550. concerned] conerned D
551. region;] region— C, D
552. machinery] machinery, C, D
553. harboured] harbored C, D
554. like] om. D
555. Mesozoic or Tertiary] mesozoic or tertiary A, B
556. completely] om. A, B [presumably added by HPL in TMS sent to C]
557. us.] us. ¶ Cc
558. 1 a.m.] one a. m., C; 1 a.m., D
559. shew] show A, B, C, D
560. the] that B, Cc
561. Indeed—] Indeed, D
562. closer-mouthed] closer mouthed C, D
563. I;] I: B, C, D
564. saw—. . . saw—] saw . . . saw B; saw, . . . saw, C, D
565. ascent;] ascent— C, D
566. archaean] Archaean D
567. times;] time, Cc
568. formations;] formations, Cc
569. cave-mouths] cave mouths C, D
570. veins;] veins, Cc
571. mountaineers;] mountaineers, Cc
572. super-plateau] superplateau C, D
573. 20,000] twenty thousand C, D
574. reconnoitring,] reconnoitering, C, D
575. programme] program C, D
576. conditions;] conditions, C, D
577. foothills.] foothills. ¶ Cc
578. done.] done. ¶ Cc
579. planes;] planes, C, D
580. use] use, Cc
581. straight-line] straightline D
582. hazards.] hazards. ¶ Cc
583. machinery; and the] machinery. The C, D
584. 27th] 27 A
585. non-stop] non-/stop C; nonstop D
586. rudder] rudder, Cc
587. ice-shelf] ice shelf A, B, C, D
588. plateau.] plateau. ¶ Cc
589. more] more, C, D
590. Sea] Sea, Cc
591. quick.] quick. ¶ Cc
592. us,] us D
593. doctors—indeed,] doctors. ¶ Indeed, Cc
594. rare] rare, C, D
595. unknown.] unknown. ¶ Cc
596. pitch;] pitch, C, D
597. shew] show B, C, D
598. shewing] showing B, C, D
599. super-plateau] superplateau C, D
600. pockets.] pockets. ¶ Cc
601. organising,] organizing, C, D
602. attempted. If] attempted—if Cc
603. may end . . . know.] we know may end the world. C, D
604. ultimate] ultimate, C, D
605. frightful mountain wall.] B; mountains of madness. A, D; awful mountain wall. C [corr. by HPL to mountains of madness.]
606. I am . . . camp.] om. ¶ Cc
607. wind-ravaged] wind ravaged D
608. uneasinesses] uneasiness Cc
609. chaos.] chaos. ¶ Cc
610. time] time, C, D
611. daemon] demon C, D
612. centre] center C, D
613. laceration.] laceration. ¶ Cc
614. archaean] Archaean D
615. wind . . . height] wind, . . . height, C, D
616. odour] odor C, D
617. Those . . . antiquity.] om. C, D
618. found.] found. ¶ Cc
619. provision-chests] provision chests C, D
620. associations.] associations. ¶ Cc
621. incision-subjects,] incision subjects, C, D
622. clues.] clues. ¶ Cc
623. half-impression] half impression C, D
624. snow-prints] snow prints C, D
625. enclosure] inclosure C, D
626. reveal.] reveal. ¶ Cc
627. realised] realized C, D
628. odour] odor C, D
629. analyse.] analyze. ¶ C [paragraphing error corr. by HPL]; analyze. D
630. strown] strewn C, D
631. carefully] carefully, C
632. identity.] identity. ¶ Cc
633. 35] thirty-five C, D
634. spatter-fringed ink-blots] spatter-fringed ink blots C; spatterfringed ink blots D
635. machinery.] machinery. ¶ Cc
636. enigma;] enigma— C, D
637. tent-cloths] tent cloths C, D
638. adaptations.] adaptations. ¶ Cc
639. archaean] Archaean C, D
640. indeed.] indeed. ¶ Cc
641. starfish-head] starfish head C, D
642. archaean] Archaean D
643. sensitised] sensitized C, D
644. Our . . . mad.] om. C, D
645. centreing] centering C, D
646. naive] naïve C, D
647. harboured] harbored C, D
648. completely.] completely. ¶ Cc
649. field-glasses] field glasses B, C, D
650. light.] light. ¶ Cc
651. plainer;] plainer, C, D
652. cave-mouths] cave mouths C, D
653. mountains.] mountains. ¶ Cc
