by Joe Dever
(121) Removed ‘ (or higher)’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘wintery’ with ‘wintry’. Added ‘At the end of combat, reduce your ENDURANCE score by 5 unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your ENDURANCE total to 1 point.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(122) Replaced ‘distented’ with ‘distended’.
(123) Replaced ‘footsteps, then’ with ‘footsteps; then’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(124) Replaced ‘loudly, then’ with ‘loudly, and then’. Replaced ‘his Captain's’ with ‘his captain's’.
(125) Replaced ‘gates, then’ with ‘gates; then’. Replaced ‘slayed’ with ‘slew’.
(126) Replaced ‘Its ends’ with ‘It ends’.
(127) Replaced ‘Tukodaks’ with ‘Tukodak’.
(129) Replaced ‘response, then’ with ‘response; then’. Replaced ‘Nyras Timberwolves’ with ‘Nyras timber wolves’.
(130) Replaced ‘Lead on Captain’ with ‘Lead on, captain’.
(132) Replaced ‘curing’ with ‘Curing’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(134) Replaced ‘Kai-shield’ with ‘Kai-screen’.
(135) Replaced ‘much-needed’ with ‘much needed’. Replaced ‘bowhead’ with ‘stem’.
(136) Removed the quotation marks and dashes around ‘Mind Charm’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘Drakkar lancer’ with ‘Drakkarim lancer’ to reflect standard usage.
(137) Replaced ‘them, then’ with ‘them; then’. Replaced ‘pass, then’ with ‘pass; then’.
(138) Replaced ‘semi-circular’ with ‘semicircular’.
(139) Replaced ‘infra-vision’ with ‘infravision’.
(140) Replaced ‘yourself are’ with ‘you are’. Replaced ‘abroad’ with ‘aboard’. Replaced ‘seiges’ with ‘sieges’. Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘wintery’ with ‘wintry’. Replaced ‘Slovarian plain’ with ‘Slovarian Plain’. Replaced ‘hard pressed’ with ‘hard-pressed’.
(142) Replaced ‘zig-zagging’ with ‘zigzagging’.
(143) Replaced ‘power-word battle spell’ with ‘battle-spell Power Word’. Replaced ‘‘Gloar!’’ with ‘Gloar!’.
(145) Replaced ‘can and, using’ with ‘can, and using’.
(147) Replaced ‘Death Knight Sergeant’ with ‘Death Knight sergeant’.
(148) Replaced ‘suspecting trickery, then slowly you relax; they’ with ‘suspecting trickery. Then slowly you relax; they’. Replaced ‘blow, then’ with ‘blow; then’. Replaced ‘sockets, then’ with ‘sockets; then’.
(149) Replaced ‘succcess’ with ‘success’. Replaced ‘group, then’ with ‘group; then’. Replaced ‘discover that is’ with ‘discover that it is’. Replaced ‘Drakkar officer’ with ‘Drakkarim officer’ to reflect standard usage.
(150) Replaced ‘eyes and, for’ with ‘eyes, and for’. Replaced ‘Drakkar trick’ with ‘Drakkarim trick’ to reflect standard usage. Replaced ‘a Captain’ with ‘a captain’. Replaced ‘Lencian Captain’ with ‘Lencian captain’.
(152) Removed the quotation marks and dashes around ‘Lightning Hand’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(154) Replaced ‘barnlike’ with ‘barn-like’. Replaced ‘to zero’ with ‘to zero or below’. Replaced ‘anvil and’ with ‘anvil, and’.
(155) Replaced ‘hard-worn’ with ‘hard-won’. Replaced ‘t'is’ with ‘ 'tis’. Replaced ‘much-needed’ with ‘much needed’.
(156) Added ‘(if it is currently above this level)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(158) Replaced both occurrences of ‘Kai Alchemy’ with ‘Kai-alchemy’. Changed the choice that requires the rank of Sun Knight to lead to Section 17 instead of Section 86, and changed the other choice to lead to Section 86 instead of Section 17. Section 17 assumes that you've reached the rank of Sun Knight. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘ca, then’ with ‘can; then’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(159) Replaced ‘Prarg, ‘If’ with ‘Prarg. ‘If’. Replaced ‘or you’ with ‘or if you’.
