957. to.] to. ¶ Cc
958. mechanised] mechanized C, D
959. organisation] organization C, D
960. specialised] specialized C, D
961. garments] garments, C, D
962. earth-life] earth life C, D
963. methods.] methods. ¶ Cc
964. planets;] planets, C, D
965. moulding] molding C, D
966. community.] community. ¶ Cc
967. “shoggoths”] “Shoggoths” C, D
968. “Necronomicon”,] Necronomicon, A, B, C, D
969. herb.] herb. ¶ Cc
970. synthesised] synthesized C, D
971. shoggoths,] Shoggoths, C, D
972. cell-groups] cell groups C, D
973. purposes;] purposes, C, D
974. shoggoths,] Shoggoths, C, D
975. construction.] construction. ¶ Cc
976. palaeogean] Palaeogaean C [corr. by HPL to palaeogaean]
977. had of course] had, of course, C, D
978. bas-reliefs;] bas-reliefs, C, D
979. shewed] showed B, C, D
980. needle-like] needlelike C
981. discs] disks C, D
982. skyline] sky-line C, D
983. surfaces.] surfaces. ¶ Cc
984. us.] us. ¶ Cc
985. pseudo-feet.] pseudofeet. C, D
986. fan-like] fanlike A, B, D; fan-/like C
987. wings.] wings. ¶ Cc
988. pseudo-feet,] pseudo-/feet, C; pseudofeet, D
989. coördination;] coördination— C, D
990. pressures] pressure C, D
991. sea-bottoms] sea bottoms C, D
992. burial-places] burial places A, B, C, D
993. fact] facts C
994. it.] it. ¶ Cc
995. pteridophytes] pteridophyta, Cc; pteridophytes, D
996. but] but, Cc, D
997. prothalli] prothallia Cc, D
998. colonise.] colonize. ¶ C [paragraphing error corr. by HPL]; colonize. D
999. substances;] substances, D
1000. noted.] noted. ¶ Cc
1001. marvellously;] marvelously, C, D
1002. measures] measures, C, D
1003. heating;] heating— C, D
1004. until at last] until, at last, Cc
1005. sea.] sea. ¶ Cc
1006. had] om. D
1007. conditions;] conditions— C, D
1008. case] case, B, Cc
1009. non-pairing and semi-vegetable] nonpairing and semivegetable C, D
1010. life;] life, C, D
1011. organise] organize C, D
1012. co-dwellers] codwellers C
1013. association.] association. ¶ Cc
1014. centre] center C, D
1015. nature.] nature. ¶ Cc
1016. chairs,] chairs A, B, C, D
1017. cities; cities— C, D
1018. currency.] currency. ¶ Cc
1019. stock-raising] stock raising C, D
1020. colonising] colonizing C, D
1021. expanded.] expanded. ¶ Cc
1022. used;] used, C, D
1023. shoggoths] Shoggoths C, D
1024. life-forms] life forms C, D
1025. life-cells] life cells C, D
1026. Ones] Ones, C, D
1027. exterminated.] exterminated. ¶ Cc
1028. shambling] shambling, C, D
1029. palaeontology.] paleontology. C, D
1030. archaean age,] Archaean Age, C, D
1031. civilisation] civilization C, D
1032. records.] records. ¶ Cc
1033. neighbouring] neighboring C, D
1034. maps,] maps D
1035. passed.] passed. ¶ Cc
1036. shews] shows B, C, D
1037. settlements] settlements, C, D
1038. centres] centers, C, D
1039. sea-bottom.] sea bottom. ¶ C [paragraphing error corr. by HPL]; sea bottom. D
1040. this] the D
1041. Pacific] Pacific, Cc
1042. the] om. D
1043. pre-human] prehuman C; pre-/human D
1044. settlements. ¶ Later] settlements. ¶ Later, Cc
1045. sacred.] sacred. ¶ Cc
1046. centre] center C, D
1047. discoverable] om. C, D
1048. out.] out. ¶ Cc
1049. Then suddenly] Then, suddenly, Cc
1050. planet] planet, Cc
1051. speak.] speak. ¶ Cc
1052. land;] land— C, D
1053. shoggoths] Shoggoths C, D
1054. sea-life] sea life C, D
1055. depended.] depended. ¶ Cc
1056. lost;] lost, C, D
1057. moulding] molding C, D
1058. shoggoths] Shoggoths C, D
1059. suggestion] suggestions D
1060. modelled] modeled C, D
