Rewriting Stella

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by Tuttle, Dan;


  “I’m feeling kind of energized,” said she,

  “and not so sure I want to go to bed,”

  with ring on BLING she felt like escapee

  who feared discovery, and so she fled.

  Abu, his system too endorphin-filled,

  was eager to accept recourse from rest.

  “Let’s rid ourselves of unearned fortune. Skilled

  maneuvers in the air, with some finesse

  are all we need to put back Gumi’s ring

  and free our conscience.” “Dog, this just might sting…”

  156.

  Their little world had spun from big one’s speed,

  unknowingly toward darker parts concealed.

  As Pioneers, they’d had to intercede,

  in doing so found others wrongly steal.

  It’s fortunate that Stella hadn’t got

  the ring five years from then, perspectives changed.

  Her wish for cash would complicate the plot

  and find her from her other half estranged.

  Decision still remained: how to conclude

  their perilous possession of the ring

  and whether gallant act would leave them viewed

  as criminals for backyard bushwhacking.

  In later retrospective to be made

  they’d realize that they had both been played.

  CHAPTER 4

  157.

  Contraption scheming gave kids welcome break

  involving lasso mastery and knot.

  BLING had to undergo a minor ache,

  since ring was now immobile in its spot.

  At such an hour dead early in the morn,

  they didn’t need to worry they’d be seen,

  quite helpful when they’d send BLING on airborne

  brisk escapade above the mezzanine.

  From bushes at the base of Gumi’s wall,

  they threw an end of rope up toward the grate

  that covered upstairs window, each shortfall

  was followed by new toss until line draped

  through square atop the metal casing which

  would be the topmost point of their rope hitch.

  158.

  Each having their equipment on their back,

  the precious still-packed items from the trip,

  they lightened load by finishing the snacks

  and checked that BLING’s equipage wasn’t ripped.

  The length of rope they’d threaded up above

  was threaded then again through three belt loops

  sewed onto dog vest’s spine, replica of

  the safety harness from bird’s branch-bound swoops.

  A second cord of greatly smaller girth,

  its thickness thin, akin to but a thread

  was woven through the narrowest of berths:

  forced channel between fur and ring where bled

  a half day’s worth of chafing doggy stride.

  Ring ground right through the fur and into hide.

  159.

  The plan was thus: they’d each take one of two

  ropes strung to dog, the longer one to hoist,

  the second to release with derring-do

  the ring with gravity, (they’d made it moist

  with little bits of suds they’d mixed atop

  Lux bar soap with saliva), hoping force

  of weight, applied tangentially, could pop

  the ring from paw, and leave it at its source

  while freeing BLING to then be lowered down,

  belayed by kids who’d slowly loose the rope.

  They’d be ringleaders (felt a bit like clowns)

  for acrobat untrained in this ‘tightrope’.

  They knew the jerk at apogee’d renew

  sharp pain, so prior to lift they gave him food.

  160.

  With heave and ho, their torpid, groggy beast

  was hoisted in the air by one long line,

  and after two rotations BLING had pieced

  together that no struggle would align

  his body back to standard angles, so

  he slackened, making easy their belay.

  At top, they readied ring-looped rope to tow,

  and hoped to with a tug cause ring to stay

  and hang upon the grate, while dog nosedives

  from battle lost to gravity. In print,

  a diagram of force would propose lives

  were not at risk if they stayed penitent.

  So rush they made most sure to then avoid,

  and with affair’s success were overjoyed.

  161.

  Success came as a tranquilizing surf,

  a balm to consciences disquieted,

  that washed from window downward toward the turf,

  upon return of ring. “This tie, it slid

  straight off directly on our first strong yank!”

  said Stella with incredulous esteem.

  Abu’s entire thin stature raised with thanks,

  his back more straight and eyes like Stel’s agleam.

  Their day had been so tirelessly packed

  with reactivity that compliments

  were first to, from the schedule, subtract,

  as minds reacted to the romp’s events.

  Through smile upon his face rose great fatigue,

  all justified through praise from his colleague.

  162.

  “I’m tired,” Stella said, “now that it’s done,”

  her body in a wilt that showed the hour,

  and so they packed their things to go. “Wait, one

  more thing is left before home, bucket shower,”

  replied Abu, who quickly cut the patch

  from off his rucksack’s side, the elephant

  on pogo stick, and left it on the latch,

  explaining, “now they’ll likely tell it meant

  behind the ruse were some anonymous

  do-gooders. Needn’t know we’re Pioneers.”

  “I guess that pogo sticks aren’t ominous,

  okay.” “We’ll build our brand!” “Fine, do it.” Fears

  they’d be found out were still inside her head;

  Ab’s obstinance made Stel give in instead.

  163.