(160) Replaced both occurrences of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘weapon, then’ with ‘weapon, and then’. Replaced ‘Drakkar lancer’ with ‘Drakkarim lancer’ to reflect standard usage.
(162) Replaced ‘wildly, then’ with ‘wildly; then’. Replaced ‘bars, then’ with ‘bars; then’.
(163) Replaced ‘what's wrong!’ with ‘what's wrong?’. Replaced ‘Wake up Captain’ with ‘Wake up, captain’. Replaced ‘who instinctively you’ with ‘which instinctively you’.
(165) Replaced ‘Tozaz forest, then’ with ‘Tozaz Forest; then’.
(166) Replaced ‘The garrison is thrown into a state of near-panic as they try’ with ‘The garrison is thrown into a state of near-panic as it tries’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(167) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(168) Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(169) Replaced ‘Tukodaks’ with ‘Tukodak’.
(170) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Tukodaks’ with ‘Tukodak’.
(171) Replaced ‘Yes. the Drakkarim’ with ‘Yes. The Drakkarim’.
(173) Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’.
(175) Replaced both occurrences of ‘wintery’ with ‘wintry’. Replaced ‘draft’ with ‘draught’. Replaced ‘Pathsmanship, and’ with ‘Pathsmanship and’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.
(176) Replaced ‘curing’ with ‘Curing’. Replaced ‘inate’ with ‘innate’.
(177) Replaced ‘Follow me, I know’ with ‘Follow me; I know’.
(178) Replaced ‘weight, then’ with ‘weight; then’.
(180) Replaced both occurrences of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Moved ‘(Remember to erase three Arrows from your quiver.)’ above the list of choices. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(182) Replaced ‘Death Knight Sergeant’ with ‘Death Knight sergeant’. Replaced ‘or your choose’ with ‘or if you choose’.
(183) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘soldiers and’ with ‘soldiers, and’. Replaced ‘attack, then’ with ‘attack; then’.
(184) Replaced ‘to flight of’ with ‘to a flight of’. Replaced ‘calls, ‘I’ with ‘calls. ‘I’.
(185) Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’. Replaced ‘suspecting trickery, then slowly you relax; they’ with ‘suspecting trickery. Then slowly you relax; they’.
(186) Replaced ‘curing’ with ‘Curing’.
(187) Replaced ‘By the Gods’ with ‘By the gods’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(189) Replaced ‘failing light, and the increasing sightings of Drakkarim patrols, forces’ with ‘failing light — and the increasing sightings of Drakkarim patrols — forces’.
(190) Replaced ‘pulses, directly’ with ‘pulses directly’. Replaced ‘head first’ with ‘head-first’. Replaced ‘end-over-end, then’ with ‘end-over-end; then’.
(192) Removed ‘ or higher’. Inserted ‘, or if you have yet to reach this level of Kai Mastery’ into the last choice. Replaced ‘tree line’ with ‘tree-line’.
(193) Replaced ‘dry and’ with ‘dry, and’.
(197) Replaced ‘The Captain's’ with ‘The captain's’.
(200) Replaced ‘portlcullis’ with ‘portcullis’. Replaced ‘top his’ with ‘top of his’.
(201) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘death, then’ with ‘death; then’. Replac
ed ‘Drakkar officer’ with ‘Drakkarim officer’ to reflect standard usage.
(202) Replaced ‘beach then’ with ‘beach; then’.
(203) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(204) Replaced ‘Drakkar warrior’ with ‘Drakkarim warrior’. Replaced ‘Drakkar guard’ with ‘Drakkarim guard’ to reflect standard usage.
(205) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘speartips’ with ‘spear tips’.
(206) Replaced ‘screaming — “Gaz rekenarim! Gaz rekenarim!”’ with ‘screaming, “Gaz rekenarim! Gaz rekenarim!”’.
(207) Removed the quotation marks around ‘Lightning Hand’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘arm, then’ with ‘arm; then’.
(208) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘who, or what, is’ with ‘who — or what — is’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(211) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(212) Changed the first choice to lead to Section 304 instead of Section 30 (cf. Section 109). If you cannot solve the combination lock in Section 89, you are lead to Section 30 which is its correct role instead of here, in Section 212.
