Voyage of the Moonstone
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(Levels of New Order Grand Mastership) Replaced ‘Senior (You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Kai Grand Mastery)’ with ‘Senior — (You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Kai Grand Mastery)’. Replaced ‘rank and titles’ with ‘ranks and titles’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Grand Master’ with ‘Kai Grand Master’ in harmony with subsequent books in the series. Replaced ‘New Order adventures’ with ‘New Order adventures’.
(Improved Grand Master Disciplines) Removed the quote marks from around ‘Improved Grand Master Disciplines’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’ with ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’.
(New Order Wisdom) Italicised ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘(Books 1–20) may be advantageous, but it is’ with ‘(Books 1–20) is’ since you may not bring any items or skills over from those books into the New Order series. Replaced ‘New Order adventure’ with ‘New Order adventure’.
(1) Added a paragraph break between ‘power.‘ ’ and ‘He’. Replaced ‘Lord-Lieutenant’ with ‘Lord-lieutenant’. Replaced ‘Cloud Dancer’ with ‘Cloud-dancer’. Replaced ‘far to the west’ with ‘in the far west’.
(2) Replaced ‘tavernkeeper’ with ‘tavern-keeper’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Funtal's Castle’ with ‘Funtal's castle’.
(3) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘ — Lightning Hand — ’ with ‘Lightning Hand’.
(4) Replaced ‘tavernkeeper’ with ‘tavern-keeper’. Replaced ‘hay loft’ with ‘hay-loft’.
(5) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(6) Replaced ‘a giggling swarm of young children come’ with ‘a giggling swarm of young children comes’. Replaced ‘surround’ with ‘surrounds’.
(7) Replaced ‘philtres and’ with ‘philtres, and’. Replaced ‘Potion of Laumspur’ with ‘Potion of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘Potion of Alether’ with ‘Potion of Alether’. Replaced ‘Potion of Mustow’ with ‘Potion of Mustow’. Replaced ‘Potion of Sebaris’ with ‘Potion of Sebaris’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘use only once’ with ‘one use only’.
(8) Replaced ‘If you have no money’ with ‘If you have no money, or if you do not wish to pay’.
(9) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(10) Replaced each occurrence of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(11) Replaced ‘divination’ with ‘Divination’. Replaced ‘drawing your’ with ‘drawing upon your’.
(13) Replaced ‘rigging, then’ with ‘rigging, and then’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(14) Replaced ‘belltower’ with ‘bell-tower’. Replaced ‘above, then’ with ‘above, and then’. Replaced ‘emporiums’ with ‘emporia’.
(16) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘clifftop’ with ‘cliff-top’.
(17) Replaced ‘tavern keeper's’ with ‘tavern-keeper's’.
(20) Replaced ‘heard, ‘the’ with ‘heard. ‘The’. Replaced ‘Quick men!’ with ‘Quick, men!’ Replaced ‘lieutenant, ‘follow me.’ with ‘lieutenant. ‘Follow me!’.
(21) Replaced ‘turbanned’ with ‘turbaned’. Replaced ‘ice-cool’ with ‘ice cool’. Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘battle-cry: ‘For Sommerlund and the Kai!’ as’ with ‘battle-cry — ‘For Sommerlund and the Kai!’ — as’.
(24) Replaced ‘sirs?’ he asks, ‘ 'cause’ with ‘sirs?’ he asks. ‘ 'Cause’.
(26) Replaced ‘agonising’ with ‘agonizing’.
(27) Replaced ‘Suddenly your’ with ‘Suddenly, your’. Replaced ‘Kai Alchemy’ with ‘Kai-alchemy’.
(28) Replaced ‘weather-beaten’ with ‘weatherbeaten’.
(30) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘ — Silence — ’ with ‘Silence’. Replaced ‘dumb-struck’ with ‘dumbstruck’. Replaced ‘The Gods have struck’ with ‘The gods have struck’.
