ with ‘Sixth Sense screams’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(241) Replaced ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘acrobatics and’ with ‘acrobatics, and’.
(242) Replaced ‘while away’ with ‘wile away’. Replaced ‘Flomi’ with ‘flomi’.
(243) Replaced ‘Erase Cowana’ with ‘Erase the Cowana’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(244) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘add 3’ with ‘remember to add 3’.
(247) Replaced ‘yourself, then turn to 108’ with ‘yourself, turn to 108’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘party, and’ with ‘party and’.
(249) Replaced ‘while away’ with ‘wile away’. Replaced ‘Flomi’ with ‘flomi’.
(250) Replaced ‘try and’ with ‘try to’. Replaced ‘merchant's stalls’ with ‘merchants' stalls’. Replaced ‘naivety’ with ‘naïveté’.
(251) Replaced ‘gaily dressed’ with ‘gaily-dressed’. Replaced ‘inlayed’ with ‘inlaid’.
(252) Replaced ‘Barczak stables’ with ‘Barczak Stables’. Replaced ‘hoofs’ with ‘hooves’. Replaced ‘dull clang’ with ‘dull clang’.
(255) Added a paragraph break between ‘old days.‘ ’ and ‘Kol then’.
(256) Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced ‘belltower’ with ‘bell-tower’. Replaced ‘above, then’ with ‘above, and then’. Replaced ‘
half their number search the other alley whilst the remainder stay’ with ‘half their number searches the other alley whilst the remainder stays’.
(257) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(258) Replaced ‘out!’, and cocks’ with ‘out!’ He cocks’.
(259) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(262) Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’. Replaced ‘good-night’ with ‘goodnight’.
(263) Added a paragraph break between ‘attacking ship.’ and ‘Pick a’. Replaced ‘first mate’ with ‘First Mate’.
(264) Replaced ‘artifact’ with ‘artefact’. Replaced ‘eyes, then’ with ‘eyes; then’.
(265) Replaced ‘feet and’ with ‘feet, and’.
(266) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’.
(267) Replaced ‘animal mastery’ with ‘Animal Mastery’.
(268) Replaced ‘crowd roar’ with ‘crowd roars’. Replaced ‘crowd erupt’ with ‘crowd erupts’.
(269) Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘orb, then’ with ‘orb; then’.
(271) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Added a paragraph break between ‘machines.‘ ’ and ‘He looks’. Replaced ‘Alas, t'is’ with ‘Alas, 'tis’. Replaced ‘Sommlending aren't’ with ‘Sommlending, aren't’. Replaced ‘good-night’ with ‘goodnight’.
(272) Replaced ‘coins, ‘I'll’ with ‘coins. ‘I'll’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(273) Replaced ‘symbols yet’ with ‘symbols, yet’. Replaced ‘legible for’ with ‘legible, for’. Replaced ‘wharfs’ with ‘wharves’. Replaced ‘bang’ with ‘bang’.
(274) Replaced ‘look-out’ with ‘lookout’. Replaced ‘a host of screaming warriors are’ with ‘a host of screaming warriors is’.
(275) Deleted ‘at the front of this book’. Replaced ‘To the east is reads: KHOR — 100 MILES/BISUTAN — 225 MILES. To the south it reads: KONESHI PASS TO BISUTAN — 125 MILES.’ with ‘To the east it reads, ‘Khor — 100 miles / Bisutan — 225 miles’. To the south it reads, ‘Koneshi Pass to Bisutan — 125 miles’.’. Replaced ‘the great range’ with ‘that great range’.
(276) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(277) Replaced ‘every 1’ with ‘each’.
(278) Replaced ‘first mate’ with ‘First Mate’.
(279) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’.
(281) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(282) Replaced ‘queuing’ with ‘queueing’. Replaced ‘learned sage the’ with ‘learned sage, the’. Replaced ‘mhaktis’ with ‘mhaktis’.
(285) Replaced ‘Quick men!’ with ‘Quick, men!’ Replaced ‘lieutenant, ‘follow me.’ with ‘lieutenant. ‘Follow me!’.
(286) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘crowd immediately lose’ with ‘crowd immediately loses’.
(287) Replaced ‘south-easterly’ with ‘northeasterly’ as a southeasterly wind would be an unfavorable head wind from the Lakuri Isles to Barrakeesh, since wind direction is based on where the wind originates. Replaced ‘look-out’ with ‘lookout’. Replaced ‘two-storeyed’ with ‘two-storey’. Replaced ‘one pair take’ with ‘one pair takes’.
(288) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘of Mind Charm’ with ‘Mind Charm’. Replaced ‘sea storms’ with ‘sea-storms’.
(289) Replaced ‘market-square’ with ‘market square’. Replaced ‘slaver; he’ with ‘slaver: he’.
(290) Replaced ‘sparkling waters’ with ‘sparkling water’. Replaced ‘disgrace and sometimes death awaits’ with ‘disgrace and sometimes death await’.
(291) Replaced ‘you and’ with ‘you, and’. Replaced ‘leads to this room’ with ‘leads to a room’.
(294) Replaced ‘clifftop’ with ‘cliff-top’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(295) Replaced ‘dark deserted’ with ‘dark, deserted’.