(213) Replaced ‘in cases and’ with ‘in cases, and’.
(215) Replaced ‘needs, then’ with ‘needs; then’.
(217) Replaced ‘mindforce’ with ‘Mindforce’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘or choose’ with ‘or if you choose’.
(219) Replaced ‘hatch, through’ with ‘hatch through’.
(222) Replaced ‘halt, then’ with ‘halt; then’.
(223) Replaced ‘Kai Grand Guardian, or higher’ with ‘Kai Grand Guardian or higher’.
(225) Replaced ‘still and’ with ‘still, and’. Replaced ‘upon an upright’ with ‘up onto’. Replaced ‘yet, as’ with ‘yet as’.
(226) Replaced ‘arrow but, fortunately’ with ‘arrow, but fortunately’.
(227) Replaced ‘Tozaz forest’ with ‘Tozaz Forest’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘it antlered’ with ‘its antlered’. Replaced ‘through forest’ with ‘through the forest’. Replaced ‘tree-line, then’ with ‘tree-line; then’. Replaced ‘pass, then’ with ‘pass, and then’. Replaced ‘snow-cats and’ with ‘snow-cats, and’.
(230) Replaced ‘woodsmoke’ with ‘wood smoke’.
(231) Replaced ‘ramshakle’ with ‘ramshackle’.
(232) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(233) Replaced ‘breath, then’ with ‘breath; then’.
(234) Replaced ‘crusader's’ with ‘crusaders'’. Replaced ‘en route’ with ‘en route’.
(238) Added ‘The weapon bonuses are cumulative (e.g. the Dagger of Vashna, which is a Dagger and a Special Item, will confer a bonus of +1: 2 − 1).’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(240) Replaced ‘louder, then’ with ‘louder; then’.
(241) Replaced ‘arrow, then’ with ‘Arrow, and then’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(242) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘or choose’ with ‘or if you choose’.
(243) Replaced ‘killing bow’ with ‘killing blow’.
(244) Replaced ‘Drakkar Lancer’ with ‘Drakkarim Lancer’ to reflect standard usage.
(245) Replaced ‘pass, then’ with ‘pass; then’.
(248) Replaced ‘losses, then’ with ‘losses; then’. Replaced ‘war horses’ with ‘warhorses’ in the caption for Illustration 13. Replaced ‘armour, and the sheer weight of their attack, smashes’ with ‘armour — and the sheer weight of their attack — smashes’. Replaced ‘The first wave of Drakkarim cavalry slam against the square and are repulsed’ with ‘The first wave of Drakkarim cavalry slams against the square and is repulsed’.
(250) Replaced ‘aid, ‘Stand’ with ‘aid. ‘Stand’.
(253) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Drakkar lancer’ with ‘Drakkarim lancer’ to reflect standard usage.
(254) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’.
(256) Removed the quotation marks around ‘Strength’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(257) Replaced ‘less-enchanting’ with ‘less enchanting’. Replaced ‘Boradon mountains’ with ‘Boradon Mountains’. Replaced ‘Eru, then’ with ‘Eru; then’.
(258) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘Tozaz forest’ with ‘Tozaz Forest’. Replaced ‘fitfully, then’ with ‘fitfully; then’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘The Gods are’ with ‘The gods are’.
(259) Replaced ‘trough, then’ with ‘trough; then’.
(260) Replaced ‘patrol, ‘I'll’ with ‘patrol. ‘I'll’. Replaced ‘Thank the Gods’ with ‘Thank the gods’. Replaced ‘hope, Captain’ with ‘hope, captain’.
(262) Replaced ‘pin-points’ with ‘pinpoints’. Replaced ‘bank and, as’ with ‘bank, and as’.
(264) Replaced ‘stiffen, then’ with ‘stiffen; then’. Replaced ‘t'is’ with ‘ 'tis’. Replaced ‘much-needed’ with ‘much needed’. Replaced ‘says, ‘Never’ with ‘says. ‘Never’.
(266) Replaced ‘loudly, then’ with ‘loudly, and then’. Replaced ‘his Captain's’ with ‘his captain's’.
(268) Replaced ‘Tukodaks’ with ‘Tukodak Guards’.
(269) Replaced ‘inate’ with ‘innate’.