(31) Replaced ‘market-place’ with ‘marketplace’. Replaced ‘rounds, or less’ with ‘rounds or less’. Replaced ‘ rounds (or more)’ with ‘rounds or more’.
(33) Replaced each occurrence of ‘weapons’ with ‘Weapons’.
(35) Replaced ‘meat and biscuit’ with ‘meat and biscuits’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(36) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘ — Power Word’ with ‘Power Word’. Replaced ‘sommersault’ with ‘somersault’. Replaced ‘master Kai’ with ‘Master Kai’. Removed the quotation marks around ‘Gloar!’.
(37) Replaced ‘20 crowns’ with ‘20 Crowns’. Replaced ‘Bardsmanship, and’ with ‘Bardsmanship and’.
(38) Replaced ‘quartz and’ with ‘quartz, and’.
(40) Replaced ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘A old one-legged’ with ‘An old, one-legged’.
(41) Replaced ‘belltower’ with ‘bell-tower’. Replaced ‘come and gather’ with ‘comes and gathers’.
(42) Replaced ‘South-by-south west’ with ‘South by southwest’. Replaced ‘please First Mate’ with ‘please, First Mate’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(47) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘As the remnants of his missile fall to the ground you see your own Arrow strike your enemy in the chest and knock him down.’ with ‘The remnants of his missile fall to the ground.’, since you may only arrive at this section if you do not possess a Bow, or if you choose not to use it (cf. Section 238).
(49) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(53) Replaced ‘itikars’ with ‘Itikars’.
(55) Replaced ‘creature who’ with ‘creature that’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(56) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘well-founded’ with ‘well founded’.
(58) Replaced ‘gold crowns’ with ‘Gold Crowns’.
(59) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘noseguard’ with ‘nose-guard’.
(61) Added a paragraph break between ‘Sommerlund, yes?‘ ’ and ‘You nod’. Replaced ‘master journeyman’ with ‘Master Journeyman’.
(62) Replaced ‘toa-wood’ with ‘toa wood’.
(63) Replaced ‘leader they’ with ‘leader, they’. Replaced ‘isles of Cape Kabar’ with ‘isles off Cape Kabar’ (cf. Section 93 and Section 240).
(64) Added a paragraph break between ‘table.’ and ‘ ‘He’.
(66) Replaced ‘artifact’ with ‘artefact’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Huntmastery and’.
(67) Replaced ‘first mate’ with ‘First Mate’.
(68) Replaced ‘Great Masourn range’ with ‘Great Masourn Range’. Replaced ‘the eagles’ with ‘the Itikars’ in the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(69) Replaced ‘gold crown’ with ‘Gold Crown’.
(71) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(72) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘black furred death’ with ‘black-furred death’.
(73) Deleted ‘at the front of this book’. Replaced ‘road to wish’ with ‘road you wish’. Replaced ‘To the east it reads: KHOR — 100 MILES/BISUTAN — 225 MILES. To the south it reads: KONESHI PASS TO BISUTAN — 125 MILES’ with ‘To the east it reads, ‘Khor — 100 miles / Bisutan — 225 miles’. To the south it reads, ‘Koneshi Pass to Bisutan — 125 miles’ ’. Replaced ‘the great range’ with ‘that great range’.
(74) Replaced ‘creature who’ with ‘creature that’. Replaced ‘march, then’ with ‘march, and then’. Replaced ‘That's him,’ with ‘That's him!’.
(75) Replaced ‘or choose’ with ‘or
if you choose’. Replaced ‘tic, then’ with ‘tick; then’. Replaced ‘dead and unconscious’ with ‘dead or unconscious’.
(76) Replaced ‘razor claws’ with ‘razor-sharp claws’.
(77) Replaced ‘Bavari hills’ with ‘Bavari Hills’. Replaced ‘merchant's goods’ with ‘merchants' goods’. Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’.
(78) Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(81) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(82) Replaced ‘Minutes later the’ with ‘Minutes later, the’. Replaced ‘crowd erupt’ with ‘crowd erupts’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(83) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Bardsmanship, and’ with ‘Bardsmanship and’.