654. bafflement;] bafflement— C, D
655. morning.] morning. ¶ Cc
656. 7 a.m.] seven a. m. C; 7 a.m. D
657. trip; though] flight; however, D
658. nine] 9 A, B
659. non-committal] noncommittal C, D
660. that] the D
661. trans-montane] transmontane C, D
662. collapse.] collapse. ¶ Cc
663. shared.] shared. ¶ Cc
664. unhuman,] un-human, A, B; un-/human, C; inhuman, D
665. immensurable] immeasurable C, D
666. 23,000 or 24,000] twenty-three thousand or twenty-four thousand C, D
667. sea-level.] sea level. C, D
668. 12,000] twelve thousand C, D
669. for . . . conditions] for, . . . conditions, C, D
670. Roerich.] Roerich. ¶ Cc
671. hoary] om. C, D
672. unfavourable] unfavorable C, D
673. cave-mouths] cave mouths C, D
674. field-glass] field glass C, D
675. whilst] while C, D
676. times] times I C, D
677. binoculars.] binoculars. ¶ Cc
678. archaean] Archaean D
679. surface.] surface. ¶ Cc
680. foundation-walls] foundation walls C, D
681. Oxford–Field] Oxford Field D
682. separate . . . blocks] separate cyclopean blocks A, B; separate Cyclopean blocks C, D
683. Carroll.] Carroll. ¶ Cc
684. non-volcanic] nonvolcanic C, D
685. cave-mouths,] cave mouths, C, D
686. another] another, Cc
687. strata.] strata. ¶ Cc
688. patterns.] patterns. ¶ Cc
689. primeval] primaeval B
690. days.] days. ¶ Cc
691. volumes.] volumes. ¶ Cc
692. whistling] whistling, Cc
693. cave-mouths.] cave mouths. C, D
694. 23,570] twenty three thousand five hundred and seventy C; twenty-three thousand, five hundred and seventy D
695. cave-mouths] cave mouths C, D
696. dream-like.] dreamlike. A, B, D; dreamlike. ¶ C [paragraphing error corr. by HPL]
697. half-lost] half lost C, D
698. haze;] haze— C, D
699. volcanism.] volcanism. ¶ Cc
700. vapours] vapors C, D
701. course] course, C, D
702. half thought] half-thought A, B
703. madness.] madness. ¶ Cc
704. eurhythmic] eurythmic A, B, C, D
705. 40 or 50] forty or fifty C, D
706. 20,000] twenty thousand C, D
707. pre-human] prehuman C, D
708. 500,000] five hundred thousand C, D
709. self-defence] self-defense C, D
710. cause.] cause. ¶ Cc
711. ice-dust] ice dust C, D
712. course] course, C, D
713. Mundi . . .] Mundi— C, D
714. World . . .”] World—” C, D
715. spectacle.] spectacle. ¶ Cc
716. daemoniac] demonic C [corr. by HPL to demoniac]; demoniac D
&nbs
p; 717. Abominable Snow-Men] Abominable Snow Men C; abominable Snow Men D
718. pre-human] prehuman C, D
719. “Necronomicon”,] Necronomicon, A, B, C, D
720. star-spawn] star spawn C, D
721. semi-entity.] semientity. C, D
722. extent.] extent. ¶ Cc
723. cave-mouths,] cave mouths, C, D
724. 10 to 150] ten to one hundred and fifty C, D
725. bed-rock] bed rock C, D
726. slate.] slate. ¶ Cc
727. size;] size, C, D
728. honeycomb-arrangements] honeycomb arrangements A, B, C, D
729. structures.] structures. ¶ Cc
730. which] where Cc
731. strown] strewn C, D
732. debris.] débris. C
733. and] and we C, D
734. existed.] existed. ¶ Cc
735. fashion.] fashion. ¶ Cc
736. field-glass] field glass C, D
737. ice-sheet] ice sheet C, D
738. buildings; and] buildings. It C, D
739. Tertiary] tertiary A, B
740. pre-human,] prehuman, C, D
741. equilibrium] equilibrium, D
742. course] course, C, D
743. stead.] stead. ¶ Cc
744. centre] center C, D
745. palaeogean] Palaeogaean C [corr. by HPL to palaeogaean], D
746. today] to-day C
747. pre-human] prehuman C, D
748. Deserta.] Deserta. ¶ Cc
749. titan] Titan A, B, C
750. fuel-tank,] fuel tank, C, D