(296) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(297) Replaced ‘black furred death’ with ‘black-furred death’ in the section and in the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(298) Replaced ‘Skull and’ with ‘Skull, and’. Replaced ‘details of your’ with ‘details on your’. Replaced ‘disappointed; he’ with ‘disappointed: he’.
(299) Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(302) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’.
(303) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘ — Invisible Shield — ’ with ‘Shield’.
(304) Replaced ‘hisses, ‘you’ with ‘hisses. ‘You’.
(306) Replaced ‘look-out’ with ‘lookout’. Replaced ‘South-by-south west’ with ‘South by southwest’. Added a paragraph break between ‘a Kai.‘ ’ and ‘Lowering his’. Replaced ‘please First Mate’ with ‘please, First Mate’. Replaced ‘men o'war’ with ‘men-o'-war’.
(307) Replaced ‘effects of your Kai Discipline causes’ with ‘effects of your Kai Discipline cause’. Replaced ‘exciting wasn't it’ with ‘exciting, wasn't it’.
(310) Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced ‘one (or more)’ with ‘any’.
(311) Replaced ‘first mate’ with ‘First Mate’. Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘the Sergeant's’ with ‘the sergeant's’. Replaced ‘the Sergeant’ with ‘the sergeant’.
(314) Replaced ‘sight like’ with ‘sight, like’.
(315) Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(317) Replaced ‘as a Backpack Item’ with ‘as Backpack Items’.
(318) Replaced ‘crowd are’ with ‘crowd is’. Replaced ‘crowd immediately lose’ with ‘crowd immediately loses’.
(321) Replaced ‘blood-shot’ with ‘bloodshot’.
(322) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘add 3’ with ‘remember to add 3’.
(323) Replaced ‘hands and’ with ‘hands, and’. Replaced ‘mhaktis’ with ‘mhaktis’.
(324) Replaced ‘Laumspur’ with ‘Potion of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘Gallowbrush’ with ‘Potion of Gallowbrush’. Replaced ‘Alether’ with ‘Potion of Alether’. Replaced ‘Use only once’ with ‘One use only’. Replaced ‘placeboes’ with ‘placebos’.
(325) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.
(326) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(328) Replaced ‘Jheni’ with ‘Jhani’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(330) Replaced ‘fruits and’ with ‘fruits, and’.
(331) Replaced ‘ice-cool’ with ‘ice cool’. Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘bite, then’ with ‘bite; then’.
(333) Replaced ‘four of them’ with ‘three of them’. Replaced ‘in Kirlu’ with ‘on Kirlu’.
(334) Replaced ‘tavernkeeper’ with ‘tavern-keeper’. Replaced ‘hay loft’ with ‘hay-loft’.
(335) Replaced ‘main mast’ with ‘mainmast’.
(336) Replaced ‘market-place’ with ‘marketplace’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘market-square’ with ‘market square’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘script: Bir Rabalou — 160 miles’ with ‘script: ‘Bir Rabalou — 160 miles’ ’. Replaced ‘You, too, are’ with ‘You too are’.
(337) Replaced each occurrence of ‘river-bank’ with ‘river bank’. Replaced ‘disbelief, then’ with ‘disbelief, and then’. Replaced ‘4 or lower’ to ‘2 or lower’. Replaced ‘5 or higher’ with ‘8 or higher’. Added �
�If it is 3 or 4, turn to 196.’ and ‘If it is 5–7, turn to 256.’. These changes bring the formerly orphaned Sections 196 and 256 back into the game.
(338) Replaced ‘Backpack item’ with ‘Backpack Item’.
(339) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(340) Replaced ‘isles of Cape Kabar’ with ‘isles off Cape Kabar’ (cf. Section 93 and Section 240). Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’.
(341) Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’. Replaced ‘Jheni’ with ‘Jhani’.
(344) Replaced ‘market-place’ with ‘marketplace’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘market-square’ with ‘market square’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘script: Bir Rabalou — 160 miles’ with ‘script: ‘Bir Rabalou — 160 miles’ ’. Replaced ‘You, too, are’ with ‘You too are’.
(345) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘add 3’ with ‘remember to add 3’.
(346) Replaced ‘crown coin’ with ‘Gold Crown’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘and, with a flick of your heel, you leave’ with ‘and — with a flick of your heel — leave’.
(348) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(349) Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’. Replaced ‘good-night’ with ‘goodnight’.
(350) Replaced ‘Congratulations Grand’ with ‘Congratulations, Grand’. Italicised ‘Lone Wolf New Order’ when referring to the series.
(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced ‘Items or’ with ‘ Items, or’. Replaced ‘falls to 0’ with ‘falls to 0 or below’. Replaced ‘Pick number from’ with ‘Pick a number from the’. Replaced ‘Turn to Combat’ with ‘Turn to the Combat’. Replaced ‘to random number’ with ‘to the random number’. Replaced ‘when ENDURANCE’ with ‘when the ENDURANCE’.
Footnotes
[1] (Dedication) Aung San Suu Kyi is a renowned pro-democracy activist, advocate of non-violence, and prisoner of conscience in Burma.
[2] (New Order Kai Grand Master Disciplines) Given the rules for the previous Lone Wolf books, it seems odd that a Grand Master is only allowed to choose to be proficient in one of the few Weapons listed in the Equipment section. In view of the unprecedented nature of this rule, you might decide that it is acceptable to be proficient in any of the ten Weapons that the Kai typically train to use.
