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Empire Builder 3: Breed, Populate, Conquer

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by Dante King


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  [1]SB: Blade Master

  [2]OL: artifact that will bring the various parts of the tower back together.

  [3]SB: Minnie

  [4]SB: Brock

  [5]Note: I removed the parts where Zito flirts with the women. Harem readers really don't like that kind of thing--they are ultra protective over the MC's harem members.

  [6]which tower is it that he own? There was a red, blue and green one? Which are they headed for?

  [SG7]SB: Siphon can be used at a greater distance

  [SG8]Note this in case he has her other spells later in the book

  [SG9]OL

  [10]changed ice to electricity because he knows a lot of types of magic as it (teleketentic, telepathic, lightning)

  [11]Julien had summoned vines here but I changed it for the same reason as above

  [12]So, he took the crystal with him? I thought he just had to leave it there and he could teleport back to it? The tower said teleporting took a lot of magic, whose is it using?

 

 

 


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