by Ian Page
(19) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘delete 4 WILLPOWER points’ with ‘deduct 4 WILLPOWER points’. Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(20) Replaced ‘life-less’ with ‘lifeless’.
(21) Replaced ‘life force’ with ‘life-force’.
(23) Replaced ‘Dolani river’ with ‘Dolani River’. Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘northeast’. Replaced ‘launch long-range’ with ‘launch a long-range’. Replaced ‘lake Dolani’ with ‘Lake Dolani’.
(24) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(25) Replaced ‘1 coil of Rope’ with ‘Coil of Rope’. Replaced ‘1 Sword and Sheath’ with ‘Sword and Sheath’. Replaced ‘1 Spear’ with ‘Spear’. Replaced ‘1 Dagger and Sheath’ with ‘Dagger and Sheath’. Replaced ‘1 Water Bottle’ with ‘Water Bottle’. Replaced ‘1 Tinder box’ with ‘Tinderbox’. Replaced ‘1 Torch counts as 1 Backpack Item’ with ‘each Torch counts as one Backpack Item’.
(28) Replaced ‘evade combat turn’ with ‘evade combat, turn’.
(29) Replaced ‘1 Backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘1 Coil of Rope’ with ‘Coil of Rope’. Replaced ‘1 Water Bottle’ with ‘Water Bottle’. Replaced ‘1 Tinderbox’ with ‘Tinderbox’. Replaced ‘1 Sword’ with ‘Sword’. Replaced ‘1 Masbaté Battle Horn’ with ‘Masbaté Battle Horn’. Replaced ‘high magick of Necromancy’ with ‘Higher Magick of Necromancy’.
(30) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(32) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’.
(33) Replaced ‘pear’ with ‘spear’.
(34) Replaced ‘you. they’ with ‘you. They’. Replaced ‘a pestle and mortar’ with ‘a Pestle and Mortar’. Replaced ‘empty vial’ with ‘empty Vial’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘saltpetre’ with ‘Saltpetre’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘sulphur’ with ‘Sulphur’. Replaced ‘The empty vials’ with ‘The empty Vials’. Replaced ‘Zakutsk flower’ with ‘Zakutsk Flower’. Replaced ‘Demeril root’ with ‘Demeril Root’. Replaced ‘Pestle and Mortar are Backpack Items’ with ‘Pestle and Mortar and the Tinderbox are Backpack Items,’. Replaced ‘the vials’ with ‘the Vials’. Replaced ‘wil’ with ‘will’. Replaced ‘1 Pestle and Mortar’ with ‘Pestle and Mortar’. Replaced ‘1 Tinderbox’ with ‘Tinderbox’. Replaced ‘together, then’ with ‘together, and then’.
(36) Replaced ‘neither you nor Tanith have’ with ‘neither you nor Tanith has’.
(38) Replaced ‘feet away. The home’ with ‘feet away. ‘The home’. Replaced ‘persectuion’ with ‘persecution’. Replaced ‘dematerilize’ with ‘dematerialize’. Replaced ‘warior’ with ‘warrior’. Replaced ‘mightly’ with ‘mighty’. Replaced ‘Ho there Dioka!’ with ‘Ho there, Dioka!’.
(39) Replaced ‘Demon Lord, Agarash’ with ‘Demonlord Agarash’. Replaced ‘If you wish’ with ‘If you have 1 WILLPOWER point and wish’. Replaced ‘sightless and’ with ‘sightless, and’.
(40) Replaced ‘Phinomel pods’ with ‘Phinomel Pods’.
(41) Replaced ‘the speed of your reactions and the fierceness of your gaze paralyses’ with ‘the speed of your reactions and the fierceness of your gaze paralyse’.
(42) Replaced ‘ceatures’ with ‘creatures’. Replaced ‘despatching’ with ‘dispatching’.
(43) Replaced ‘surrrounds’ with ‘surrounds’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Shadakine empire’ with ‘Shadakine Empire’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(47) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘Agarash's’ with ‘Agarashi's’. Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.
(49) Replaced ‘a Special Item, which may’ with ‘an item on your Action Chart. It may’. Replaced ‘or your Herb Pouch’ with ‘or in your Herb Pouch’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘empty vials’ with ‘empty Vials’.
(50) Replaced ‘Intinctively’ with ‘Instinctively’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(57) Made the last sentence a paragraph of its own.
(58) Replaced ‘your power’ with ‘your Power’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Moved the third choice up to the first position. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’. Replaced ‘suffer, and’ with ‘suffer and’.
(60) Replaced ‘Neither you nor Tanith have’ with ‘Neither you nor Tanith has’.
(67) Replaced ‘stone. and’ with ‘stone, and’. Replaced ‘wierd’ with ‘weird’. Replaced ‘toadbeasts’ with ‘toad beasts’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’.
