Rewriting Stella

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by Tuttle, Dan;


  the custody falls to another chap,

  in Tanzania laws were not applied

  such that a kid with means could stage escape.

  In lack of oversight thus lay upside.

  She happened on the only way to scrape

  together means enough to go, the prize –

  still theoretical, in planning phase –

  was using littleness as her disguise

  to bankroll cash a four-cow sale could raise.

  To milk this bovine liquidation meant

  inheritance made Stel the one percent.

  18.

  The distance you could travel on your feet

  was limited, like distance crossed by car.

  She knew that flight belonged to the elite,

  reduced to meaningless the concept ‘far’.

  So flight was where her flighty sights were set,

  to unlock lands dissimilar in ways

  so varied in her mind mere silhouettes

  did stand where human details ought to lay.

  When lightest blue and lime tipped night to dawn

  the path to market glowed with daybreak hue,

  this slightest girl roped cows, set foot to pawn

  all four and thus turn Grandmum’s residue

  from beef to soulful freedom. Shillings bought

  a liberty that circumstance could not.

  19.

  Her steely-girded scaffolding of nerves

  was nearly vibrating upon receipt

  of stacks of cash beyond any reserves

  she’d seen in life to date. In total, meat

  weighed seven hundred kilos, every one

  another bill that flipped from red to black.

  Bereft of standard upbringing, she’d done

  the final needed act to let her pack

  her suitcase for planned rocket launching ride.

  She knew the market’s traders each were marked

  as targets by pickpockets alongside,

  while little kid could move through unremarked.

  That’s why she’d hid the plan. She’d trust Abu,

  but mission best fit her and BLING, just two.

  20.

  In ingot-sized block, shilling volume’s threat

  was possible detection by the thieves.

  She didn’t want the packs to make vedette

  of her on market’s stage. She placed bill sheaves

  in pack that she had stitched four years ago

  that tightly fit on BLING’s small, sturdy back,

  sized rightly so no notes would overflow

  and give the robbers signal to attack.

  Disguising thus her fortunes as but grains,

  the loyal pair made lightly-toed vamoose,

  escaping market and unlocking chains

  that poverty itself could not have loosed.

  Enough was stashed from sale of cows that day

  to free her from the housegirl sobriquet.

  21.

  Across the village, parallel in time,

  discussions in the Abu family home

  hit ever-graver tone: their paradigm

  of farming their prosperity from loam

  was being undermined by climate’s drought.

  Ten huddled in their den, debating what

  small livings they could eke from soil without

  improvements. Other farms to theirs abut,

  to obviate expansion. When the sons

  divided up fixed maize-cropped land between

  themselves, their buffer’d shrink from tens to ones,

  each year of rainfall risking submarine

  security of food as stores recede

  and hungry mouths maintain caloric greed.

  22.

  In all-hands conversations Abu shrank

  to corner, as was customary since

  his birth. In family he was lowest ranked,

  forgotten often. Yet his competence

  was known—he was the quiet, clever boy,

  too young to care to hear opinions from.

  In time he’d find some suitable employ

  and bring home for the family minor sums.

  He neared the age where secondary school

  was imminent. The grades on next exam

  would over every scorecard overrule

  and thus determine where on histogram

  his future academically would lay:

  with luck, he’d have the rightmost dossier.

  23.

  The swirling talk was anxious, voiced in haste

  by heads perturbed. They’d climate havoc wrought

  by once-sequestered carbons now displaced.

  Heat scrambled weather. Normalcy turned not.

  A hundred thousand duplicates – or more –

  had had, were having, or would soon have this

  fraught conversation of what heretofore

  was land without a mass-indebtedness.

  These echoes nationwide came oft from youth,

  whose prevalence had reached historic highs.

  Their futures bent to hydrocarbons’ truth,

  and lacked recourse to fix polluted skies.

  Such problems of the commons, common are.

  But new was their effect felt so afar.

  24.

  Their talk discharged frustrations, much as boil

  produces bubbles freeing water’s gas

  built up from heat-resisting rangetop coil,

  once pushed beyond its standard liquid mass.

  Such periodic venting verbal jabs

  released held ire before it turned revolt.

  They slept, the days progressed, the words left scabs

  on walls and ceilings. Would these pressures jolt

  enough to movement? Civil war? None knew.

  His family’s warmth was taken from it by

  uncertainties from rainfall through to coup.

  Still Ab hoped to his good name gentrify

  once more. The fog of sorrow spread in home

  turned will ablaze when breathed through anger’s ohm.

  25.

  Ensuing days he studied very hard.

  His chin stayed low as if desk’s gravity

  against the greater planet’s therein sparred.