(270) Replaced both occurrences of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘block and, at’ with ‘block, and at’. Replaced ‘arching’ with ‘arcing’. Replaced ‘Drakkar officer’ with ‘Drakkarim officer’ to reflect standard usage.
(272) Replaced ‘battle frenzy’ with ‘battle-frenzy’. Replaced ‘steel and’ with ‘steel, and’. Replaced ‘clang’ with ‘clang’. Replaced ‘Tukodaks’ with ‘Tukodak’ in both the section text and the illustration's caption.
(274) Replaced ‘raining, then’ with ‘raining; then’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’. Replaced ‘or choose’ with ‘or if you choose’.
(275) Replaced ‘cabin’ with ‘camp’.
(277) Replaced ‘Tozaz forest’ with ‘Tozaz Forest’. Replaced ‘cover, then’ with ‘cover, and then’.
(278) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(279) Replaced ‘icy-cold’ with ‘icy cold’. Replaced ‘shudder, then’ with ‘shudder; then’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.
(280) Replaced ‘a trio of Magnaarn's Tukodak bodyguards leap out and seizes’ with ‘a trio of Magnaarn's Tukodak bodyguards leap out and seize’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(281) Replaced ‘motionless, then’ with ‘motionless; then’.
(282) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Huntmastery’. Replaced ‘fungi and’ with ‘fungi, and’.
(284) Replaced ‘t'is’ with ‘ 'tis’. Replaced ‘much-needed’ with ‘much needed’.
(285) Replaced ‘distented’ with ‘distended’. Replaced ‘outstretched and’ with ‘outstretched, and’.
(288) Replaced ‘focus, then’ with ‘focus; then’.
(289) Replaced ‘Weaponmastery, and’ with ‘Weaponmastery and’.
(291) Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.
(294) Replaced ‘length and, upon’ with ‘length, and upon’. Replaced ‘suggestion and, after’ with ‘suggestion, and after’.
(295) Replaced ‘his Captain's’ with ‘his captain's’.
(297) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Removed ‘ (or higher)’. Replaced ‘wintery’ with ‘wintry’. Added ‘At the end of combat, reduce your E
NDURANCE score by 5 unless it causes your score to fall to zero or below, in which case you should reduce your ENDURANCE total to 1 point.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(299) Replaced ‘Action Charts’ with ‘Action Chart’.
(304) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘click, then’ with ‘click; then’.
(305) Replaced ‘inate’ with ‘innate’.
(306) Replaced ‘Lead on Captain’ with ‘Lead on, captain’.
(308) Removed the quotation marks and dashes around ‘Sense Evil’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(309) Replaced ‘timberline’ with ‘timber-line’.
(310) Replaced ‘area and, aided’ with ‘area, and aided’. Replaced ‘larger, unit’ with ‘larger unit’.
(311) Replaced ‘weapon, then’ with ‘weapon, and then’. Replaced ‘Tukodaks’ with ‘Tukodak’.
(312) Replaced ‘but, as’ with ‘but as’.
(313) Replaced ‘face and, within’ with ‘face, and within’.
(314) Replaced ‘further, then’ with ‘further; then’. Replaced ‘them, then’ with ‘them; then’. Replaced ‘back, then’ with ‘back, and then’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(316) Replaced ‘pause, then’ with ‘pause; then’.
(317) Replaced ‘zig-zagging’ with ‘zigzagging’. Replaced ‘tower, then’ with ‘tower; then’.
(319) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘north-westerly’ with ‘northwesterly’.
(320) Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’. Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.
(321) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(322) Replaced ‘oars, then’ with ‘oars; then’.
(323) Replaced ‘momentoes’ with ‘mementoes’. Replaced ‘jadin amulet’ with ‘Jadin Amulet’. Replaced ‘less-noble’ with ‘less noble’. Replaced ‘etc’ with ‘etc.’. Replaced ‘pass, then’ with ‘pass; then’. Replaced ‘jewellery and’ with ‘jewellery, and’. Replaced ‘neckchain’ with ‘neck-chain’. Replaced ‘to check against normal missiles (arrows, bolts, darts, etc.)’ with ‘when trying to avoid normal missiles (e.g. arrows, bolts, darts, etc.) aimed at you’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