(85) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘ — Levitation — ’ with ‘Levitation’. Replaced ‘effects of spell’ with ‘effects of the spell’.
(88) Added a paragraph break between ‘cut.‘ ’ and ‘As’. Replaced ‘booms Raker, ‘I’ with ‘booms Raker. ‘I’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’.
(89) Replaced ‘battle sorcery’ with ‘battle-sorcery’. Replaced ‘sixth senses detect’ with ‘Sixth Sense detects’. Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’.
(92) Replaced ‘gold crown’ with ‘Gold Crown’. Replaced ‘bedsheet’ with ‘bed sheet’. Replaced ‘Zuath’ with ‘zuath’.
(95) Replaced ‘four of them’ with ‘three of them’. Replaced ‘in Kirlu’ with ‘on Kirlu’.
(96) Replaced ‘southern Magnamund’ with ‘Southern Magnamund’.
(97) Replaced each occurrence of ‘main mast’ with ‘mainmast’. Replaced ‘rigging, then’ with ‘rigging, and then’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(98) Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’.
(100) Replaced ‘try and’ with ‘try to’.
(101) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.
(102) Replaced each occurrence of ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘Magnakai healing’ with ‘Kai healing’.
(103) Replaced ‘every 1’ with ‘each’.
(104) Replaced ‘Sligh and’ with ‘Sligh, and’. Replaced ‘battle wounds’ with ‘battle-wounds’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’. Replaced ‘points).’ with ‘points.)’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(105) Replaced ‘master Kai’ with ‘Master Kai’.
(106) Replaced ‘tavernkeeper’ with ‘tavern-keeper’. Replaced ‘tavernkeeper's’ with ‘tavern-keeper's’. Replaced ‘clomp’ with ‘clomp’.
(107) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘ — Levitation — ’ with ‘Levitation’.
(109) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Jheni’ with ‘Jhani’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(110) Replaced ‘Koneshi mountains’ with ‘Koneshi Mountains’.
(111) Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced ‘belltower’ with ‘bell-tower’. Replaced ‘above, then’ with ‘above, and then’. Replaced ‘half their number search the other alley whilst the remainder stay’ with ‘half their number searches the other alley whilst the remainder stays’.
(113) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.
(115) Replaced ‘Turn to 341’ with ‘Turn to 163’. Section 163 is functionally similar to Section 341, and this brings the formerly orphaned Section 163 back into the game.
(116) Replaced ‘Magician's Guild’ with ‘Magicians' Guild’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘grey haired’ with ‘grey-haired’.
(117) Replaced ‘bales and’ with ‘bales, and’. Replaced ‘no longer of use nor value’ with ‘no longer of any use or value’. Replaced ‘record it on your Action Chart as a Special Item which you carry in your backpack’ with ‘record it on your Action Chart as a Special Item.’ as Special Items are not carried in your Backpack (cf. the Equipment section).
(118) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’.
(121) Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(122) Added a paragraph break between ‘fear.’ and ‘ ‘By’.
(123) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘ — Shield — ’ with ‘Shield’. Replaced ‘As the splintered wood of the missile falls to the ground, you see your own Arrow strike your would-be killer in the chest and knock him down.’ with ‘The splintered wood of the missile falls to the ground.’, since you may only arrive at this section if you do not possess a Bow, or if you choose not to use it (cf. Section 238).
(126) Replaced ‘Sligh and’ with ‘Sligh, and’. Replaced ‘Come Grand’ with ‘Come, Grand’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘steeds, and with’ with ‘steeds, with’.
(127) Replaced ‘chicken and’ with ‘chicken, and’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(128) Replaced ‘emporiums’ with ‘emporia’.
(129) Replaced ‘sea storms’ with ‘sea-storms’. Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘rolling clouds’ with ‘roiling clouds’. Replaced ‘orb, then’ with ‘orb; then’.