  He longed to fill his mental cavity

  with every ounce of knowledge teachers left

  for pupillary gobbling. Next test

  would be so broad and weighty in its heft

  that every hour was therefore repossessed.

  Adventuring with Stella took a pause

  and naturally, so she could solo mourn.

  He knew when things are heavy she withdraws,

  these times when living feels itself outworn.

  So Grandmum’s secret passing stayed on ‘mum’

  while Abu paper genius did become.

  26.

  He had no photographic memory,

  built recollection talents through sheer will,

  abilities innate in others he

  lacked genes to automatically instill.

  A brain that thought in shapes, however, was

  an ally to his willpower. He would

  mnemonically construct what science does

  suggest is good technique that often should

  augment the memory: he would weave a tale

  with clues from schoolbooks he would need to know.

  Remembering adventuring prevailed

  above rote-memorizing folios.

  His study candle burned through thick of night,

  in hope success would bring escape in flight.

  27.

  To punctuate the dryness of the sky,

  and sate the shriveled souls on plains who prayed,

  a single day of storm swept to supply

  the creeks with flows enough to ankle-wade.

  Deniers on the radio used this

  and recency (a bias humans share)

  to say that Man’
s done naught to shake earth’s bliss

  with CO2—the Right’s clown doctrinaires.

  As rain made waterfall of cloud, Abu

  attached his sensed self-worth to mastery

  of syllabus his country’s retinue

  of ministers, professors, teachers see

  as critical to education for

  the youth, New Tanzania’s guarantors.

  28.

  Curriculum they’d test spanned many parts,

  its subjects ranging English, history,

  mathematics, civics, science (though not arts)

  and writ, of course, in language Swahili.

  That language observation cracks divide

  between the kids who’ve resources and not:

  one-hundred twenty tongues used nationwide

  meant expectation kids were polyglot.

  For tribal language used at home was first,

  and hopefully Swahili’s learned at school

  though learning in a second tongue reversed

  some students’ scores from genius-grade to fool’s.

  To navigate the language gauntlet took

  genetic luck augmenting studied books.

  29.

  His fam’s trek from Aleppo to lands north

  where Bosporus splits Asian politic

  from Europe’s, meant that English was his fourth

  known language, if you count writ Arabic.

  Advantages were many for the mind

  whose training showed that subject, object, verb

  are interchangeable. Which order binds

  words into meanings couldn’t Ab perturb.

  In Turkish, every permutation of

  these parts of speech grammatically correct,

  an object, verb, then subject’s not above

  a verb, then object, subject. Who’d suspect

  agility to modify his speech

  begat a cleverness that none could teach?

  30.

  Linguistic mastery is but one face

  of all intelligences body has.

  Its kinesthetic form allows for grace

  and tonal place births unexpected jazz,

  its numbers side perfected by savants

  allows near-instantly computed sums,

  its introspective side dissects your wants,

  and geospatial side makes true maps’ rhumbs.

  As many kinds of smarts exist as lives

  are postulated for a cat to hold,

  yet placement test would eight of these deny

  and simply ask retell what has been told.

  Evaluations sadly thus exclude

  assessment of a kid’s full aptitude.

  31.

  Young Abu’s brain plasticity was high

  matched by his dread and drive from family’s chat

  about today and futures it implied.

  He’d seen hand-lettered poster, dirtied matte

  hung low beside headmaster’s broken door

  so kids could read it. There would be reward

  from China’s embassy for s/he who scored

  the highest on the test: they’d be offshored

  and sent to Middle Kingdom on exchange,

  overtly building business ties between

  the countries. They were wise to prearrange

  such opportunity to make serene

  their future interactions. Abu’d rest

  not one whit till exams showed he was best.

  32.

  Adventuring as Pioneers once did

  thus paused as heavy waves of pressure rolled

  onto the Abu-Stella shore. Amid

  concern about exams, the boy was holed

  up in the post-class classroom. All meanwhile

  with hidden treasure Stella felt compelled

  to act as normal. Wealth would not restyle

  her Tanzanian life. She, rather, held

  tight-gripped to secret she could buy one pass

  to leave the country’s border. Studies took

  a seat in traincar clearly lower-class:

  that part of her shrank from demands schoolbooks

  could make, despite their prize. She shined when floors

  gave way to soil and dirt of great outdoors.

  33.

  The only clouds that circled fortnights hence,

  semester creeping toward its apogee,

  were mental cirrus strands of penitence

  for Stella, partly burdened, part carefree.

  And yet the winds persisted, circular

  in orbit topping Abu’s thund’ring brain,

  hell-bent on winning prize to be chauffeur

  for kinship’s clan to China’s pending reign.

