The Lucky One
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hundred yards she stopped, breathless.
She looked around her and saw no other visitors. Nobody.
But she saw one building.
She looked up and down the path again. No, she stood alone.
Then her eyes locked onto the numbers painted on the door of the large wooden cabin, and she let out a scream.
With slow, precise steps she approached the building, then drew her hand over the roughly painted numbers. She took one more look around her to check she was alone, and then, shivering in the chill that had suddenly descended, she opened the door and stepped inside the cabin.
Only a few strands of light come through splits in the wooden walls, but enough to highlight the uneven soil floor littered with dirty grey blankets and discarded clothing. A few wooden-framed beds line the sides, two of them smashed and sprawled like the ends of a broken bridge. On the far side of the room is a gap leading to a corridor. Somehow now more agile, she steps across, and looks along its darkness.
She hears the grind of boot on gritty earth, but the sound stops as she turns round sharply. To her flanks she notices beams of light being broken and hears cruel laughter. But they both halt when she twists and tries to home in on the source.
She runs back to the entrance and pulls on the handle. It does nothing more than rattle in the gloom. She hears a shout from behind her and turns. Now, as dimness gives way to half-light, she cries out and falls back onto the door, feels her spine catching the rough wooden edges but doesn’t care.
In front of her stands an SS guard in full smartly-pressed uniform. He stands a foot taller than her, with short blond hair poking out from under his field-grey cap.
“You!” He grabs her arm and pulls, spinning her away from the door. “Clothes. Shoes. Off!”
For a few seconds her whole body trembles, but she says and does nothing.
He shouts at her again, then points his rifle at her. “Clothes off! Time for your delouse! In the shower!”
Then, slowly, from where she doesn’t know, a feeling of strength washes over her. She stops shaking and stands up straight, with shoulders pressed back and head held high. Her back no longer aches.
“No,” she says quietly.
Momentarily the guard drops his rifle. “You defy the orders of an armed guard?”
She nods. “Oh yes.”
The guard presses the rifle to her throat. “You have you one more chance, Untermensch.”
She snarls, then spits in the guard’s face.
He wipes his face, glancing at the mess on his otherwise pristine uniform, then cocks the trigger.
Susannah mumbles a prayer, then grabs the cold metal muzzle of the rifle and places it in her mouth. She grips the barrel tightly with trembling hands, closes her eyes and swallows, her throat sticky with dryness. She feels every muscle in her body go rigid with fresh, liberating energy.
The next thing she hears is a solid click. Jung takes back his rifle and pulls its bolt back and forth a few times, grunting through clenched teeth. He throws it onto the floor then reaches for his pistol. He searches frantically, but there is no pistol. He curses a few times, then sighs and his body relaxes.
He looks her up and down, and slowly the corners of his lips start to tilt upwards.
He rasps out a laugh. “You’re lucky today, aren’t you?”
She knocks past him and lunges for the door. But he flings a hand out and manages to grasp her arm. She feels his fingers digging into her shrunken muscle fibres but manages to wrench herself free. A stumble and she runs to the door. Wildly shaking hands grab the handle and pull. Now it opens, but Jung thumps his boot against it solidly and it slams shut again.
He grabs her by the throat and pins her to the door. “From now on, you are The Lucky One,” he says. “Now get out!”
The door emits a screech from its hinges as the guard kicks it open. He grabs her by the hair and throws her out. She falls onto the hard concrete path.
Susannah stirred, blinking in the clean sunlight, drawing one leg out from underneath her and slapping her shoe on the ground. With a struggle that brought water to her eyes she pushed down on her better knee, telling the arthritic groan in it to shut up, and slowly pushed herself to her feet. She stumbled around for a moment, the buildings in front of her appearing and disappearing like the numbers of a roulette wheel spinning past. She turned and spotted a man a few yards away, at first fearing him, then somehow confused to see no threat. Yes, he was a gardener busy raking up leaves. She staggered across the path towards him and grabbed his arm, almost pulling him over in her panic.
The man dropped the rake and held her in his arms. “What is it?” he said. “What’s wrong?”
“There’s an SS guard. Please. Please help me.”
He held her to his chest, her tears turning patches of his bib a darker shade of green.
“No, madam. That’s not possible.”
“Yes, yes!” She pointed back. “Over there, in that building.”
The gardener briefly glanced to where her wrinkled hand was cast. “But madam. There are no buildings left here. And definitely no guards.”
“But I…” She turned and gasped.
The gardener removed his gloves and put his hand behind her, gently stroking the top of her back. “I take it you’ve been here before – a long, long time ago – yes?”
Susannah looked again as a solitary wood pigeon landed in the emptiness – the beautiful, natural emptiness. She took a moment to catch her breath.
“Yes,” she said. “I was one of the lucky ones.”
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