by Mr Adams
To my new inspiration - my amazing, constant sunbeam of joy!
Mr Adams.
Chocolate was the topic for Term 3 and 4 and the children (aged 7-9) from Fox Class at a primary school in Swindon who wrote poems using their five senses. Some were very literal, some were not. I used a wonderful book called Cloud Busting as inspiration for how you can describe the mundane in interesting ways. The children that wanted to chose their best lines and typed them up in class or at lunchtime. These have been made into an ebook. I hope you enjoy it.
Chocolate: Children’s Poems 2014 edition
Mr S Adams (editor)
Copyright 2014 by Mr S Adams and his Foxes (Year 3 and 4 class)
Charlie
It looks like a creamy, crunchy bar of loveliness fading away.
It feels precious as I tear the amazing wrapping off the delicate, brown bar.
It tastes like a dazzling, gold rainbow appearing in the midnight sky.
Chocolate is a dazzling piece of gold waiting for you from around the corner.
Liam
It tastes like a creamy, magnificent tunnel so the chocolate can slither down to your tiny tummy.
It smells like magnificent chocolate pouring down, making people spin and chill rapidly, so they suck up the lovely chocolate.
It smells like a creamy, smooth cloud floating around the wonderful, amazing sky.
It looks like wonderful, shimmering, lovely, brown smooth melty chocolate. I just want it right now!
Chocolate is lovely, creamy and amazing. No-one can resist it!
Jess E
It tastes like some lovely rose petals trickling down my throat.
It sounds like beautiful, bright bluebirds singing happily high in the sky.
It smells like a wonderful breath of chocolate chips.
It feels like a lovely sugar-bird rushing through my body as quick as a flash of lightning!
Chocolate is a wonderful, magnificent sugar-bird on a lovely chocolate train flowing quickly down my tall, soft, but smooth body!
Nathan
It tastes like a creamy, cool, magnificent, amazing tunnel so chocolate can slither down to your minuscule, tiny tummy.
It smells like a glorious, amazing rose coming towards your tiny tummy.
It looks like a golden treasure because it tastes amazing.
Chocolate is a golden galaxy in your mouth and it melts away slowly.
Aaliyah
It tastes like steaming, melted chocolate flowing slowly in my warm, wet, silky mouth.
It sounds like silent rain flowing slowly in my brilliant pink, wet mouth.
It smells like roses floating under your cute nose.
It looks like creamy, brown, lovely melted chocolate.
Chocolate is like a glorious rainbow melting in my brilliant pink, wet mouth.
Harry
It tastes like a gloopy mouthful in your sticky mouth when you hold it tight.
It is a solid brown lump of happiness.
It smells like a pot of milk in a microwave with caramel in it.
It sounds like a shotgun when you snap it!
It feels like a gloopy, sticky, runny piece of chocolate.
It looks like a brown, rough piece of chocolate.
Chocolate is a dreamy piece of caramel.
Laila's glorious chocolate poem
It tastes like a yummy chocolate chip cupcake - a glorious pony sprinting down your throat.
It sounds like a silky, tabby kitten furiously squeaking and weakly fighting inside your violent stomach trying to get out without hurting itself.
It looks like a melting chocolate train that will go on a journey any moment now.
Chocolate is so nutritious that I just can’t live without it!
Jake
It tastes like hot, melted delight in my mouth.
It sounds like a piece of hot, melted marshmallows gloriously going down my throat.
It smells like a dark, terrific rose rising from a soft, fabulous ground.
It looks like crunchy, dark, bubbly square pieces of happiness.
Chocolate is the wonderful, most excellent thing in the world!
Mya
It tastes like majestic, magical, miracle of happiness floating in your mouth.
It sounds like beautiful bluebirds singing high in the sky.
It smells like a wonderful blow of lovely sweets.
It looks like gorgeous, scrumptious, melted, brown brownies.
It feels like wonderful, soft, glorious hugs from your loved ones.
Chocolate is an absolutely wonderful, magnificent chocolate train going around your tum!
