Evalene's Number: The Number Series

by Bethany Atazadeh

  Luc stared at the screens anxiously, waiting for the live feed of the helicopter to come online, though the Number One’s Grid couldn’t possibly be shut down so quickly. Staring blankly at the monitors, which currently held the testimonials going on in the next room, his response was delayed, but he finally turned to face her. “Uh, yeah. I haven’t spoken to him in a few hours. He’s been resting. He’s probably wondering what’s going on. I’ll go talk to him and let you know if he wants any visitors.”

  It was almost fifteen minutes before the view from the helicopter blinked onto the screen. The entire room gasped. The streets outside the Number One’s home and the news station were flooded with an ocean of people, their movements rippling like waves. Evalene had never seen so many people in her entire life. Some carried signs that she couldn’t make out from the distance.

  In awe of the crowds, Evalene wondered if this was what Jeremiah had imagined. So many people had responded to the revolutionaries. Evalene wanted to tell him she’d given her testimony, like he’d asked. Or maybe he’d seen it already?

  In the background, Evalene listened to Luc speaking softly with the revolutionaries’ best technicians. “Can you reverse the Number One’s observation equipment?” He was asking about the equipment everyone knew the Number One had developed to watch people in their homes through their televisions.

  “Sure, no problem,” one of them said, and set to work. Evalene had no idea what Luc meant by “reversing” it. Were the people going to watch them? Talk to them?

  Evening fell with talk of victory. Though it would take a few more days for the dust to settle, it felt certain now. They’d won. In the news station, someone discovered a bottle of wine and popped it open to celebrate, passing it around them room. Everyone felt encouraged and relieved.

  Almost the entire city was in the streets, and when the rebels figured out how to use the observation equipment, they discovered this was the case across the entire country. The Regulators weren’t prepared for this level of rioting. They were losing due to the sheer numbers of the people. Regulators ran from the crowds. Rioters pursued. It was becoming a bloodbath.

  At 8pm, their message appeared on every station.

  And the message was simple.

  We. Have. Won.

  But few people were in their homes to see it, and the fighting in the streets continued. Regulators refused to admit defeat, though a few more were joining the revolutionaries besides Sol. Evalene’s message had swayed many higher Numbers, but others detested the idea of losing their status, standing against the rebels instead and fighting anyone who came near their home. It didn’t matter to them that the vast majority of the country wanted change. They liked their lives the way they were.

  Luc radioed the base where the Number One was held hostage in his home. “We need air communication. Send every plane he owns up with the message.” The planes flew simple flags with the same message as the broadcast. We have won. The population saw it in the air as the sun was setting, and cheers could be heard throughout the city.

  Evalene overheard Luc asking if anyone had seen Jeremiah. Quietly, she stood without disturbing Olive or Sol, who were glued to the screens, and followed Luc down the hallway, where he stopped at the door to speak to the guards on rotation.

  It was hard to hear what he was saying without getting too close. She didn’t want them to notice her eavesdropping. But then Luc yelled, “What do you mean he left?”

  “That’s what Zuriel told me. He took the North Road,” the other man’s voice rose too as he replied.

  “But that’s going away from the city! He wouldn’t –” Luc cut off mid-sentence. He stepped to the side with the radio, asking to speak with the rebels at the Number One’s home. “I need to speak with the captain. Is Jeremiah there?” The rebels at the Number One’s home said no. Luc didn’t notice Evalene as she crept closer.

  Luc radioed the company that had taken the Regulator Headquarters, the last to fall, just hours before. “No, he’s not here,” the radio crackled.

  A thought came over Luc that made him close his eyes and sigh. When his eyes opened, he wiped his face clean of all expression.

  Evalene stepped forward. “Did he really leave the city? I thought you said he was injured? You have to send someone after him!”

  Luc’s simmering gaze met hers. His eyes were hooded and furious. Evalene had never seen him like this before. He glanced around to make sure no one was listening. “Jeremiah is just one man. The plan doesn’t change. We move forward.”

  “But Luc –” Evalene tried to argue.

  He cut her off. “The plan doesn’t change,” he repeated. “We move forward.” In a quieter tone, he added, “This is not the time for people to find out their leader is gone. Keep it to yourself, do you understand?”

  Luc strode away from Evalene, calling out commands as he went. “Prepare for the Transition Stage. We’ll need the council members on deck for the 9 o’clock broadcast.” People jumped into action.

  Trailing after Luc, Evalene was still trying to process that Jeremiah was gone as Luc paused in the doorway before entering the filming room. His voice rose above the murmurs, allowing anyone who wanted to know the plan to listen in. “We’ll discuss immediate changes first, followed by more long term plans for Eden. We’ll need to mention the Number One’s trial.” He snapped his fingers in the direction of the tech guys. “Let’s get that Media Response tech up and running – we need this done yesterday! We need to hear from the people –” Was he talking about the reversed observation equipment from earlier?

  Evalene stopped listening.

  Jeremiah had left. By choice?

  Those four words through the radio kept echoing through her head. Took the North Road. Took the North Road.

  Not “was taken.” Not “forced” to take. But took it of his own free will. Abandoned them.