  Since night had long since turned to dawn’s sunrise

  they snuck their ways back home and into bed,

  pretending that was true what would surmise

  a parent: that they’d slept at their homesteads.

  The energy the trek to banyan grove

  had taken from their bodies took recharge.

  So both kids huddled near the hearth and stove

  until through calm of homeliness did barge

  the hunger to again breathe deeply air

  that circulates so freely out of doors,

  by walls and vents and windows unimpaired,

  that vim and zeal to bodies oft restores.

  In all, they passed three days reclusively

  before they felt themselves conclusively.

  164.

  The break had given each some time to think,

  or rather, to let percolate upstairs

  the musings taking longer time to sink

  from memory clouds to conscious thoroughfares.

  A hundred flashes, tedium to thrill,

  swept through young Stella’s hibernating mind,

  from wonder at the wealth of chlorophyll

  to fears that ants outnumbered humankind.

  The edge of thought she hadn’t quite yet grasped

  attempted to decrypt gist of past week,

  a soapstone mystery that logic rasped

  in vain attempts to find its real physique.

  All conscious tries were clumsy stabs to hew

  the stone to form intrinsically untrue.

  165.

  Hiatus long between when Stella talked

  with Abu, she discovered something odd:

  they’d yet to
figure out how ring had walked

  from Gumi’s walled-in, yarded esplanade

  to deep inside a forest, up a tree,

  and out a branch, and into nest. “The thief !”

  she cried, as if no other nominee

  could possibly have caused such complex grief.

  When under tree they subsequently met,

  she voiced to Ab her theory, bulletproof,

  that figure camo-clad hopped parapet

  at Gumi’s, scaled the wall to nearly roof,

  then reached with evil hand through metal grille

  and took the ring from off the windowsill.

  166.

  “You’re right, I think, that there’s a chance it went

  exactly as described, but I’m still mixed

  on why he wouldn’t, after the ascent,

  have jetted to a pawn shop, right then fixed

  the worry of his seizure and arrest

  and made his money straightaway,” Abu

  replied. Then Stella saw she had suppressed

  (as typical when in the truth’s pursuit)

  the thought she might be wrong. She’d advocate

  exclusively for how the facts fit her

  hypothesized reality. Dictate

  it wasn’t, simply first try to infer

  the real: until all facts aligned to prove

  veracity, some healthy doubt behooved.

  167.

  “So what,” she said, “do you propose went on

  to move the ring from Gumi’s to the nest?”

  their dedication to the dénouement

  like alchemists who seek their alkahest.

  “Let’s take the things we know and build a case,

  with only all the pieces that we’ve sensed

  ourselves,” Abu proposed, “so we’ll retrace

  exclusively the facts that have defense.”

  And so they laid out facts, as were perceived

  throughout the journey, from the day the globe

  began the Pioneers, their preconceived

  ideas on days’ undertones disrobed.

  Through airing only what they’d seen and when,

  they cut through falsities of minds of men.

  168.

  Ten minutes passed, then thirty, fifty, more,

  the sun crept forth two-thirds one radian,

  the facts and facts alone to air outpoured

  at speed eclipsing pace circadian.

  With recollected records, self-contained,

  they orally arranged the token bits

  in clumps that left yet fewer unexplained

  loose ends. From time to time they’d stand, stage skits

  to dis or prove contentious points, pretend

  that they were the antagonist, with props,

  they laughed as shirt-stuffed leaves caused to distend

  Abu’s fake Anton belly, threw fake chalks

  of sand to foil the bird, each spoof but guess

  to make a might more sense of story’s mess.

  169.

  “We’ve looked at seven stories,” Stella summed,

  “disproven four, and doubt another two.”

  They’d undeniably with gusto plumbed

  all caverns of experience and clue.

  “The one that’s left,” Abu said, “doesn’t make

  a lot of sense unless you think that birds

  are subject to, as beasts, human heartache

  and have, at least,” he paused to unmince words,

  “a mild ability to reason.” “Why

  would such a thing surprise you in the least?

  It’s obvious people oversupply

  opinions creatures are just food for feasts,

  atop rich checkered tablecloths.” “Yeah, this

  whole act was bird’s is my hypothesis!

  170.

  The bird we’ve noticed cruising ’round the town,

  I’ve seen it roost,” Abu began, “near school.

  At least, I saw a bit of colored down

  that looked a fit: long, striped with minuscule

  metallic flecks.” With this, his listener

  leaned forward, curious to hear what’s next.

  “It must have sat on grate, where glistened, per

  Miss Gumi’s recollection, ring. Perplexed,

  the bird from there would see both shiny loop

  and one domestic basketful, right there,

  of eggs, its very own! From its own coop!