751. negligible.] negligible. ¶ Cc
752. mountain range,] mountain-range, A, B
753. shewed] showed B, C, D
754. corpse-like] corpselike A, B, C, D
755. ice.] ice. ¶ Cc
756. sinking-place] sinking place C, D
757. range.] range. ¶ Cc
758. semi-remembrances] semiremembrances C
759. squares;] squares, C, D
760. broad] broad, C, D
761. line;] line, C, D
762. Accordingly] Accordingly, Cc, D
763. foot.] foot. ¶ Cc
764. landing-places.] landing places. A, B, C, D
765. next] om. D
766. 12:30 p.m.] twelve thirty p. m. C; 12:30 p.m. D
767. coming down] effecting a landing D
768. snowfield] snow field C, D
769. favourable takeoff] favorable take-off C, D
770. cold.] cold. ¶ Cc
771. specimen-bags,] specimen bags, C, D
772. cave.] cave. ¶ Cc
773. specimen-bag,] specimen bag, C, D
774. hare-and-hounds] hare and hounds C, D
775. trail-blazing.] trail blazing. C, D
776. previously.] previously. ¶ Cc
777. abnormality.] abnormality. ¶ Cc
778. usual;] usual, C, D
779. lot.] lot. ¶ Cc
780. huge] huge, C, D
781. outline] outline, B, Cc
782. able actually] actually able C, D
783. 300] three hundred C, D
784. high;] high, C, D
785. surface.] surface. ¶ Cc
786. bas-reliefs] basreliefs C
787. walls;] walls— C, D
788. top.] top. ¶ Cc
789. whose] of which the C, D
790. effects.] effects. ¶ Cc
791. vapours] vapors C, D
792. towers;] towers, C, D
793. infinite bizarrerie,] om. C, D
794. could] would D
795. truncation; . . . disproportion; . . . enlargements; . . . groups;] truncation, . . . disproportion, . . . enlargements, . . . groups, C, D
796. grotesqueness.] grotesqueness. ¶ Cc
797. ice-sheet,] ice sheet, C, D
798. field-glasses] field glasses C, D
799. shewed] showed B, C, D
800. external] external, C, D
801. dot-groups] dot groups C, D
802. half imagine] half-imagine A, B
803. tower-tops] tower tops C, D
804. perished.] perished. ¶ Cc
805. alleys;] alleys, C, D
806. bridges.] bridges. ¶ Cc
807. dream-phantasy] dream phantasy C; dream fantasy D
808. when . . . moment] when, . . . moment, C, D
809. malignity.] malignity. ¶ Cc
810. labyrinthine] om. C, D
811. retained.] retained. ¶ Cc
812. antiquity.] antiquity. ¶ Cc
813. debris-littered] débris-littered C
814. subtle] subtle, C, D
815. caves] caves, C, D
816. different.] different. ¶ Cc
817. five-pointedness] five-pointedness C, D
818. escape;] escape, C, D
819. Nevertheless] Nevertheless, C, D
820. dead;] dead, C, D
821. programme] program C, D
822. place.] place. ¶ Cc
823. Comanchian] Comanchean Cc
824. age.] Age. C, D
825. 500,000] five hundred thousand C, D
826. hill.] hill. ¶ Cc
827. Mesozoic] mesozoic A, B
828. fan-palms] fan palms C, D
829. Tertiary] tertiary A, B
830. discovered.] discovered. ¶ Cc
831. shewed] showed B, C, D
832. varied;] varied— C, D
833. five-ridged] five-edged C, D
834. of] om. C, D
835. action.] action. ¶ Cc
836. shewed] showed B, C, D
837. were] was Cc
838. floors;] floors, C, D
839. existed.] existed. ¶ Cc
840. debris] débris C
841. us.] us. ¶ Cc
842. plunge;] plunge, C, D
843. realising] realizing C, D
844. hare-and-hound trail-blazing.] hare-and-hound trail blazing. C, D
845. necessary.] necessary. ¶ Cc
846. air-currents] air currents C, D
847. rock-chipping.] rock chipping. C. D
848. connexion] connection C, D
849. ice] ice, Cc, D
850. constructions.] constructions. ¶ Cc
851. crystallise] crystallize C, D
852. en masse] en masse C, D
853. abode?] abode? ¶ Cc
854. ice-sheet] ice sheet B, C, D; om. A [see below]
855. responsible;] responsible, C, D