  Why would he do that? Exhausted, Evalene slipped away from the chaos in the newsroom, where Luc continued to give orders, and rejoined Olive and Sol on the far side of the room, reclaiming her chair. They sat silently watching the monitors, eating up the news, while Evalene pondered what her future looked like now.

  She pulled out the necklace her father had given her, playing with it absently. Would he welcome her home or would she be forbidden to return? Sol saw the necklace and gave a low whistle. “Where did you get a protection charm? I’ve only ever seen 3s and above with those! Never any lower, much less a Number 29.” Olive swiveled to stare at the object, forgetting the television.

  Evalene’s gut instinct was to shush Sol before she remembered everyone knew her Number now. She’d told the entire world. Unhooking the little necklace, she pulled the round charm with the inscription in front of her. “This? My father gave it me. It doesn’t mean anything.” She handed it to Olive, who’d already seen it, but still took a moment to admire the delicate leaves on the tree before offering it to Sol.

  But Sol shook his head, refusing to touch it. He stared at the simple jewelry as if it was worth his weight in gold. “It means everything. Deus et natua non nocere,” he quoted the inscription along the side even though it was too small and far away for him to read it. “God and nature, do no harm. A Regulator can’t even touch someone wearing the tree of life.” He gave a short laugh. “Wish we’d seen that when we caught you. Would’ve gotten Control Leader Grausum off my back.”

  Evalene thought she’d never heard Sol speak so many words at once. Was it true? She stared at the simple jewelry. Her father had been looking out for her all along? She thought back to the moment he’d given it to her. He’d been about to tell her what it meant when they’d been interrupted. And then she’d left before he had another opportunity to speak to her. She felt her eyes fill, happy tears for once. It was hard to swallow.

  Olive handed the necklace back to her, and Evalene carefully hooked it back around her neck. She pulled it over the top of her clothes instead of underneath, to display it proudly, wishing she’d been more gratef
ul. For the first time since she’d left, Evalene wanted to go home.

  “Maybe Kevra was right,” she murmured, more to herself than to the others. “Maybe I would’ve been fine after all.”

  Sol leaned over to peer around Olive again at the mention of Kevra’s name. “Brunette? Green eyes? Lot of attitude?”

  Evalene frowned, about to say no, Kevra’s hair was red. Then she recalled how Kevra had dyed it brown. She perked up. “You saw her? Is she okay?” She found herself hoping she was.

  But Sol’s face didn’t match her excitement. He slowly leaned back. “Yeah, I saw her last week. She was apprehended trying to flee the country with a stolen ID that didn’t match her Number. Captains are required to check every passenger. I saw her with a noose around her neck.”

  Olive gasped, clapping both hands over her mouth. She didn’t even know Kevra, but tears sprung to her eyes. Evalene stared at Sol as he watched the television. His lips flattened in an unhappy line.

  Wiping at the tears flowing down her face, Olive said, “That’s horrible.” Evalene agreed, but she wasn’t as surprised as she’d thought she would be. She and Sol both knew what Olive didn’t: that’s just how life worked in Eden. Or, how it had worked. Hopefully things were about to change.

  A thought hit Evalene. “It could’ve been me.”

  Olive and Sol both looked over at her words. Evalene stared into space as she said, “If Kevra hadn’t stolen the ID, it could’ve been me they caught. Me with a noose. I doubt even something as powerful as this,” she touched the necklace, “could protect a fugitive.”

  Sol confirmed it with a nod. “And impersonating a high Number,” he reminded her.

  As they turned back to the monitors, Evalene felt chills run up and down her arms. Had God allowed the pain in order to save her?

  She closed her eyes. There at the computer, with Olive and Sol next to her, Evalene chose to pray, really pray, for the first time in her entire life. She hesitated, not sure where to start.

  She decided to keep it simple. Thank you.

  epilogue

  Six Months Later

  L UC HAD ASKED EVALENE to read a “quick memorandum” on live television, just a week after the revolutionaries had won.

  “I accept my nomination to be a council mem-” halting immediately, Evalene read the rest to herself, jaw dropping. Whipping her eyes up to find Luc in the audience, she glared at him.

  He frantically waved for her to continue. Lifting the script, Evalene reminded herself this was live TV. She ground out the rest of the sentence, “…a council member for Eden, in our new government system, speaking up for my fellow citizens, and helping to create our new, Number-free world.”

  She’d stormed off the air, feeling manipulated. Luc had argued with her for hours. “No other council member voted in had anywhere near your popularity. Everyone wanted the girl in purple. You understand both high and low Numbers – no one else is more qualified.” He spoke in percentages. Annoyed, Evalene thought he was a born politician. But Olive sided with Luc, and when she reminded Evalene that “this was the system of leadership Jeremiah always wanted,” Evalene had been persuaded.

  Now, six months had passed since the revolution ended.

  Since the world started over.

  Since being catapulted into a new life – one she hadn’t necessarily asked for.