(68) Replaced ‘jubliant’ with ‘jubilant’.
(69) Replaced ‘incandesence’ with ‘incandescence’.
(70) Replaced ‘south east’ with ‘southeast’. Replaced ‘north west’ with ‘northwest’.
(76) Replaced ‘north west’ with ‘northwest’. Replaced ‘potion of Invulnerability, and’ with ‘Potion of Invulnerability and’.
(79) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(81) Replaced ‘Neromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’.
(82) Replaced ‘reptillian’ with ‘reptilian’.
(84) Replaced ‘empty vial’ with ‘empty Vial’.
(86) Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Added a fourth choice ‘If you do not possess any of the above Powers, you must attack the bridge with your Staff; turn to 175.’ (cf. Section 280). Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’.
(88) Replaced ‘If you wish to fire at the remaining Flying Snake with your Staff at long range, and have 2 WILLPOWER points’ with ‘If you have 2 WILLPOWER points and wish to fire at the remaining Flying Snake with your Staff at long range’.
(91) Replaced ‘strenghtening’ with ‘strengthening’. Replaced ‘waves of sorcery’ with ‘waves of Sorcery’. Replaced ‘it's clawed hand’ with ‘its clawed hand’. Replaced ‘vile hunched figure’ with ‘vile, hunched figure’.
(92) Replaced ‘fight, Shasarak, tell me that?’ with ‘fight, Shasarak? Tell me that!’. Replaced ‘Shasarak, and’ with ‘Shasarak and’.
(93) Replaced ‘materialzed’ with ‘materialized’. Replaced ‘falter, then’ with ‘falter, and then’.
(95) Replaced ‘rock or’ with ‘rock, or’.
(97) Replaced ‘semi-circle’ with ‘semicircle’. Replaced ‘beasts, others’ with ‘beasts; others’. Replaced ‘fire, with’ with ‘fire with’.
(98) Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.
(99) Replaced ‘fast flowing’ with ‘fast-flowing’. Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘northeast’.
(103) Replaced ‘while, then’ with ‘while, and then’.
(104) Replaced ‘crowd of demons are’ with ‘crowd of demons is’. Replaced ‘The demon pack forms a large circle around you and stand’ with ‘The demon pack forms a large circle around you and they stand’.
(107) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(108) Replaced ‘enchantment’ with ‘Enchantment’.
(111) Replaced ‘forward, then
’ with ‘forward, and then’.
(113) Replaced ‘magical Power’ with ‘Magical Power’. Replaced ‘long range’ with ‘long-range’.
(115) Replaced each occurrence of ‘powers’ with ‘Powers’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘or wish’ with ‘or if you wish’.
(121) Replaced ‘obscenely, others’ with ‘obscenely; others’.
(123) Replaced ‘first round’ with ‘second round’.
(124) Replaced ‘Elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’. Replaced ‘large, clay’ with ‘large clay’.
(125) Replaced ‘life forces’ with ‘life-forces’.
(128) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.
(129) Replaced ‘life force’ with ‘life-force’. Replaced ‘arch enemy’ with ‘arch-enemy’. Replaced ‘Come … we’ with ‘Come … We’.
(132) Replaced ‘the head of’ with ‘the heads of’.
(134) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(135) Replaced ‘balustraded gallerys’ with ‘balustraded galleries’.
(137) Replaced ‘group of demons are’ with ‘group of demons is’. Moved the illustration that was located in this Section to Section 139, as the event it depicts is described there. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(139) Replaced ‘The horde stop’ with ‘The horde stops’. Moved the illustration that was located in Section 137 here, as the event it depicts is described here. Replaced the illustration caption ‘You hurl a cascading rain of magical fire on to the head of the demonic horde below.’ with ‘Your heart misses a beat as a huge pair of monstrous eyes appear within the flames of the portal.’ Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘pair of monstrous eyes appears’ with ‘pair of monstrous eyes appear’ in both the section and the illustration's caption.
(141) Replaced ‘large, reptilian’ with ‘large reptilian’.
(142) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘them or’ with ‘them, or’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’.
(147) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘small, black’ with ‘small black’.
(153) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘large pair of eyes appears’ with ‘large pair of eyes appear’. Replaced ‘sweeps up the side of the shallow valley in their hundreds and attacks’ with ‘sweep up the side of the shallow valley in their hundreds and attack’.
(154) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’. Replaced ‘death blow’ with ‘death-blow’.
(158) Replaced ‘points, and wish’ with ‘points and wish’.
(159) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Sorcery, and’ with ‘Sorcery and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(161) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.
(162) Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’.
(165) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Astral plane’ with ‘Astral Plane’.
(167) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Demon lord’ with ‘Demonlord’. Replaced ‘Agarash, and’ with ‘Agarash and’. Replaced ‘Moonstone, and’ with ‘Moonstone and’.