856. connexion] connection C, D
857. The precise . . . place.] om. A
858. masonry;] masonry— C, D
859. feet.] feet. ¶ Cc
860. outer] uter Cc
861. differences] difference D
862. characterised] characterized C, D
863. us.] us. ¶ Cc
864. 100] one hundred C, D
865. stairs.] stairs. ¶ Cc
866. 20] twenty C
867. height;] height, C, D
868. existed.] existed. ¶ Cc
869. descended . . . story] descended, . . . story, C, D
870. building.] building. ¶ Cc
871. giganticism] gigantism D
872. realised . . . revealed] realized, . . . revealed, C, D
873. sculpture;] sculpture, C, D
874. arabesques.] arabesques. ¶ Cc
875. civilised mastery;] civilized mastery, C, D
876. skilful] skillful C, D
877. intricacy.] intricacy. ¶ Cc
878. five.] five. ¶ Cc
879. formalised] formalized C, D
880. perspective;] perspective, C, D
881. periods.] periods. ¶ Cc
882. cross-section] cross section C, D
883. lines] lines, C, D
884. dot-groups] dot groups C, D
885. half-inch] half inch C, D
886. counter-sunk] countersunk C, D
887. surface.] surface. ¶ Cc
888. colouration] coloration C, D
889.
marvellous] marvelous C, D
890. conventionalisation] conventionalization C, D
891. symbolise] symbolze C, D
892. delineated.] delineated. ¶ Cc
893. recognisable] recognizable C, D
894. subject-matter] subject matter C, D
895. favour] favor C, D
896. considerations.] considerations. ¶ Cc
897. on] of D
898. naive] naïve C, D
899. dados.] dadoes. D
900. room.] room. ¶ Cc
901. Window-frames] Window frames C, D
902. removal.] removal. ¶ Cc
903. moveables] movables C, D
904. tomb-like,] tomblike, C, D
905. debris;] débris, C; debris, D
906. decreased.] decreased. ¶ Cc
907. newly swept] newly-swept A, B
908. ones.] ones. ¶ Cc
909. as in . . . air] as we had seen in other structures, from the air Cc
910. ice-cap,] ice cap, C, D
911. ground level] ground-level A, B
912. us.] us. ¶ Cc
913. naive] naïve C, D
914. dinosaurs] Dinosaurio Cc
915. Europe] America A, B
916. archaean] Archaean D
917. totem-animal.] totem animal. ¶ C [paragraphing error corr. by HPL]; totem animal. D
918. realisation] realization C, D
919. dinosaurs . . . dinosaurs,] Dinosauria . . . Dinosauria, Cc
920. dinosaurs] Dinosauria Cc
921. well-nigh] well nigh C, D
922. years . . .] years— C, D
923. cells . . .] cells— C, D
924. all.] all. ¶ Cc
925. “Necronomicon”] Necronomicon A, B, C, D
926. Great Old Ones] great “Old Ones” C, D
927. fossilised substance . . .] fossilized substance— C, D
928. outlines. . . .] outlines— C, D
929. is of course] is, of course, Cc
930. pre-human] prehuman C; pre-/human D
931. revelation] revelation, Cc
932. three] 3 A
933. research.] research. ¶ Cc
934. features;] features— C, D
935. buildings] buildings, Cc
936. sheet.] sheet. ¶ Cc
937. patchwork] patch-/work B, D
938. pre-terrestrial] preterrestrial C, D
939. story;] story, C, D
940. corridors.] corridors. ¶ Cc
941. 200 . . . 60] two hundred . . . sixty C, D
942. centre] center C, D
943. sort.] sort. ¶ Cc
944. buildings;] buildings, C, D
945. favourites] favorites C, D
946. in] up C, D [in typed over up in B]
947. outline;] outline— C, D
948. made.] made. ¶ Cc
949. breakdown.] breakdown. ¶ Cc
950. eventually] shortly A, B [probably a revision by HPL]
951. high lights] highlights C, D
952. pioneering.] pioneering. ¶ Cc
953. membraneous] membranous C, D
954. curious] curius D
955. energy.] energy. ¶ Cc
956. today,] to-day, C
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