Kalazaron Thaedon: A Sci-Fi Alien Warrior Abduction Invasion Romance (Blue Planet Warriors)

by Maia Starr

  [SBM21]Is this wrong or just to reflect their unusual speech?

  [SBM22]Again. I won’t point it out anymore, though, because I am not sure if it is wrong, or if it is just the language they use. Science Fiction can be difficult with these things.

  [SBM23]I wanted to note that in most cases, I am not using a comma with adjective + human female or females. They seem to use human female or human female slave like it is a noun made up of multiple words, so it would not need the comma.

  [SBM24]I capitalize Blue Mountain Base because it is a title. I am assuming based on the capitalization here that Village is also the formal name of their little town. However, that seems strange. They give real names to other locations. Why would this just be Village?

  [SBM25]I feel like too much time has been spent explaining the base. I am starting to feel bored with it.

  [SBM26]I feel confused as I read on. Is this a place or a person, or both?

  [SBM27]Now it isn’t capitalized. So I am not sure if it is the formal title of their town or not.