  Evalene stepped outside of her new apartment that she shared with Olive, heading in to work. She missed her home and her father, but Ruby was furious with Evalene and all the rebels. As far as Ruby was concerned, some people were more special than others, and this equality business, getting rid of Numbers, was ridiculous. Though Evalene’s father had begged her to come home, Ruby had loudly expressed that she was far from welcome.

  Olive said it would take a while for the higher Numbers to adjust to the changes, to give up certain privileges, and earn others. And truth be told, it would be so much harder to re-learn who she was if she stayed home, with Daeva and Ruby and the others around, constantly reminding her of her past.

  Entering the Capitol building, the previous Number One’s home, Evalene quietly made her way to her office. The idea still boggled her as much as it had on her first day. She, Evalene Vandereth, had an office. She was a council member.

  Though people nodded as she passed, with friendly smiles, she didn’t stop, preferring solitude. That was one of her absolute favorite things about her office. She smiled as she entered her sanctuary – she was in charge of who entered, who spoke to her, and who she worked with. Well, mostly.

  Settling into her desk chair, she touched the letter hidden in her pocket, out of habit. It was wrinkled and soft from carrying it with her everywhere. Jeremiah had never come back. Never even sent word. Had he gone back to the island like he’d said he would, only to find she wasn’t there? She was such a different person now, was it really worth wondering what might have been?

  A knock sounded on the door. Her first meeting.

  “Come in,” she called.

  A short, balding man entered. He wore multi-colored clothes, and his tattoo was covered, yet his entire demeanor, hands folded, head bowed as if in prayer, screamed that he’d been a Priest prior to the revolution. He bowed slightly, honoring her.

  Evalene waved it away immediately, uncomfortable no matter how many times she experienced this. “Please, sit. There’s no need for ceremony. What can I do for you today?”

  He came to sit in the chair across from her desk. “Actually,” he pitched his voice to almost a whisper, the way people had in the past when they were near a television or a potential eavesdropper, “I’ve come with a bit of information, that I believe will help you.”

  Unable to help herself, Evalene leaned in. She had no idea what he was referring to.

  “By all means, go ahead.”

  He leaned in as well, whispering in earnest now. “I knew your mother years ago, during the Bloom Rebellion.”

  Evalene stopped breathing. Her chest tightened. This man had known her mother? Taking a deep breath, she said, “Do you have any information on her death? On where they put her body?” It was almost too much to hope, that she might finally be able to bury her mother, after all these years.

  “I can give you better than that,” he said, smiling now. “During the Bloom Rebellion, we were able to help many refugees escape. Pearl was one of them.” Evalene blinked at him trying to understand what he was saying. Her heartbeat was erratic, blood flowing to her ears, and she almost didn’t hear him as he confirmed what she had never thought was possible. “Your mother is alive.”

  END OF BOOK ONE.

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  PEARL’S NUMBER

  Evalene struggles to adjust to un-Numbered life, along with the rest of Eden. But none of that matters once she learns her mother, Pearl Vandereth, is still alive.

  Smuggled out of the country during a failed rebellion ten years ago, Pearl’s existence shakes Evalene’s whole reality. There’s only one thing she can do: find her.

  Travelling to the Divided States from one territory to the next, Evalene hunts down a cold trail. But she never expects such an advanced nation to be so uncivilized. Between liars sending her in the wrong direction and hostile citizens, Evalene fears she’ll never locate her mother.

  And secretly, she’s terrified Pearl may not want to be found…

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  Acknowledgments

  I’m thankful God gave me the idea for this story, as well as the opportunity to write and publish it. Equally thankful that He blessed me with my sweet husband who has supported my dream, frequently tells me not to give up, and endures having ideas bounced off him regularly. And speaking of bouncing ideas off people, I am beyond grateful for my beta reading group who read the entire book before it was anywhere near the final product: Alissa Jones, Allisa White, Amy M. Olson, Brenda Patik, Carolyn, Danielle Gibson, Jennifer Dehn, Katherine Ley, Kris Cox, Lia Anderson, Mackenzie Claypool, M. L. Everidge, Meghan Morrison, Mike Batty, and Valerie Wheeler. Each one of you impacted this story in a unique, helpful way - thank you! Also, I want to give a huge shout out to everyone who supported me via the Kickstarter that launched this book into reality. Thanks to all of you, this book is now out in the real world instead of just an enormous word document on my computer. THANK YOU a million times, you are amazing! And finally, to YOU, my reader: I appreciate you more than you know and sincerely hope you’ve enjoyed this story. I can’t wait to entertain you with many more in the future!

  “Are not five sparrows sold for two pennies? Yet not one of them is forgotten by God. Indeed, the very hairs of your head are all numbered. Don’t be afraid, you are worth more than many sparrows.”

  -Luke 12:6-7

  Bethany Atazadeh is a Minnesota-based author of YA novels and children’s books. She graduated from Northwestern College in 2008 with a Bachelor of Arts degree in English with a Writing Emphasis. After graduation, she pursued songwriting, recording, and performing with her band, and writing was no longer a priority. But in 2016, she was inspired by the NaNoWriMo challenge to write a novel in 30 days, and since then she hasn’t stopped. She is passionate about God, her husband, writing, music, and dogs, specifically her Corgi puppy, Penny.