(131) Replaced ‘men, ‘there’ with ‘men. ‘There’. Replaced ‘rogue, ‘so’ with ‘rogue. ‘So’. Replaced ‘with this he’ with ‘with this, he’.
(133) Replaced ‘astrology’ with ‘Astrology’.
(134) Replaced ‘Skull and’ with ‘Skull, and’. Replaced ‘details of your’ with ‘details on your’.
(135) Replaced ‘northlander’ with ‘Northlander’.
(136) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘add 3’ with ‘remember to add 3’.
(137) Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’.
(138) Added a paragraph break between ‘you say.’ and ‘He looks’. Replaced ‘crowns’ with ‘Crowns’. Replaced ‘good-night’ with ‘goodnight’.
(139) Replaced ‘look-out’ with ‘lookout’. Replaced ‘a host of screaming warriors are’ with ‘a host of screaming warriors is’.
(140) Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(141) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘ — Lightning Hand — ’ with ‘Lightning Hand’. Replaced ‘ — Levitation — ’ with ‘Levitation’. Replaced ‘itikar’ with ‘Itikar’.
(142) Replaced ‘Scented oil’ with ‘Scented Oil’. Replaced ‘Copper cup’ with ‘Copper Cup’. Replaced ‘Ball of chalk’ with ‘Ball of Chalk’. Replaced ‘horses, then’ with ‘horses, and then’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘mhaktis’ with ‘mhaktis’.
(143) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Replaced ‘accordingly and’ with ‘accordingly, and’.
(146) Replaced ‘market-place’ with ‘marketplace’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘market-square’ with ‘market square’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘script: Bir Rabalou — 160 miles’ with ‘script: ‘Bir Rabalou — 160 miles’ ’. Replaced ‘You, too, are’ with ‘You too are’.
(148) Replaced ‘sea-bass’ with ‘sea bass’.
(149) Replaced each occurrence of ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘and with’ with ‘And with’. Replaced ‘with this he’ with ‘with this, he’.
(150) Repla
ced ‘Welcome my’ with ‘Welcome, my’. Replaced ‘Sesketera, have’ with ‘Sesketera have’. Replaced ‘After having heard’ with ‘Having heard’.
(151) Replaced ‘weapons’ with ‘Weapons’. Replaced ‘Short sword’ with ‘Short Sword’. Added dashes to the list between the items and their cost (cf. Section 62).
(152) Replaced ‘Koneshi mountains’ with ‘Koneshi Mountains’. Replaced ‘an inn and’ with ‘an inn, and’. Replaced ‘accordingly and’ with ‘accordingly, and’. Replaced ‘mhaktis’ with ‘mhaktis’.
(153) Replaced ‘Zuath’ with ‘zuath’.
(154) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(157) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(158) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(159) Replaced ‘few miles to the north’ with ‘few miles to the south’ in line with Section 179. Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountain range’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountain Range’.
(160) Replaced ‘hoofs’ with ‘hooves’.
(161) Replaced ‘message: Rooms — 2 Gold Crowns nightly, and’ with ‘message ‘Rooms — 2 Gold Crowns nightly’, and’.
(163) Replaced ‘Great Masourn mountains’ with ‘Great Masourn Mountains’. Replaced ‘Jheni’ with ‘Jhani’.
(164) Replaced ‘weapons’ with ‘Weapons’.
(165) Replaced ‘falls, then’ with ‘falls, and then’. Replaced ‘crew attempt’ with ‘crew attempts’. Replaced ‘Fernant and’ with ‘Fernant, and’. Replaced ‘he says’ with ‘Fernant says’.
(166) Replaced ‘crowns’ with ‘Crowns’.
(168) Replaced ‘itikars’ with ‘Itikars’.
(170) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘add 3’ with ‘remember to add 3’.
(172) Replaced ‘driftwood and’ with ‘driftwood, and’. Replaced ‘six crowns’ with ‘six Crowns’.