  It would have been enraged, the sight unfair

  of mother’s eyes through ornate iron rung

  there gawking at her own imprisoned young.

  171.

  Its talons, as you saw, were small enough

  to squeeze through hollows in the lattices.

  This theory isn’t purely off-the-cuff,

  I’ve thought a while,” he said, on status his

  quick mind was dwelling, wond’ring if he’d solved

  their ever-overarching quandary,

  if nature-centric narrative resolved

  their riddle. Stel as statue pondering

  looked like Rodin’s, her Thinker brow furrowed

  in thorny thought. Then eyes flipped up toward sky.

  Retreats into her mind looked thus, her code

  to onlookers to not preoccupy

  themselves with her, for outwardly her freeze

  belied a mind expanding boundaries.

  172.

  Hiatus in the conversation was

  a momentary, welcomed break. Abu’s

  two temples damped with anxious sweat. (Because

  he hoped his logic wouldn’t be refused?)

  The air was tranquil, windless, waveless, still,

  the jostling of its million molecules

  too small to cause evaporative chill

  of forehead perspiration’s tiny pools.

  He noticed, soon, a shift in Stella’s stance,

  a weight rebalanced on a single hip

  away from posed at-ease. She looked, perchance,

  prepared to speak, with twitching upper lip.

  “It’s odd, and wouldn’t happen everyday.

  Let’s spin it in the chronicles that way.”

  173.

  The shroud of doubt that hung between them, fog

  that cut them off from outer world while hung

  in heated back-and-forth of dialogue,

  dispersed when Stella’s words rolled off her tongue.

  Uncertainty, as was perceived to cease,

  left ghost of an unwished-for visitor:

  conclusion where before lived just caprice,

  two bailiffs where once stood inquisitors.

  The pulse of joy at twisting thread of truth

  was sharp, and both kids felt upwelling pride.

  And yet, their verve to find, unearth and sleuth

  was now, without a known demand, supplied.

  Just then, once truth revealed its pyrite sheen,

  could they find meaning in their ends and means.

  174.

  Maturing, for each kid, took different form.

  While Stella had Grandmum once evenings came,

  Abu was back as one of eight, in swarm

  of family’s flock he once again was name

  and nothing more, a mouth to feed, who left

  for stretches at a time without account.

  He felt amid his family bit bereft

  of own identity, sense tantamount

  to anonymity he’d felt at school.

  He segregated self away from peers,

  kept public actions sized to minuscule.

  He hoped that life would pay him in arrears

  in future gains from studying today,

  between adventures showing better way.

  175.

  That’s not to say that Abu walked as ghost,

  as haunted, surveying with discontent.

  He rather took his strengt
h from his repose,

  accepted rather than misrepresent

  himself. No bitter edge enclosed his view,

  he more began to know he much preferred

  to keep his dear companions close, but few.

  This shift from sinking socially as nerd

  at school uplifted his relationships

  with other children, who could tell the fun

  they poked at him in pure predation, quips

  and taunts had dropped from great effect to none.

  Alongside Stella he desired to shift

  toward Pioneers from school, toward life adrift.

  176.

  His willful separation, like a match

  transmits its fire to brethren in the book,

  crept into Stella, who slowly detached

  as well from mates’ historic dirty looks.

  They stayed as separated from the crowd

  as any outside observations past

  or present would have seen. But now endowed

  with self-reliance, they’d upgraded caste.

  They went from lowest on the totem pole

  to missing from the pole entirely,

  absent from all the cool kids’ mind control

  that turned their toady classmates liars. Free,

  they sought only discovery and mirth,

  and had to prove to only selves their worth.

  177.

  “Miss Gumi never said a thing,” Abu

  lamented once near first-found precipice.

  “That’s good, though. Single mark of our debut

  was pogo patch, no names. The rest of this

  is nothing we want out.” “Think fairytales

  were ever narratives begun like this?

  A man’s experience on hairy trails

  that spins up orally to bigger fish?”

  “Nah. People turn to print now. That stuff’s lost.”

  They watched a dragonfly buzz off the cliff,

  against the breeze, in paths that crissed and crossed,

  to trace it would reveal a hieroglyph

  reminding Ab of home and history—

  at least, the points that weren’t still mystery.

  178.

  “I know when I was four, I thought I’d be

  atop the world when finally I reached eight,”

  said Stella, legs hung off extremity,

  “and now I’m there. Will I now overrate

  the possibilities of twelve? I don’t

  exactly have command of this whole town,

  but maybe what I want has changed.” “Mine won’t,”

  replied Abu with certainty. “Renown

  befits a sheikh, and sheikh I’ll someday be.”

  Not knowing what to say, she looked instead

  into his face and saw a galaxy,

  its far-flung stars stampeded straight ahead,

  propelled by detonation since their birth,

 

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