1061. self-modelling] self-modeling C, D
1062. suggestion.] suggeston. D
1063. semi-stable] semistable C, D
1064. it.] it. ¶ Cc
1065. shoggoths] Shoggoths C, D
1066. bubbles;] bubbles, C, D
1067. volume;] volume— C, D
1068. age,] Age, C, D
1069. 150] one hundred and fifty C, D
1070. re-subjugation] resubjugation C, D
1071. shoggoths] Shoggoths C, D
1072. marvellously] marvelously C, D
1073. ages.] ages. ¶ Cc
1074. molecular] molecular and atomic D
1075. shewed] showed B, C, D
1076. shoggoths] Shoggoths C, D
1077. cowboys.] cowboys. ¶ Cc
1078. shoggoths] Shoggoths C, D
1079. shewn] shown B, C, D
1080. encouraged;] encouraged— C, D
1081. age] Age C, D
1082. creatures . . . creatures] creatures—creatures C, D
1083. Abominable Snow-Men.] Abominable Snow Men. ¶ C [paragraphing error corr. by HPL]; abominable Snow Men. D
1084. but . . . preparations] but, . . . preparations, C [second comma removed by HPL], D
1085. race.] race. ¶ Cc
1086. space.] space. ¶ Cc
1087. continuum;] continuum— C, D
1088. non-terrestrial] nonterrestrial C
1089. defeats;] defeats, C, D
1090. cities] ethics Cc [see below]
1091. It is . . . legends.] om. A, B [Presumably a handwritten addition by HPL in the T.Ms. sent to C; hence the curious transcriptional error ethics for cities above.]
1092. confirmed.] confirmed. ¶ Cc
1093. complementary] complimentary Cc
1094. shewing] showing B, C, D
1095. world] om. B, Cc
1096. a] an A, B, C, D
1097. hellish] om. C, D
1098. continent.] continent. ¶ Cc
1099. connexion] connection C, D
1100. shewed] showed B, C, D
1101. age] Age C, D
1102. today] to-day C
1103. the] a still undiscovered A, B
1104. Land.] Land. ¶ Cc
1105. plain.] plain. ¶ Cc
1106. shewed] showed B, C, D
1107. coast-lines] coast lines A, B, C, D
1108. fan-like] fanlike A, B, C, D
1109. membraneous] membranous Cc, D
1110. sea-bottom,] sea bottom, C, D
1111. on.] on. ¶ Cc
1112. centre] center C, D
1113. race;] race— C, D
1114. age] Age C, D
1115. earth-buckling had] earth-buckling—the one which had sundered the antarctic continent and joined Ross and Weddell Seas—had A, B; earth buckling had C, D
1116. distant.] distant. ¶ Cc
1117. sea-bottom.] sea bottom. C, D
1118. recognise] recognize C, D
1119. a] an A, B
1120. were] om. D
1121. crumpling] crumbling D
1122. especial] special Cc
1123. abundance; and on
] abundance. ¶ On Cc
1124. neighbouring] neighboring C, D
1125. region] region, Cc
1126. period of the] om. A, B, Cc
1127. map] map, C
1128. pre-human] prehuman C, D
1129. gave us] set us upon A, B; set upon us Cc
1130. fresh] fresh, C
1131. ancient; and the] ancient. The C, D
1132. “Necronomicon”] Necronomicon A, B, C, D
1133. discuss.] discuss. ¶ Cc
1134. Antarctic Circle.] antarctic circle. C, D
1135. Nature] nature A, B, C, D
1136. honour] honor C, D
1137. trepidation.] trepidation. ¶ Cc
1138. deserted.] deserted. ¶ Cc
1139. earth-buckling] earth buckling C, D
1140. Comanchian age,] Comanchean Age, C [Comanchean corr. by HPL], Comanchian Age, D
1141. 40,000] forty thousand C, D
1142. extended, it appeared,] extended it appeared D
1143. 300] three hundred C, D
1144. vague] vague, C, D
1145. Antarctic Circle] antarctic circle C, D
1146. coast-line] coast line A, B, C, D
1147. mountains;] mountains— C, D
1148. might.] might. ¶ Cc
1149. heaven] Heaven A, B, C, D
1150. pre-human] prehuman C, D
1151. shewed] showed B, C, D
1152. ramparts.] ramparts. ¶ Cc
1153. coast-line.] coast line. B, C, D
1154. history;] history, C, D