  Convinced was he of Asian futures nigh

  compounded by the pressures there at home

  that even if this test went all awry

  he’d somehow find a way to China roam.

  His vigor bellowed by willpower’s blast

  grew from need to match future with the past.

  CHAPTER 6

  34.

  Extreme examination day arrived

  posthaste to those whose cramming time felt short,

  as time is wont to do to those deprived

  its surfeit due deadlines of import.

  The questions ranged from relevant to ir-,

  with unexpectedness in every flight,

  yet Abu moved through each like summiteer,

  his sights exclusively on apex height.

  Exhaustion followed pencil’s blunt. The day

  expired at twelve Swahili time, which counts

  from six a.m. as zero all the way

  to dozen, then resets—norms set amount

  of daylight sensically as paradigm

  befitting near-equator’s telling time.

  35.

  In classroom tightly monitored nearby

  young Stella took the same exam, and knew

  her marks were not as low as to deny

  her passing near the bottom of the crew.

  Although she sought to drop from school and class,

  her masquerade that all was right at home

  mandated she not stand out from the mass

  in ways that could have perfect cover blown.

  As twelve-o’clock Swahili time soon struck

  and tinny peal from nearby church bell clanged,

  the pupils turned in tests then ran amok

  around the football grounds: there freedom rang.

  Two months they’d be a-waiting the adults

  to tally, grade, and collate their results.

  36.

  Far-off dry season morning when the list

  of school marks would be pasted publicly

  was quiet, calm, and cool, as if it missed

  the memo that today they’d handpick the

  one lucky student who’d to Beijing go

  to study on behalf of Bongo, ‘brain’

  in word, but also slang here apropos

  as ‘Tanzania’. They’d be preordained

  to future of employment, business, sway

  by knowing Chinese, English, Swahili,

  a conduit to commerce they’d purvey

  across the oceans. Abu saw he’d be

  returned to dignity he’d hoped achieve

  if given chance to this home lengthy leave.

  37.

  The throng of kids was riotous when soon

  the principal arrived with folder thin

  to differentiate the picayune

  mark-getters from those bolder-bent to win.

  The kids who knew their English poor stood mum

  near edges of the teeming crowd, heads low

  in worry that their futures would succumb

  to farming and their peers would them outgrow.

  Most wouldn’t make next grade, the up-or-out

  of school was tragic testament to place

  with resources too scarce to offe
r route

  for all up opportunity’s staircase.

  Joy goosebumps rose when Stella glimpsed the board:

  the bongo of Abu had won reward!

  38.

  The moment that his eyes alighted on

  his name atop the list of pupils, he

  felt like the caterpillar trading brawn

  aground for mothlike wings, cocoon cut free.

  Kaleidoscopic glee cascaded ’tween

  his brain and eyes and arms and legs and knees,

  as if ecstatic waves on trampoline

  were bouncing ever higher toward trapeze.

  He snapped back into body when embrace

  of friendly strength arrested reverie

  and brought his feet to earth from hyperspace.

  A hug from Stella there wrapped every

  fantasia of his future in regret:

  they’d separate adventuring duet.

  39.

  “You did it, Ab, you finally found your launch-

  pad out into the wider world! I’m so

  excited for you,” Stella said, with staunch

  companion’s words said ex officio.

  “Hey, thanks,” Abu replied, his jelly legs

  still searching for their standard steadiness,

  “I don’t know what I’ll do without you.” Egg-

  returning mission felt like eddy this

  quick shift in river flow of time left far

  ago. “Don’t worry,” Stella said, “you’ll find

  so much to do, so much to see bizarre

  you’ll not be interested in what’s behind.”

  He looked at her with eyes that disbelieved,

  excited as he was, he partly grieved.

  40.

  He sought to change the subject, harking back

  to times that ended recently before

  results were posted, wedging open crack

  twixt two kids’ futures not felt heretofore.

  “I saw you made the secondary list.

  You think you’ll go? There’s only so long you

  can hide that Grandmum doesn’t quite exist.”

  But Stella played it cool, deferred in lieu

  of keeping her surprise in pocket. “I’ll

  keep going there, I think. I’ve got some time.”

  She’d prayed Abu would win, planned out her pile

  of cash from selling cows so she’d be primed

  to sneak away from fate as housegirl. She’d

  self-fund as stowaway if he were freed!

  41.

  That night at home Abu’s new life became

  the topic of their conversations. Soon

  a well-dressed Chinese man arrived, proclaimed

  the benefits the government festoons

  upon the winners of this scholarship.

  Ab’s passport, visa, papers, transport, food

  would be arranged with speed. Soon squalor’s grip

  would loose for would-be scion. Grades renewed

 

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