(170) Replaced ‘the demon horde are’ with ‘the demon horde is’. Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘out-rider’ with ‘outrider’. Replaced ‘power of Sorcery’ with ‘Power of Sorcery’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Gem, and’ with ‘Gem and’. Replaced ‘Telergy, and’ with ‘Telergy and’. Replaced ‘Enchantment, and’ with ‘Enchantment and’.
(172) Replaced ‘retatively’ with ‘relatively’. Replaced ‘she cries ‘Something’ with ‘she cries. ‘Something’. Replaced ‘moving at speed’ with ‘moving at great speed’.
(175) Replaced ‘lack. (ie 2’ with ‘lack (i.e. 2’.
(176) Replaced ‘Demon lord’ with ‘Demonlord’.
(177) Replaced ‘hop and’ with ‘hop, and’. Replaced ‘Necromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’.
(178) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.
(180) Replaced ‘death blow’ with ‘death-blow’. Replaced ‘points and’ with ‘points, and’. Replaced ‘If you possess 3 WILLPOWER points, and wish to fill the Moonstone with your power and hurl it against the wall’ with ‘If you possess 3 WILLPOWER points, and wish to fill the Moonstone with your power and hurl its power against the wall’ as the original wording made it sound as though the option was to throw the Moonstone rather than its power.
(181) Replaced ‘power of Physiurgy’ with ‘Power of Physiurgy’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.
(182) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.
(184) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.
(187) Replaced ‘blows and’ with ‘blows, and’.
(190) Replaced ‘pain, then’ with ‘pain, and then’.
(191) Replaced ‘for, indeed, I hate you’ with ‘for indeed I hate you’. Replaced ‘breathes, ‘I’ with ‘breathes. ‘I’. Replaced ‘represent; the’ with ‘represent: the’. Replaced ‘eyes; colourless’ with ‘eyes, colourless’. Replaced ‘feeling; like’ with ‘feeling, like’. Replaced ‘powerful, I am’ with ‘powerful; I am’.
(192) Replaced ‘failed, your’ with ‘failed; your’.
(193) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(194) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Sorcery, and’ with ‘Sorcery and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(195) Replaced ‘By the Gods’ with ‘By the gods’.
(196) Replaced ‘power of Sorcery’ with ‘Power of Sorcery’. Replaced ‘forcefield’ with ‘force field’.
(198) Replaced ‘eyeblink’ with ‘eye-blink’.
(199) Replaced ‘past, then’ with ‘past, and then’.
(200) Replaced ‘column reach’ with ‘column reaches’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Necromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’.
(201) Replaced ‘you ashore. I am’ with ‘you ashore. ‘I am’. Replaced ‘host of Masbaté warriors wait’ with ‘host of Masbaté warriors waits’. Replaced ‘fleet-footed wariors’ with ‘fleet-footed warriors’. Replaced ‘shore’, he’ with ‘shore,’ he’.
(202) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’.
(203) Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’.
(204) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘protection, and’ with ‘protection and’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.
(207) Replaced ‘blood and’ with ‘blood, and’.
(208) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Magical Power of Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Higher Magick of Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’. Replaced ‘or wish’ with ‘or if you wish’.
(212) Replaced ‘If you wish to fire a long-range attack with your Wizard's Staff at the leading demon in the formation, and you have 2 WILLPOWER points’ with ‘If you have 2 WILLPOWER points and wish to fire a long-range attack with your Wizard's Staff at the leading demon in the formation’.
(213) Replaced ‘look-out’ with ‘lookout’. Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘northeast’.
(214) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.
(215) Replaced ‘range, with’ wi
th ‘range with’.
(216) Replaced ‘pupiless’ with ‘pupilless’.
(217) Replaced ‘power of Telergy’ with ‘Power of Telergy’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.
(218) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.
(220) Replaced ‘enery’ with ‘energy’.
(221) Replaced ‘plunge into’ with ‘plunges into’.
(224) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.
(225) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(227) Replaced ‘Necromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’.
(229) Replaced ‘Half-way’ with ‘Halfway’.
(230) Replaced ‘Pin-points’ with ‘Pinpoints’.
(233) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.
(234) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘or are’ with ‘or if you are’.
(236) Replaced ‘bloodcurdling’ with ‘blood-curdling’.
(237) Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘power of Necromancy’ with ‘Power of Necromancy’. Replaced ‘power as a Visionary’ with ‘Power as a Visionary’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’.
(241) Replaced ‘a formulae’ with ‘a formula’.
(242) Replaced ‘gasp, Beyond’ with ‘gasp. Beyond’.
(246) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.
(248) Replaced each occurrence of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(254) Replaced ‘Kazim; the’ with ‘Kazim, the’.
(255) Replaced ‘sorcery’ with ‘Sorcery’.