1155. explorations.] explorations. ¶ Cc
1156. Tertiary] tertiary A, B
1157. like.] like. ¶ Cc
1158. marvellous] marvelous C, D
1159. spirit. Yet] spirit. ¶ Yet, Cc
1160. sombre] somber C, D
1161. shewn] shown B, C, D
1162. cycad-forests] cycad forests C, D
1163. encountered.] encountered. ¶ Cc
1164. 500,000] five hundred thousand C, D
1165. guesswork;] guesswork, C, D
1166. 500,000] five hundred thousand C, D
1167. shewn] shown B, C, D
1168. travellers] travelers C, D
1169. (the . . . carvings)] —the . . . carvings— C, D
1170. neighbouring] neighboring C, D
1171. subterrene] subterrane Cc
1172. end] end, Cc
1173. neighbouring] neighboring C, D
1174. colonisation.] colonization. C, D
1175. especial region;] special region, C, D
1176. mines.] mines. ¶ Cc
1177. chiselling] chiseling C, D
1178. compiling.] compiling. ¶ Cc
1179. were;] were— C, D
1180. quarter-mile] quarter of a mile C, D
1181. rivercourse,] river course, D
1182. places;] places, C, D
1183. period.] period. ¶ Cc
1184. water;] water, C, D
1185. atrophy.] atrophy. ¶ Cc
1186. shewed] showed B, C, D
1187. scientifically;] scientifically— C, D
1188. methods.] methods. ¶ Cc
1189. shoggoth-tissue] Shoggoth tissue C, D
1190. stone-lifters] stone lifters C, D
1191. mould] mold C, D
1192. sea;] sea, C, D
1193. operations.] operations. ¶ Cc
1194. shoggoths] Shoggoths C, D
1195. marvellous] marvelous C, D
1196. times.] times. ¶ Cc
1197. though of course] though, of course, C
1198. realise] realize C, D
1199. themselves;] themselves, C, D
1200. splendours] splendors C, D
1201. extensive,] extensive D
1202. abandoned.] abandoned. ¶ Cc
1203. recognise] recognize C, D
1204. denudation;] denudation, C, D
1205. moveables,] movables, C, D
1206. dados] dadoes D
1207. coast.] coast. ¶ Cc
1208. recognised,] recognized, C, D
1209. shewed] showed B, C, D
1210. midsummer.] midsummer. ¶ Cc
1211. livestock] live stock C, D
1212. shoggoths] Shoggoths C, D
1213. life;] life— C, D
1214. ice-cap?] ice cap? C, D
1215. shews] shows B, C, D
1216. linger . . . day] linger, . . . day, C, D
1217. waters?] water? ¶ Cc
1218. old;] old, C, D
1219. existence.] existence. ¶ Cc
1220. Tertiary] tertiary A, B
1221. far-away] far-/away C; faraway D
1222. and nature] and nature D
1223. shewed] showed B, C, D
1224. have. . . . Danforth] have— Danforth C; have—Danforth D
1225. Nature.] nature. A, B, C, D
1226. This of course] This, of course, C, D
1227. chiselled] chiseled C, D
1228. traverse.] traverse. ¶ Cc
1229. neighbouring] neighboring C, D
1230. dizzy] dizzy, C, D
1231. above] about C, D
1232. abyss;] abyss, Cc
1233. side adequate] side C; sides D
1234. realised] realized C, D
1235. on . . . flight.] in . . . trip. C, D
1236. It] In Cc
1237. 8 p.m.] eight p. m., C; 8 p.m., D
1238. had not] did not have D
1239. for ever.] forever. A, B, C, D
1240. of our] om. D
1241. use;] use, C, D
1242. more,] more; B; more— C, D
1243. that.] that. ¶ Cc
1244. got] gotten Cc
1245. hasten.] hasten. ¶ Cc, D
1246. it;] it, C, D
1247. notebook] note book D
1248. worst . . . worst,] worse . . . worst D
1249. rock-chipping] rock chipping A, B, C, D
1250. and of course] and, of course, Cc
1251. So at last] So, at last, ¶ Cc
1252. tunnel-mouth] tunnel mouth C, D
1253. shewing] showing B, C, D
1254. sub-glacial] subglacial C
1255. ruins.] ruins. ¶ Cc
1256. ice-rift] ice rift C, D
1257. north.] north. ¶ Cc
1258. rivercourse] river course C, D
1259. southerly] southern C, D
1260. neighbouring] neighboring C, D
1261. ramps,] ramps D
1262. debris,] débris, C
1263. tantalised] tantalized C, D
1264. hand copying] om. C [see below]; hand-copying D
1265. route. Many . . . exploration.] route. ¶ Cc
1266. about] shortly before D
1267. 8:30 p.m.,] eight thirty p. m., C; 8:30 p.m., D
1268. unusual.] unusual. ¶ Cc
1269. reacted] reached C
1270. odour . . . odour] odor . . . odor C, D
1271. course] course, Cc
1272. disaster.] disaster. ¶ Cc
1273. debris.] débris. C
1274. debris] débris C
1275. litter] latter B, Cc
1276. tracks,] tracks D
1277. odour] odor C, D
1278. odour] odor C, D
1279. circumstances . . .] circumstances— C, D
1280. Gedney. . . . For] Gedney— For C; Gedney—for D
1281. odour] odor C, D
1282. burial-place] burial place C, D
1283. recent—] recent D
1284. auto-hypnotism] autohypnotism C, D
1285. or] of C
1286. on.] on. ¶ Cc
1287. alley-turning] alley turning C, D
1288. report] report, C, D
1289. half heard] half-heard A, B
1290. below.] below. ¶ Cc
1291. unknown] unknown, C, D
1292. day] daylight Cc
1293. absolute.] absolute. ¶ Cc
1294. debris] débris C
1295. carven] carved C, D
1296. shewed] showed B, C, D
1297. odour . . . odour] odor . . . odor C, D
1298. debris] débris C
1299. anyone] any one C
1300. crypt] Crypt D
1301. doorway.] doorway. ¶ Cc
1302. however,] however. D
1303. descried] discovered Cc
1304. debris] débris C
1305. disturbed; and we] disturbed. We Cc
1306. implied.] implied. ¶ Cc
1307. levelling] leveling C, D
1308. debris,] débris, C
1309. odour] odor C, D
1310. super-plateau] superplateau C, D
1311. who like us] who, like us, C, D
1312. camp;] camp, Cc
1313. of] of: Cc
1314. tent-cloth,] tent cloth, C, D
1315. tent-heater,] tent heater, C, D
1316. papers.] papers. ¶ Cc
1317. enough,] enough D
1318. pre-human] prehuman C, D
1319. sight . . . city] sight, . . . city, Cc
1320. grave-mounds] grave mounds C, D
1321. accuracy or] accuracy—or Cc
1322. neighbouring] neighboring C, D
1323. glimpsed] glimpse C
1324. tunnel-mouth] tunnel mouth C, D
1325. therein.] therein. ¶ Cc, D
1326. compiled . . been] compiled, . . . been, C, D
1327. this] that D
1328. Half-paralysed] Half paralyzed C, D
1329. course] course, Cc
1330. neighbouring] neighboring C, D
1331. within] within, C, D
1332. vantage-point.] vantage point. ¶ C [paragraphing error corr. by HPL]; vantage point. D
1333. shewn] shown B, C, D
1334. recognised] recognized C, D
1335. figuring . . . earliest] figuring in the A, B; in the Cc
1336. prodigious] prodigious, Cc
1337. above.] above. ¶ Cc
1338. sub-glacial] sub-/glacial C; subglacial D
1339. age] age, Cc
1340. blazing,] blazing Cc
1341. neighbouring] neighboring C, D
1342. cul-de-sac;] cul-de-sac, Cc
1343. corridors.] corridors. ¶ Cc
1344. debris] débris C
1345. or detritus under foot;] underfoot; C, D
1346. and] and, Cc
1347. scent] scent, Cc
1348. course] course, Cc
1349. 9:30 p.m.,] nine-thirty p. m., C; 9:30 p.m., D
1350. a] a long, D
1351. vast] vast, Cc
1352. great.] great. ¶ Cc
1353. arch] arch, Cc
1354. 200] two hundred C, D
1355. strown] strewn D
1356. debris] débris C
1357. splendour] splendor C, D
1358. ziggurats] zikkurats C
1359. sub-glacial] subglacial C, D
1360. level.] level. ¶ Cc
1361. circumstance] circumstances Cc
1362. half-daylight] half daylight C, D
1363. cylinder-bottom] cylinder bottom C, D
1364. feet.] feet. ¶ Cc
1365. recalled] recall D
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